Joani, thanks for the note on "MacGowans." Only in my generation did we Scots Irish make it as far west as possible in the Western World. Next step... scuba lessons.
Re: Amends One of the problems of being a therapist is that everyone wants free therapy and no one wants to listen to you and you forget how to talk about yourself. That's why writing is so great. It's me, me, me, me.
Thanks for your ADHD comment. The thing is, there are poor, quiet, daydreaming little girls with real ADD without the H who are completely ignored because they didn't cause trouble. Then again, their daydreams might be more valuable than what they are learning in class.
Hi, JP. I really appreciate your read and fav of "The Swiss Lunch". Nice to hear from you again. I look forward to catching-up on some of your latest work.
Joanie, I wasn't expecting the dark twist in Lemony Snickers, either, altho it just sort of came out in a serendipitous way. The coincidences in appearance and manner are real, but "my" cowboy would be in his late '80s or early '90s by now if living. Plus, I'm thinking now he might have been simply having fun with us boys and was really on his way to the local stockyards a few miles down the road. My parents were concerned, tho, because it did (and does now) seem awfully strange for a grown man driving a truck loaded with cattle to stop at a child's lemonade stand on a busy highway. Thanks for reading!
Well, I can't re-find you on Facebook. But if I could I would correct whatever unhitched the link. My name is hard to locate there so if you send me whatever name you use on FB, we can fix this jrobison@fgcu.edu
Thanks, Joani for your comments on "The Good Cancer." A subject that is much easier to write about now. You read (and kindly edited) the next story in the series. That longer story is out there on the slush pile tour.
It was an abusive setting for clinicians. It completely burned me out and I partially attribute my resultant brain injury that I have to live with for the next year to the job. Leaving it was the best thing that's ever happened to me.
Thank you for your thoughts on Hair. I'm sure the girls adored you. I'm surprised they wanted you to share your thoughts with the rabbis as they were well schooled in the bottom line. That seems odd to me. They thought you were a fairy godmother who could transform the rabbis into princes.
Thanks, Joani, for the comments and fave on three more of my little war stories. Word limitations are usually good for me. Things tend to get stronger as I take words out. Best, B
Hi Joani! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my post office piece. I really appreciate it. Ironically enough I've just spent the past 45 minutes online and in voicemail Hell talking to robots and running in circles trying to track a package that shipped 2 weeks ago. This stuff never ends ~ drives me wild! This is why we drink indeed!
...Joani, your comment just completely AND TOTALLY blew me away!!! I am so shocked (in a Fabulous way) by your reaction. There's something about that piece that just won't stop bugging me. Thank you! X
Thanks, Joani, for commenting on 'May 1506.' My last name first appears in the New World in the West Indies. Likely George was involved in that trade...
Thanx for dropping by to read and comment on "For The Raven". Making it new ~ Isn't THAT the truth? I totally agree! I'm just "playing" at being sardonic. I don't really believe it! ;-)
Joani, I'm dead chuffed, always feel honoured when you comment, and I wiki'd Agbabi, must investigate further, she was born same time/place as me + similar influences. Thanks so much for pointing her out. XX
Joani, thanks for reading and faving The Accidental Arsonist. And I am getting my act together on 3 questions--between sinus infection, bronchitis, and 'spring break' I have been nailed to the wall. Peace...
Joani, I could have sworn it was Richard Cranshaw who wrote that line about seeing eternity, but it was Henry Vaughan! LONG time since grad school! Thanks for faving the poem anyway!
Hi Joani, thanks for reading Cactus and thanks for the comment, too, although I must confess....I'm not really sure what it meant :) Doesn't matter - you took the time to read and comment and I really appreciate that. fos.
Hi Joani!
Thanks for your comment and your own reminiscence about childhood. It made me smile!
Was the digging a hole to China a Wisconsin thing, or a mid century American thing? At this point in my life I'm lucky if I can even hit a golf ball- that is sitting perfectly motionless - offered up on a big, fat tee in brilliant green grass!
Hi Joani, thanks for reading my bicycle story. I also have the feeling, when I read it, that it could've gone another way. I kinda like that. Congrats on your piece in AA - I love that journal. fos.
Haha! Thanks Joani! Semi-colons - yeah - run on sentences and diarrhea of the mouth breed semi-colons. Kurt's right though. I've had some college, too much college and now I'm at the stage of life where i'm actually trying to "unschool myself" in some areas. Thanks again!
Hi Joani,
Thank you so much for taking the time to ride along with me for a little while on this madcap farce and make comments. I appreciate your company as I digress into silliness. Ready or not, there's more to come. The Woman in the Wet Raincoat and much much more. It's all in fun!
Your kind comments on "Do you remember..." are much appreciated. I think it needs a bit more work, but think I'm on the right track. Can't wait to get your book!
Joani,
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on "This Is How It Is" I value it and appreciate it very, much. I really appreciate your observation about the line breaks. Thanks for sharing your eagle eye on that! :-)
mgm
Thanks for reading "Dead Man Sleeping" and for the comment. I found one of the typos you were talking about. If you can point out any others, it would be greatly appreciated!
Wanted to thank you so much for your support and for the kind comments on "Immiscibility." You have no idea how important the feedback is for a fledgeling writer like moi. So appreciated! You are a wonderful, supportive presence on the site.
Haha! It was Benadryl - horrible stuff - kinda think I would have preferred whatever Coleridge used to dip into! Thanks for dropping in and reading! Amazing what an unexpected bug bite can make a man do! ;-)
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on "That Night." I wanted the reader to have to work a bit here, just as the voice has to struggle with the mixed emotions. When I first wrote this, my writer's group furrowed their brows and insisted I change it to first person. That was my first experience with listening to my own instincts and, 3 years on, I still love the piece as it stands. I've been trusting my gut ever since. Thanks for your support - every little bit helps!
Hey, I just came across "May you live in interesting times" on the Non-fiction group page. Wow. It was, to me, your Steely Dan's Gaucho - took me back to my road trip from PA to Ft Lauderdale to 'experience life' and ended up being stalked by New Orleans musicians and searching for lost friends all night on the beach. Sigh. Was that really my life...so long ago on the other side of the world.
You captured the scene beautifully with grit and class and brought a lil ol' tear to my eye. Funny how we can be nostalgic for the complete insanity of our youths.
Anyway, thanks for that. I'm glad I found your piece.
Thanks for reading "New Song of Innocence and Experience" and your fun comment. The man I know ASKED for his Kindle. How could I withhold? I'll be loyal to books, after all I've been in love with books for longer than most people I know have been alive.
Hey! Thanks for hanging in there with me through rather dreary telling of "No Place for Unicorns or Teddy Bears" One of many jobs that sent me packing back to school. As I look back at some of my recent writing, I think I must be performing some kind of exorcism of the many weird jobs I had in my younger years, but it seems to be reviving memories for other people along the way. I greatly appreciate your comment!
