Just want to say that I just read your story "Clay Women" at "This Literary Magazine" and simply drooled over it. (Even though the story I was thinking about subbing to them had numbered paras and I can't now!) But that's a minor item. The main item is that your story was so, so, so good that I said Hallelujah instead of Dammit. I'll come back later and read the stories you have posted here. Just wanted to tell you while it was fresh in my mind and heart.
EXACTLY! It really does make me want to write, too, every time I read it. Those three girls not being in the parking lot when he comes out is just brutal and "right."
Hi Michelle, A&P is possibly my favorite short story. Made me want to be a writer. I worked in a grocery store for years by the time I read it. Best ending line ever.
Hi Michelle. Let's write! We've got to keep it going...
Just want to say that I just read your story "Clay Women" at "This Literary Magazine" and simply drooled over it. (Even though the story I was thinking about subbing to them had numbered paras and I can't now!) But that's a minor item. The main item is that your story was so, so, so good that I said Hallelujah instead of Dammit. I'll come back later and read the stories you have posted here. Just wanted to tell you while it was fresh in my mind and heart.
Michelle, thank you for what you wrote about my "Soliloquy on Ma"--I am so honored re: the "Girls" reference—and thanks re: “the writing bug.”
thank you for commenting on my story Michelle. I'm glad the title grabbed you, thanks so much.
Thanks, Michelle, for your happy comment on Bedtime Story!
Thanks for the (unprompted) comments on Dirty Mother. As to 'pigmeat woman', Mich - just rippin' off the greats, its what we writer/musicians do . . .
EXACTLY! It really does make me want to write, too, every time I read it. Those three girls not being in the parking lot when he comes out is just brutal and "right."
Hi Michelle, A&P is possibly my favorite short story. Made me want to be a writer. I worked in a grocery store for years by the time I read it. Best ending line ever.
Thanks Maria for your comment. I do appreciate it. :-) Thanks so much for reading.
Hi, Michelle --
Really like the energy and flow your stories have. Looking forward to reading more.
Ha! Thanks, Gary. Your comment made me smile! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
hi michelle--
helluva story, please
more. please.
gary
Hi Michelle!