Hi again JP
Call it synchronicity, but I just stumbled across Connotion press- only yesterday - and quite by accident! I love many of the same authors you do - including Cormac McCarthy and Richard Ford who both have a command of the language that make me want to dance and weep! Be back soon!
MGM
Hi JP,
Nice to meet ya! Thanks so much for taking the time to read Conversation From a Lunch Counter and to post a comment. Much gratitude and appreciation! I'm really looking forward to reading your work! Be back soon!
mgm
Thanks, Joani, for reading, commenting on, and faving "Magritte." Your comment about the imagery I found fascinating. Wrote the poem in my mid 20s. Perhaps that explains the difference you find in the poetry of "me then and me now." Appreciate your insight very much. Thank you.
Thanks for your wonderful comment on "Escape Literature." No need to read Nora Roberts. Jane Austen or the Brontës address the same issues. As does Susan Griffin. How masculine mentality always wants to rarify itself right out of existence, and feminine mentality wants to relate to existence as is, grit, hormones, and all, but then ends up subject to "compassionate contempt" (a phrase I wish I had coined, but didn't, it's from Betty Friedan's book on aging).
Thank you JP for your absolutely delightful review, it really means a great deal to me. I also like the continuation of the sea metaphor in your comment!
thank you JP for commenting on "the serious writer occupies wall street". i like your reading of this piece very much. i want to convey some of it, or perhaps the serious writer himself wanted to be heard with his woes.
My annual cat poem is especially poignant this year as Okie, our grey tabby, just returned from a two-week escape into the woods, weighing half as much as when he left but otherwise fine.
JP...thanks for read on Siege...love your comment, a masterful 10-word story on it's own: occupying a sink of sorts / awaiting on my master's pleasure.
JP--thanks for your reaction to High John. Only took me 40 years to write. Not getting feedback on it and wondered if it was too weird, but it's composed of 2 parts truth and 1 part writing.
Hey, Joani! Thank you again for stopping by and commenting on "The Shoes, the Girl and the Waves that Washed Them Away." Hope you're doing well. Chris :)
Hi Joani, I've been away for a while and decided to get back with a very short piece - thanks for reading and commenting on We All Have Wings, I appreciate it very much. fos.
Thanks, JP, for reading "Sideburns" and for your comment. Flicking dressing at a customer--I don't know where that came from. I would never have had the guts to actually have done it myself.
Thanks for reading "Three Stories of You" and for your great comment. I love your author selections. "O lost, and by the wind grieved, ghost, come back again." (I'm a NC native.)
They wouldn't let you teach Invisible Man? Incredible. My story was inspired by a news report of an actual list of 100 banned books; I can't recall where or what school board banned them. Guess I shouldn't be surprised. After all, this is Amerika.
It appears that my breasts have drawn a majority male literary readership in your sordid imagination. This makes me wonder if it was a good idea for you to auction your right breast on E-Bay. It may make your violin music sweeter, your sweaters longer, and the darts you throw at messenger boys straighter... but now I am having many, many thoughts about your disturbing ambition, blossoming right her on this page, the way us nuns are blossoming out of our habits after the doughy holidays. I do not have any freebies to Vicky's Secret (we know her) or Good Vibrations but, perhaps they will, by special request, fit you with an underwater octopus sampler (usually it is one size fits all). Clearly, you too, can garner the admiration of male sea anemones everywhere by being rejecting writers like myself for our clearly more interesting, craftsman-drawn cleavages. Do not worry, I will not send you anymore of my soul or soup stock parts. You are welcome.
jp, very well observed. indeed i imagined this as a collection of fragmented lives. too much fragmentation would, of course, lead to implosion of the story, but the spectre of death in the background probably holds it all together...thank you!
J.P.,
A little irony in the overkill, yes, but the guilt at not feeling guilt at not feeling any weight in the woes of those in the cone was real...Anyhow, a lulu of a cyclone shaping up off Africa and it may just hit here in a week so....I don't know.
Thanks, Joani, for faving "The Empty Bed." You made me see an aspect of the poem I hadn't visualized! "one is always slipping ass over teakettle on the copious droppings soggy underfoot"!
JP, thank you so much for your kind words on "Ghost writing". As a poet I don't know if I have the patience for writing fiction even though I enjoy doing it.
JP, Wow yourself. Thank you! Glad you liked my latest Chagall inspired scribbling. By the way, I admire anyone who teaches English. A noble profession.
Glad you liked "We Must be Carefully Taut." Thanks for the fave. Stop the puns? Even the redoubtable Frost puns.
"Before I built a wall I'd ask to know / What I was walling in or walling out, / And to whom I was like to give offense."
To whom I was like to give A FENCE!
Hi Joani, thanks for several things: 1. Reading Eight States Away; 2. Leaving comments; and 3. Teaching me a new word - "denouement". I appreciate all three! fos.
JP, i'm happy with your reading of the redhead, especially since i hadn't reflected upon her presence yet: i felt lucky to lure her into my story in the first place! thank you for yr detailed comment!
JP, many thanks for the kind words on The Lake Husband. The funny thing is that's part of a novel in progress that I have stopped for now as I diligently work on another novel I finished a while ago! Hope to be back at FN soon!
Joani thanks for all you saw in my poem Untitled. What you wrote is so interesting. I always see poems as part of nature, in the moving sense, even when it isn't apparent. Thanks so much!!
Thanks for commenting on "Paradise Island," Joani. Yes, I think the narrator sees himself as the drowning man, both ruining his gift robe and also emerging from the sea. Third stanza my favorite also.
Joani,
Thanks a million for your comments on my story "Incubation." You've give me a lot to think about as I go back and try to revise the story before sending it off. Your time and expertise are very much appreciated.
Hey Joani,
Thanks so much for your time and your detailed comments on "Incubation, Part 2." The piece is so long I didn't even know if anyone would read it; then, lo and behold, you send two paragraphs of professional commentary. You're the greatest.
Joani, thanks for the fave and the comment on "The running from San Pedro blues." Love your picture of this guy. Spot on. By the way, I've been looking at your blog. Great stuff! Couldn't leave a note there, so I hought I'd leave it here.
Hi JP, thanks for your comment on Snowdick. Fun piece to write, glad you enjoyed :) Thanks too for your fb comment on I Am Not Here. We lost a dear friend recently and her partner is trying to cope. We all are, really, and this is part of my way. So- Again, much appreciated. All best!
Thanks for your comments on Second Chance. I'm trying to make it a prose poem. Its part of a series I'm working on for my MFA thesis about addiction and depression. If I condense it a bit I think I can turn it into a prose poem. What do you think?
You are so generous with your support, and I appreciate your latest comments about 10,000 Dollar Pyramid in the Forum discussions. I really appreciate that, JP.
Thanks, JP, for your "on the nosey" comment about "Mad Max." I sent you a message, previously, but I'm not sure it got through. (Troubles on the site.) I wanted to be sure you thank you.
JP - thank you for your appreciation and suggestion on Kill Allan. The flip/flop of again/kids was intentional, as I wanted to emphasize the echo of the past before the description, but it does read a bit bulky that way. Serious consideration for re-write. Thanks
Your comment on Darryl's piece- about considering how well we really know someone, and how we can only imagine much of the life they've lead- Yes. Lost a dear friend unexpectedly recently, and this resonated. Good stuff.
Thanks for the comments on the poem, "Rope & Bone." I have not read Atwood's "Happy Endings," but I'll track that down to see what common notes we hit. R & B is one of the first poems (things) I had ever written--maybe 25 years ago. It's is map back to a place a time I wouldn't be able to find without it and the poem carries most of the themes of a novel-in-33-stories that I went on to work on for many years--several of which I've posted on Fictionaut--"Road Work being one of them.
I so greatly appreciate your close read of How To Burn Years. Your comments pleased me a great deal. Thanks, JP. I look forward now to reading your work.
thanks for your comment on "falling into hugeness", jp. i enjoyed reading your bio very much-what a full cup indeed. i'm looking forward to reading some of your work. greetings from berlin!
thanks so much for your thoughtful read and provocative comment about Wax Off. You have given me something to introspect about, which is always a gift.
Hi Joanie. Thanks for reading "Float to Water" and thanks for the star!
thanks, Joani, great to have your expertise applied to "Place."
Hi, JP! Thanks so much for your comment on "A Note Left on the Counter".
Hi Joani, thanks for reading "7 years for us." I'm happy you enjoyed the images.
Hi Joanie, thanks for commenting and faving "Middle Age." I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Joani - thanks for commenting on Daddio.
Joani, thanks for the note on "MacGowans." Only in my generation did we Scots Irish make it as far west as possible in the Western World. Next step... scuba lessons.
Hi Joani, thanks for your kind comment about "Listing." It was a fun poem to write! I hope your weekend is going swimmingly.
Thank you for your comments on my story!
Thanks, Joani for commenting and faving "A Forest." It's cool you enjoyed it.
Re: Amends One of the problems of being a therapist is that everyone wants free therapy and no one wants to listen to you and you forget how to talk about yourself. That's why writing is so great. It's me, me, me, me.
thanks jp
yes - agreed - very fortunate
JP,
Thanks for reading and commenting on the Dowagers piece.
- Brian.
JP, thanks for your comment on Silver Corvette, yes, you're right it is coming of age
Joani, thanks for reading and commenting on Winyah Bay. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
JP,
Thanks for reading and commenting on the piece 4:09 and American Music. Much appreciated.
- BMB
Thanks for your ADHD comment. The thing is, there are poor, quiet, daydreaming little girls with real ADD without the H who are completely ignored because they didn't cause trouble. Then again, their daydreams might be more valuable than what they are learning in class.
Joani, thanks for commenting and faving "Winyah Bay." I like your poem quite a bit. It's well structured and moving. Kudos.
Hi Joanie, thanks for reading Brick Walls. I appreciate your comments, too. fos.
Hello, JP. Thank you for the kind commentary. It's good to be back:)
Hi, JP. I really appreciate your read and fav of "The Swiss Lunch". Nice to hear from you again. I look forward to catching-up on some of your latest work.
Joani, thanks for commenting and faving "Testimony." I'm delighted you enjoyed it.
Joanie, I wasn't expecting the dark twist in Lemony Snickers, either, altho it just sort of came out in a serendipitous way. The coincidences in appearance and manner are real, but "my" cowboy would be in his late '80s or early '90s by now if living. Plus, I'm thinking now he might have been simply having fun with us boys and was really on his way to the local stockyards a few miles down the road. My parents were concerned, tho, because it did (and does now) seem awfully strange for a grown man driving a truck loaded with cattle to stop at a child's lemonade stand on a busy highway. Thanks for reading!
Thanks for the comment on "Three Endings," JP! Appreciate it!
Thanks for reading "Eulogy for the Eating Disorder". I'm honored you liked it. You're a fabulous writer.
Hi Joani, Thanks for tolerating a re-post. I couldn't remember if that story stayed up long enough for anyone to read, it was a while ago. fos.
Thanks for your lovely comment and fave on "Falling".
Thanks so much for your kind remark on Turning Tricks.
Many thanks for reading, JP.
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'Assiduity Fifteen.' I greatly appreciate your helpful and encouraging comment.
Joani, I am much honored and pleased that you faved my latest chapter of Hemingway Test. Your kind words are a benediction and an inspiration.
Joani, thanks for faving my poem "Factory Girl in a Blurred Photograph."
So grateful for you, and your comments on "What Some Boys Do."
Thank you so much for reading my "coffee mug" story, and your wonderful comment. :)
Thank you for citing all the details you liked visually about Sukkos morning. Thanks for noticing.
Hi Joani, big thanks for the comments on a bar for all occasions, I really appreciate it. Hope you're doing great! fos.
Well, I can't re-find you on Facebook. But if I could I would correct whatever unhitched the link. My name is hard to locate there so if you send me whatever name you use on FB, we can fix this jrobison@fgcu.edu
велике спасибі, JP, for the kind words for my narrative poem, Four Hearts and a Vase of Jonquils. Your recognition here is an honor.
Thanks, Joani for your comments on "The Good Cancer." A subject that is much easier to write about now. You read (and kindly edited) the next story in the series. That longer story is out there on the slush pile tour.
Thanks, Joani, for your crisp, clear take on 'What the Future Holds...' That's exactly what it is.
Thanks JP for commenting on "Texas Route 29." Your praise means a lot to me.
It was an abusive setting for clinicians. It completely burned me out and I partially attribute my resultant brain injury that I have to live with for the next year to the job. Leaving it was the best thing that's ever happened to me.
Hallo, Joani - you said "nicely packaged." :) Thank you.
If you want to run for Prom King, you've got my vote.
Thank you for your thoughts on Hair. I'm sure the girls adored you. I'm surprised they wanted you to share your thoughts with the rabbis as they were well schooled in the bottom line. That seems odd to me. They thought you were a fairy godmother who could transform the rabbis into princes.
Thanks JP for the comment on Blemish in the Blood.
Thanks for glitch alert and liking!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'Truth Or Consequence-2.' I greatly appreciate your comment and *.
Thanks, Joani, for the comments and fave on three more of my little war stories. Word limitations are usually good for me. Things tend to get stronger as I take words out. Best, B
Hi Joani! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my post office piece. I really appreciate it. Ironically enough I've just spent the past 45 minutes online and in voicemail Hell talking to robots and running in circles trying to track a package that shipped 2 weeks ago. This stuff never ends ~ drives me wild! This is why we drink indeed!
Thanks for your wonderful comment on "I Want My Mommy" - please do not leave NYC in September w/o looking me up, inviting me to you reading.
...Joani, your comment just completely AND TOTALLY blew me away!!! I am so shocked (in a Fabulous way) by your reaction. There's something about that piece that just won't stop bugging me. Thank you! X
Thanks, Joani, for commenting on 'May 1506.' My last name first appears in the New World in the West Indies. Likely George was involved in that trade...
Joani, so happy you like it. Thanks. XX
Thanx for dropping by to read and comment on "For The Raven". Making it new ~ Isn't THAT the truth? I totally agree! I'm just "playing" at being sardonic. I don't really believe it! ;-)
Joanie--Thanks for reading "Mercy Mercy Mercy" and your nice comment.
Joani, thanks for taking time to read and comment on 'Yappy Dog'. Much appreciated!
Joani, Thanks for liking "Not That Kind of Pain." Yes, constantly tinkering, cleaning, polishing, sharpening. Maybe it's a sickness.
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'Wattle and Daub-3.' I greatly appreciate your comment and *.
Hi Joani! Thank you so much for the read and warm comment on "Go hard or Go Home! Much appreciated!
Thanks much! Sartre kicks ass.
Hey, Joani! Thank you for commenting on "Triangulation". I hope you're doing well. Chris :)
Joani, I'm dead chuffed, always feel honoured when you comment, and I wiki'd Agbabi, must investigate further, she was born same time/place as me + similar influences. Thanks so much for pointing her out. XX
Thanks, Joani, for faving "Not That Kind of Pain."
Joani, thanks for reading and faving The Accidental Arsonist. And I am getting my act together on 3 questions--between sinus infection, bronchitis, and 'spring break' I have been nailed to the wall. Peace...
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'Wattle and Daub.' I greatly appreciate your insightful comments.
Hi JP, loved the comment: "Yes, what they said." LOL, thanks. Glad you enjoyed "Hunter,Fate,Food".
Hi Joani - Thanks so much for your lovely comment on "Telling" :)
Joani, I could have sworn it was Richard Cranshaw who wrote that line about seeing eternity, but it was Henry Vaughan! LONG time since grad school! Thanks for faving the poem anyway!
Hi Joani, thanks for reading Cactus and thanks for the comment, too, although I must confess....I'm not really sure what it meant :) Doesn't matter - you took the time to read and comment and I really appreciate that. fos.
Hi Joani!
Thanks for your comment and your own reminiscence about childhood. It made me smile!
Was the digging a hole to China a Wisconsin thing, or a mid century American thing? At this point in my life I'm lucky if I can even hit a golf ball- that is sitting perfectly motionless - offered up on a big, fat tee in brilliant green grass!
Glad you enjoyed the ant poem, Joani. I appreciate your read here. Thanks.
Huh? Satire? Whaddya mean- this is real! Haha! ;-) Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Mucho appreciated!
Thanks, JP...always nice to catch your eye.
Joani, thanks for reading SNOW JOB and handing out a purty star. Always a treat when you drop by. Peace...
You were lovely to publish "The Hotel Where Esenin Hanged Himself" and lovely to comment. Double-plus thanks, Joani!
Thanks, Joani, for your nice comment on 'Saved, Nevertheless.'
Hi Joani, thanks for reading my bicycle story. I also have the feeling, when I read it, that it could've gone another way. I kinda like that. Congrats on your piece in AA - I love that journal. fos.
Thank you for your wonderful comment on my story Almost There. Very much appreciated -- this one's a close one...
Haha! Thanks Joani! Semi-colons - yeah - run on sentences and diarrhea of the mouth breed semi-colons. Kurt's right though. I've had some college, too much college and now I'm at the stage of life where i'm actually trying to "unschool myself" in some areas. Thanks again!
Thank you, Joani, for faving "Eyes Off the Road."
JP, glad you discovered "The Wreck of Me." Thanks for kind words & fave.
Hi Joani,
Thank you so much for taking the time to ride along with me for a little while on this madcap farce and make comments. I appreciate your company as I digress into silliness. Ready or not, there's more to come. The Woman in the Wet Raincoat and much much more. It's all in fun!
Joani, thanks for reading and faving my small story I Remember Kitty D. I always appreciate when you take time to read my words.
And I am getting ready to settle down with yours -- received a little package today :^) Thank you. Peace...
Thanks for faving "Joan of Dark," Joani of Light!
Thanks, Joani, for your comment and * on 'Out of the Frying Pan. 'The words had all been spoken...'
Your kind comments on "Do you remember..." are much appreciated. I think it needs a bit more work, but think I'm on the right track. Can't wait to get your book!
JP, thanks for reading my poem and for the encouraging comment.
Thank you so much for your kind comments on my story.
Joani,
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on "This Is How It Is" I value it and appreciate it very, much. I really appreciate your observation about the line breaks. Thanks for sharing your eagle eye on that! :-)
mgm
Kind and kind again. Thanks for commenting on and faving "Rattlesnake Pancakes," Joani!
Thanks for appreciating and commenting on Weep Not For The Dead!
Thank you for your kind words on my piece "Travelin' Light"
Thanks for the comment on WWJRD. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Thanks for commenting on my poem, "Never Enough." I've posted your lovely words to my tack board...
JP, thank you so much for your super sweet comments on The Second Sun.
"Thanks for the kind and enthusiastic comments about "Touch" Bill, and thanks for sharing Mr. Cohen with me."
:)
Thanks for reading my Contender, Joani. I'm wearing your comments on my heart.
Thanks so much your thoughtful reading & comments on "The Breakfast Tree."
Your comment on my Eve piece has tickled me pink!
Thanks for reading "Parking Garage" and your comment, JP.
Thank you for your comment and fave on "The Anniversary." And, despite the exhaustion, where would anyone be without spinning hope?
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'Rome Ants In The Sky.' I greatly appreciate your comment and *.
Thank you for the lovely * for "Babble." Would that this poem were true! Completely imagined!
Thanks for reading "Dead Man Sleeping" and for the comment. I found one of the typos you were talking about. If you can point out any others, it would be greatly appreciated!
thanks J. for your comment on "I Married This"!
Your support is so appreciated, Joani. Glad you liked "Sweet Sounds of Home".
Thank you for the comments, and for the info. I am not very tech savvy!
Wanted to thank you so much for your support and for the kind comments on "Immiscibility." You have no idea how important the feedback is for a fledgeling writer like moi. So appreciated! You are a wonderful, supportive presence on the site.
Thanks for reading my poem and commenting and the fave.
That made me happy, JP. Tanx.
Your comment on "Eleutheria" is a poem in itself. Thank you for the fave, Joani.
Just read your piece on Baker's Dozen and wanted to say how much I liked it. Wonderful work!
Thanks for your comments on 'Scope,' Joani, and for all the support you provide here and elsewhere.
Haha! It was Benadryl - horrible stuff - kinda think I would have preferred whatever Coleridge used to dip into! Thanks for dropping in and reading! Amazing what an unexpected bug bite can make a man do! ;-)
Joani, thanks for your comment on 'Copper', and for the fave. All best.
Thank you, re: "Zurich." Means a lot.
Thanks, Joani, for your insightful comment and * for 'At the Home 70 Years Later.' I'm glad you like my work.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting on "That Night." I wanted the reader to have to work a bit here, just as the voice has to struggle with the mixed emotions. When I first wrote this, my writer's group furrowed their brows and insisted I change it to first person. That was my first experience with listening to my own instincts and, 3 years on, I still love the piece as it stands. I've been trusting my gut ever since. Thanks for your support - every little bit helps!
JP, thanks for your kind words about 'Reynolds and Me' and for your ongoing support of the craft.
Thanks for commenting on "Uncle Moscow." Glad you liked the poem! My uncle was a real character, one of a kind. I miss him.
Hey, I just came across "May you live in interesting times" on the Non-fiction group page. Wow. It was, to me, your Steely Dan's Gaucho - took me back to my road trip from PA to Ft Lauderdale to 'experience life' and ended up being stalked by New Orleans musicians and searching for lost friends all night on the beach. Sigh. Was that really my life...so long ago on the other side of the world.
You captured the scene beautifully with grit and class and brought a lil ol' tear to my eye. Funny how we can be nostalgic for the complete insanity of our youths.
Anyway, thanks for that. I'm glad I found your piece.
Thanks for your "amen, sister" to one of my pet peeves in "The Story of F."
Your kind comments on "Swimming Lessons" are very much appreciated.
Thanks, JP, for your comment and * for 'Waiting.'
Hey JP, thanks for your comment + * on my excerpt "Salmon of Wisdom" - George
JP, Thank you so much for your kind words about "Jared Sampson's Mom." I can't even tell you how much it means. Just what I needed. Thank you!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading, 'Soroz.' I greatly appreciate your comment and *.
Thanks for reading "New Song of Innocence and Experience" and your fun comment. The man I know ASKED for his Kindle. How could I withhold? I'll be loyal to books, after all I've been in love with books for longer than most people I know have been alive.
Hey! Thanks for hanging in there with me through rather dreary telling of "No Place for Unicorns or Teddy Bears" One of many jobs that sent me packing back to school. As I look back at some of my recent writing, I think I must be performing some kind of exorcism of the many weird jobs I had in my younger years, but it seems to be reviving memories for other people along the way. I greatly appreciate your comment!
Thanks for reading Uncle Henri, and for your comments. Yes, it´s a difficult one, whichever way you see it.
Thanks for faving "She Waited for Him," Ms. Joani.
"I wonder if I took my darkness and combined it with your sense of light, if we wouldn't just have a classic on our hands?"
Collaboration? I'm game!
Hi again JP
Call it synchronicity, but I just stumbled across Connotion press- only yesterday - and quite by accident! I love many of the same authors you do - including Cormac McCarthy and Richard Ford who both have a command of the language that make me want to dance and weep! Be back soon!
MGM
Hi JP,
Nice to meet ya! Thanks so much for taking the time to read Conversation From a Lunch Counter and to post a comment. Much gratitude and appreciation! I'm really looking forward to reading your work! Be back soon!
mgm
And thanks for faving "Need." That's an astute comment to see the lines like waves.
Thanks, Joani, for reading, commenting on, and faving "Magritte." Your comment about the imagery I found fascinating. Wrote the poem in my mid 20s. Perhaps that explains the difference you find in the poetry of "me then and me now." Appreciate your insight very much. Thank you.
Thanks, JP, for commenting on "Hawaiian Reservations."
Joani, thank you for the comment on "For Carol", I deeply appreciate it.
Joani...thank you so much for comment on Hard Candy and hope you're having a great holiday!
Thanks, JP, for reading and your comment and fave of my "Pirate."
Thanks for your wonderful comment on "Escape Literature." No need to read Nora Roberts. Jane Austen or the Brontës address the same issues. As does Susan Griffin. How masculine mentality always wants to rarify itself right out of existence, and feminine mentality wants to relate to existence as is, grit, hormones, and all, but then ends up subject to "compassionate contempt" (a phrase I wish I had coined, but didn't, it's from Betty Friedan's book on aging).
Thanks, JP, for your insightful comments about The Lonely Heart Hunts.
P.S. I'm also not sure how to classify "Lawn Clippings." Prosetry???
Thank you JP for your absolutely delightful review, it really means a great deal to me. I also like the continuation of the sea metaphor in your comment!
Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my story, Lawn Clippings. So much appreciated. :)
Thanks for reading "Jimmy" and for the fav.
Thanks for reading "Cloudy..." and your comments, JP. Very appreciated and grateful.
thank you JP for commenting on "the serious writer occupies wall street". i like your reading of this piece very much. i want to convey some of it, or perhaps the serious writer himself wanted to be heard with his woes.
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading, 'Lule of Raw-2.' I greatly appreciate your comments and *.
Hi Joani, thanks for reading and commenting on chairs and mirrors - I appreciate both! fos.
JP, Amsterdam has pretty good beer, too. Glad you liked the story!
On accounta you're who and how you are, Joani, I'm waiving the letter too and any other conditions. Thanks for the great response to my story contest.
david
Thanks for the comments--much appreciated!
Hi Joani, thanks so much for the kind comments and fav for "Baby, Baby..." I really appreciate it.
Thanks for faving "Fish Boil," Joani. Took me a while to work out that ending, twisty as it turned out to be.
My annual cat poem is especially poignant this year as Okie, our grey tabby, just returned from a two-week escape into the woods, weighing half as much as when he left but otherwise fine.
Thank you again so much for your wonderful comments on "Conceived in the New Liberty", J.P. It is really appreciated!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading, 'Lule of Raw.' Your comment and * are greatly appreciated.
JP...thanks for read on Siege...love your comment, a masterful 10-word story on it's own: occupying a sink of sorts / awaiting on my master's pleasure.
Hi, Joani! Thank you for your COMMENT on Lucy-Ellmannesque story. Hope you're doing well. Chris :)
Very pleased you like "Before the Door." Thank you for the fave and love. Took me a long time to get to that last line!
Ouch! Thanks for the comment, fav, and suggestion, JP.
thank you JP, for the read on Olde Burying Yard and yes, do not gently flap into that wind!
thanks for commenting on "Permission to Go." I'm really happy you liked it. Thanks for the *.
Thanks, JP. Check out Bill's comment. Maybe we could all collaborate on a series of stories. With that title, maybe it would be a best seller.
Hi JP - thank you so very much for reading and commenting on 'Duet' - I appreciate you taking the time and glad you liked.
Thanks so much for visiting my short stuff - the first one is my favorite too, I think.
Thanks for faving "Love and How It gets That Way." BTW, the "I" in the poem and the kid in the bowtie are not the same!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'A Life of My Own-7.' I greatly appreciate your comment, fav, and suggestion.
Thank you for stopping in to read 'Inky' and for the generous comments - I'm most grateful. - DJ
Joani, thanks so much for digging "Welcome to the Occupation." I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks, JP. It was fun to write - a welcome side-ways step from my wobbly wipple. xx
thank you muchly, jp, for your comment on my modern fairy tale, "<a href="http://www.fictionaut.com/stories/marcus-speh/moondog--2">moondog</a>"!
Hi, Joani! Thank you for commenting on "Three-handed Bridge"--and for your encouragement. All the best, Chris :)
"Hoping for a Rewind"--I like that as a title! Thanks for the fave of Gabrielle!
JP--thanks for your reaction to High John. Only took me 40 years to write. Not getting feedback on it and wondered if it was too weird, but it's composed of 2 parts truth and 1 part writing.
Thank you for reading Psych Interview with a Rape Victim. Much appreciated.
I really appreciate your support, Joani. Thanks for your comments on "Sounds of Silence".
Hey, Joani! Thank you again for stopping by and commenting on "The Shoes, the Girl and the Waves that Washed Them Away." Hope you're doing well. Chris :)
Thanks Joani for the kind words and helpful comment about "Offramp": the comment was put right to use.
Hi Joani, I've been away for a while and decided to get back with a very short piece - thanks for reading and commenting on We All Have Wings, I appreciate it very much. fos.
Yours may have been the best comment I've ever gotten about my writing. Seriously. Glad I pissed you off! Thanks for reading.
Thank you so much for reading my latest...I love that image too, in fact I can recall it even now. I appreciate the feedback!!
Hi JP, thanks for reading and commenting on Feral. I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Thank you, J.P. The poems have already been published and I can't donate them to that great good cause. Probably shouldn't be here, in fact. Too bad.
Thanks, JP, for reading "Sideburns" and for your comment. Flicking dressing at a customer--I don't know where that came from. I would never have had the guts to actually have done it myself.
Glad you liked the Dali poem. Thanks for the fave, Joani. What's Gary's alley exactly?
JP,thank you for reading and commenting on "Hypnagogia." I really appreciate that. And, yes, I think I'm chasing that damn table everywhere! :-)
thanks so much for taking a look at "tokyo" and for the comment.
Thanks for reading "Three Stories of You" and for your great comment. I love your author selections. "O lost, and by the wind grieved, ghost, come back again." (I'm a NC native.)
Thanks, JP, for the generous comment on my latest. You have so much wonderful work here. I need to catch up with it very soon!
So pleased you liked Requirement, and thanks again for starting up that group! I love having you read my work.
How kind of you to fave "Addictions" and put me into a new bracket! Thank you, Joani!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'A Life of My Own-4.' I greatly appreciate your very helpful comments and *.
Fabulous comment on "Getting Home Alive." Thanks also for the fave, Joani.
Ha! A badger! Ya know, now that you mention it, I miss the stormy weather, too. Sure miss the lakes. Thanks for reading and commenting on "Twister."
Thanks, Joani, for reading and commenting on "Head in a Box." Thanks, also, for your editing advice!
Thank you for your wonderful comment on A Fable of Leaves.
JP, thanks for reading and commenting on "Ascend"!
Joani, thanks much. Do you think anyone knows what tuberoses are?Dark clouds seem to be hanging over my desk lately. . .
JP, thanks for reading, commenting on, and faving "I'm Not Emilio Estevez." Much appreciated!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'A Life of My Own.' I greatly appreciate your insightful comment.
thank you for your comment (hysterical) and fave on my rejection letter piece, Joni. xo-meg
They wouldn't let you teach Invisible Man? Incredible. My story was inspired by a news report of an actual list of 100 banned books; I can't recall where or what school board banned them. Guess I shouldn't be surprised. After all, this is Amerika.
Thanks for the read, comment, and star, JP.
...er.. sorry for all the (purposeful) holy typos!
Dear JP,
It appears that my breasts have drawn a majority male literary readership in your sordid imagination. This makes me wonder if it was a good idea for you to auction your right breast on E-Bay. It may make your violin music sweeter, your sweaters longer, and the darts you throw at messenger boys straighter... but now I am having many, many thoughts about your disturbing ambition, blossoming right her on this page, the way us nuns are blossoming out of our habits after the doughy holidays. I do not have any freebies to Vicky's Secret (we know her) or Good Vibrations but, perhaps they will, by special request, fit you with an underwater octopus sampler (usually it is one size fits all). Clearly, you too, can garner the admiration of male sea anemones everywhere by being rejecting writers like myself for our clearly more interesting, craftsman-drawn cleavages. Do not worry, I will not send you anymore of my soul or soup stock parts. You are welcome.
Joani, thanks for the kind words on Power Outage. You're the best!
Joani thanks for reading "kid" and letting me know how it affected you.
Thanks for loving sad "Lettie."
Joani, glad you liked We Sustain. Thanks for always being there. . .
Thanks so much for your kind words about "Mother Lies." Your comment perfectly captured my melancholy when writing it!
I was up all night last night. The couple in the apartment above me was giving each other a TGIF thrumming.
Thanks for commenting on and faving the visa poem, Joani! "It was so subtle, I didn't get it. Now I do." I think you may have to explain it to me!
JP, thanks for reading and commenting on "Flying." Much appreciated.
Joani, so happy "the question" resonated with you and thanks for what you wrote about it!
jp, very well observed. indeed i imagined this as a collection of fragmented lives. too much fragmentation would, of course, lead to implosion of the story, but the spectre of death in the background probably holds it all together...thank you!
Hey Joani, Just a little thank you for spending some time with Blank Checks - I really appreciate the read and your comments. fos.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on 'Insatiable' - I appreciate your feedback. :-)
JP, thanks so much for commenting on Ends, I appreciate your interest.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my silly Les Stroud survival book bit!
J.P.,
A little irony in the overkill, yes, but the guilt at not feeling guilt at not feeling any weight in the woes of those in the cone was real...Anyhow, a lulu of a cyclone shaping up off Africa and it may just hit here in a week so....I don't know.
Thanks for the read and kind comments. Yes! Come to SA -> 2 Texas women writers and wine. Watch out now.
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'Nothing in the Middle.' I appreciate your comment, quote, and *, very much.
Thanks, Joani, for faving "The Empty Bed." You made me see an aspect of the poem I hadn't visualized! "one is always slipping ass over teakettle on the copious droppings soggy underfoot"!
Hi Joani, :) that's the exact song that came to mind when I titled this piece - thanks for reading The Pretendrs. fos.
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading: 'Bubble Busting, Boom!' I greatly appreciate your comment and *.
JP, thank you for reading and commenting on "Mud." I really appreciate it. (Dallas, huh? I'm a North Richland Hills boy.)
Thanks for reading Temp. P. I'm pleased you called it a 'vignette'. Poem, story, flash - don't feel comfortable, 'vignette' fits just right. XX
JP, thank you for reading and commenting on "Burn." Much appreciated!
I'm grateful to you for publishing "The Grave of Rimbaud" in THIS. And grateful again for your fave. Thanks, Joani.
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. -Felicia
Thanks for reading "Cholo," JP, and for your fine suggestion.
I meant to thank you for your super kind words. Life got in the way a little bit and prevented. So, here, thank you.
Thanks for your splendid comment on "A Scattering of Rivals." It made me happy.
JP, thank you so much for your kind words on "Ghost writing". As a poet I don't know if I have the patience for writing fiction even though I enjoy doing it.
JP, Wow yourself. Thank you! Glad you liked my latest Chagall inspired scribbling. By the way, I admire anyone who teaches English. A noble profession.
JP,
Thanks so much for you kind comment.
Thanks for being so supportive of my writing, JP. I appreciate your commenting on "Maine" and the star!
Glad you liked "We Must be Carefully Taut." Thanks for the fave. Stop the puns? Even the redoubtable Frost puns.
"Before I built a wall I'd ask to know / What I was walling in or walling out, / And to whom I was like to give offense."
To whom I was like to give A FENCE!
Hi Joani, thanks for several things: 1. Reading Eight States Away; 2. Leaving comments; and 3. Teaching me a new word - "denouement". I appreciate all three! fos.
Very happy to join this community!
Thanks for the fave on "Madeline the Admired", JP! All best, Isabell
Holst's story is my favorite flash. (When he wrote it, I'm sure they didn't yet have a term for the form.) Thanks, JP!
Thanks for the "lovely", JP and for the star. I'm so glad you like "Don't Grieve..."
Thank you for the support, JP - much appreciated!
Thanks, Joani. Glad the poem worked for you. Thanks for the fave!
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'The Yin Yang of Corporate Execution.' I appreciate your very interesting comment.
Thank you for your interestin comment on my Onion. Much appreciated X
Thanks for reading Turista and offering some really insightful comments! I really appreciate it.
JP, i'm happy with your reading of the redhead, especially since i hadn't reflected upon her presence yet: i felt lucky to lure her into my story in the first place! thank you for yr detailed comment!
Hi Joani,
Thanks so much for checking out "Flatlander's Suite" and for your kind words about it! Greg
Thanks for the kind word om Multiple Simultaneous, JP. It's a special thing to make the teacher happy. Cheers. LS
They copy, they borrow, they steal from Picasso, but they are not Picasso.
Hi, JP. Thanks for reading 'I Wouldn't Wanna Be Me.' I greatly appreciate your comment and *.
Start with a punny title--that's my method! " just never know where I'll end up! Thanks for the fave on the Euclid poem, Joani.
Thanks for faving "Son of Goya," Joani. How lucky I am to have you as a reader! How lucky I am to know you!
Thank you for your comment on Firecracker! I'm glad you liked it. Checking out your stories now.
Hi JP, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on Cactus - I really appreciate both! fos.
JP, many thanks for the kind words on The Lake Husband. The funny thing is that's part of a novel in progress that I have stopped for now as I diligently work on another novel I finished a while ago! Hope to be back at FN soon!
JP, thanks for your read and comments re Pieces, and the star! Positive statements from English faculty mean a lot.
Thanks for your generous comment on "Joy of Wind." Quite pleased you liked it.
Thanks fo reading and commenting on "Nebbiolo",JP!
JP, Sleep well. I have corrected the error. Sorry. I am tot-ering from all the controversy.
Hi J.P. Thanks for your comment and the star. I'm so glad you like "Penny Candy."
Joani, Thanks for the fave of "Four Noble Lies." I'll remember "eviscerates with a kind of pragmatic heroism"!
Hello JP, I sincerely appreciate your comment on The Escapists. Thank you for reading and liking it :)
Thanks for the comment and the fave on Mapping the Territory . . . I get here as often as I can!
Joani thanks for all you saw in my poem Untitled. What you wrote is so interesting. I always see poems as part of nature, in the moving sense, even when it isn't apparent. Thanks so much!!
Thanks so much, Joani, for the kind words for ' that ringing.' Putting someone in mind of something 'masterly' is a rush.
Hi, Joani! Thank you for your comment on "Nothing Between Us." Hope you're doing well. :)
Love the story you added to the Hopper painting. Sordid! Fav.
Thanks for commenting on the tree poem. A bit of an oddity. Never read Norman Maclean. Just saw the movie.
P.S. I picked up that Vonnegut book you mentioned. Quick, fun read.
Hi JP, thanks for reading and faving "Park Bench". It's been a work in perpetual progress.
Thanks again JP... I'm learning!
Thanks for checking out "Amateur Theory of the Universe" and for your kind words about it. Always much appreciated.
Joani so happy you enjoyed Idiotsky and thanks for the tip! Will follow through..
Joani - your comment absolutely made my day. Huge thank you, my friend.
I read "Rest Home" on your tumblr page... Loved it! Thank you.
Thanks for the kind words, JP... I look forward to reading your work, as well.
JP, thanks for reading and commenting on "Shoot." Much appreciated!
P.s. Thanks for the *!
17 years and counting, JP.
Hi, Joani. Glad you liked "Black Ice." Thanks for the fave! Haven't read that Vonnegut novel. Good?
JP thanks for the "love" on Burn, Baby, Burn. Appreciate!
JP, thanks so much for appreciating the effort it took to write this. . .
Thanks, Joani, for the fave and the wonderful comment on "Look in the empty mirror ... tell me what you see." I faved the comment.
Thank you for the (repeated!) comment on 'Love.' Much appreciated.
Thanks for commenting on "Paradise Island," Joani. Yes, I think the narrator sees himself as the drowning man, both ruining his gift robe and also emerging from the sea. Third stanza my favorite also.
Joani, thanks for all the love on "The Disease," and all your support in general. You rock.
Joani,
Thanks a million for your comments on my story "Incubation." You've give me a lot to think about as I go back and try to revise the story before sending it off. Your time and expertise are very much appreciated.
Hey Joani,
Thanks so much for your time and your detailed comments on "Incubation, Part 2." The piece is so long I didn't even know if anyone would read it; then, lo and behold, you send two paragraphs of professional commentary. You're the greatest.
Hi Joani,
Thanks so much for your detailed commentary on "Incubation, Part I." Your feedback is very useful. Glad you like the story so far.
Joani, thanks for the fave and the comment on "The running from San Pedro blues." Love your picture of this guy. Spot on. By the way, I've been looking at your blog. Great stuff! Couldn't leave a note there, so I hought I'd leave it here.
Your thoughtful comments on "Frog Magic" are much appreciated.
Joani, I appreciate you back. I am so knocked by your new poem!
Joani, thanks for the read and the comment on "She said."
Hi JP, thanks for your comment on Snowdick. Fun piece to write, glad you enjoyed :) Thanks too for your fb comment on I Am Not Here. We lost a dear friend recently and her partner is trying to cope. We all are, really, and this is part of my way. So- Again, much appreciated. All best!
Thank you for reading and commenting on my sniper piece. The original manual boggled my mind. Insane.
Thanks ever so much for the generous comment on "1967, The things they wanted." You've been missed.
JP, Thank you so much for reading and commenting on Too Late. The fave was a cherry on top of your already generous comment. Cheers :)
Thank you for reading and commenting on "1991" - and for the star!
Thanks for faving "Staring at Waves," Joani. I'm glad you thought that the form followed the function and was not enslaved by it. Late change.
Thanks for commenting on "Sermon of Lilac," Joani. Always love hearing what you have to say.
Hi, JP. I'm glad you enjoyed "The Moral of This Story Is." Thanks for reading and commenting.
Thanks for your comments on Second Chance. I'm trying to make it a prose poem. Its part of a series I'm working on for my MFA thesis about addiction and depression. If I condense it a bit I think I can turn it into a prose poem. What do you think?
Hi JP! Thanks for the positive feedback and the fave on "Safa's Hair."
Always relish your comments, Joani. Thanks so much for the fave of "The Assassination of Sadat."
Hi JP! So thankful to you for reading "Muse" and glad you liked it. I had fun writing it.
You are so generous with your support, and I appreciate your latest comments about 10,000 Dollar Pyramid in the Forum discussions. I really appreciate that, JP.
Hi JP - Thanks so much for your generous comments on "Nothing Good" & I love your profile pic!
JP, thank you for your comments on "A sense that something has happened". I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now I'm revising and trying to make it even better.
JP, Joani, thank you for the comments on "A heart that is not broken..." and for all the support you give others here. You are special.
Joani,
Thanks for commenting on "Hope's Amanuensis." Never read "Independence Day" (shame on me) but will now.
JP so glad to see the women weighing in on my fish story. thanks.
JP - so YOU were my Classics professor, thought the name was familiar. (I swear it was Chalky next to me, not me who had those observations.)
Thanks for the read!
Hi JP. Thanks for loving Mabel. I'm a little jealous of her suit. :-)
Hi JP, thanks for reading and faving Last Bell. The line you mentioned is one of my favorites too. Much appreciated!
Finally made it! Looking forward to exploring.
Cheers,
Lacey
Thanks, JP, for the recognition and comment on "Foreplay." The subtext is justice.
JP - thank you for the comment on "I Like It". I appreciate it!
Thanks, JP, for your "on the nosey" comment about "Mad Max." I sent you a message, previously, but I'm not sure it got through. (Troubles on the site.) I wanted to be sure you thank you.
Thank you for the very kind comment on 'Tasted Like Apples,' JP!
JP - thank you for your appreciation and suggestion on Kill Allan. The flip/flop of again/kids was intentional, as I wanted to emphasize the echo of the past before the description, but it does read a bit bulky that way. Serious consideration for re-write. Thanks
Your comment on Darryl's piece- about considering how well we really know someone, and how we can only imagine much of the life they've lead- Yes. Lost a dear friend unexpectedly recently, and this resonated. Good stuff.
thanks for read and all on "le sucre brun" & esp for finding that typo! corrected! and yes: retribution. good word for this.
Thanks for Snapshots. It's appreciated. Cheers. LarryS
JP - I appreciate your kind comments on "le Misérable." Mil gracias!
JP, thank you for your kind words re. The Belt. I've been enjoying your work here and hope all is well.
Thanks for the comments on the poem, "Rope & Bone." I have not read Atwood's "Happy Endings," but I'll track that down to see what common notes we hit. R & B is one of the first poems (things) I had ever written--maybe 25 years ago. It's is map back to a place a time I wouldn't be able to find without it and the poem carries most of the themes of a novel-in-33-stories that I went on to work on for many years--several of which I've posted on Fictionaut--"Road Work being one of them.
thanks for reading and faving panties...i never am quite sure how people will take it...
JP, thanks for the lovely words on Ping Pong!
Thank you very much for the kind comment on 'Arms of the Forest,' JP. Most fairytales are meant to be thorned jewels, I reckon.
Roberta
Thank you for your really great comments on it's just death, so what. I very much appreciate them! Enjoy your week. -- Q
Thanks for the kind comments of late, JP. I do appreciate it!
Hey, thanks JP!
JP, appreciate your read and comment on "oasis" thank you & have a great weekend!
I so greatly appreciate your close read of How To Burn Years. Your comments pleased me a great deal. Thanks, JP. I look forward now to reading your work.
thanks for your comment on "falling into hugeness", jp. i enjoyed reading your bio very much-what a full cup indeed. i'm looking forward to reading some of your work. greetings from berlin!
thanks so much for your thoughtful read and provocative comment about Wax Off. You have given me something to introspect about, which is always a gift.
JP, appreciate very much that you read Above the Clouds... which isn't a flash, thank you so much
Thank you for your comments on "Things Inside of Other Things." Never considered the OCD manifestations. Hm. :)
JP: Thanks very much for the read and lovely comment on "The Zone of Forgotten Things." Very interesting.
Perfect comment on "The Proud Accounting." Thanks, Joani.
You pinned it. !!!!! Thank you for reading it and GETTING IT! -meg
Thanks so much, JP, very interesting comments!
Hi JP--Thanks for the nice words about "Blades". SP was certainly on my mind.
I am so grateful for your read and comments about "Cadaver Chris." I've never met this guy, but I came close enough to experience him several times.
JP,
Thanks for your kind words about Chanticleer. It was fun writing that one... ;)
Thanks,
Bill
Thanks so much for reading both parts of Minor Damage and liking the damaged characters for who they are.
JP, thanks ever so much for the good words and fave on "The Storefront Poet." And, yes, Texas can be magically realistic if you watch it long enough.
Thanks for your funny comment on virtual recovery, JP. I loved it. Cheers. -- Q
Thanks for reading "Self Alaska" and for your wonderful comment, JP.