by Joani Reese
Twine ribbons: gold, red, emerald, for his eyes
Her furrier trades, her babe a nascent flame.
Her hands keep weaving: Listen to the cries.
This sash will dip for water, tote supplies.
Spread beeswax forms the cup, deft hands the frame.
Twine ribbons: gold, red, emerald, for his eyes
A chevron pattern forms as threads embrace.
Skinned beaver pelts all sold, he paddles home.
Her hands keep weaving: Listen to the cries.
Skilled fingers work, a smile in place denies
approaching screams--perhaps a children's game.
Twine ribbons: gold, red, emerald, for his eyes.
Her focus on each knot fast fingers tie
--not Frenchmen overrun, not bodies maimed.
Her hands keep weaving: Listen to the cries.
Night's air awhirl, the sky shoots fireflies.
Sometimes, she bleeds black arrows in her dreams.
Twine ribbons: gold, red, emerald, for his eyes.
Sad voyageur, death swooped with swift surprise.
Thuds shake the door. A sister screams her name.
Her hands cease weaving: Listen to the cries.
Her lover, bones and ashes where he lies.
and still wild roses star far fields the same.
His sash weaves with the fire's flames that rise
in ribbons: gold, red, emerald, for his eyes.
In the 1700s and 1800s, both French voyageurs (independent fur traders) and Native Americans enjoyed wearing colorful sashes for both practical and ceremonial occasions. They are known by many names: voyageur, metis, Red River, Hudson's Bay, and L'Assomption sashes. The men wore them by wrapping them twice around their waists. Voyageur sashes could also be slung around the forehead to support packages being carried. In addition to their own use, voyageur sashes were also traded for pelts.
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A villanelle that burst its boundaries. Published by Jane Carmen at Illinois State University for Festival Writer.
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Expands beyonds its bounds, in form, imagery and content.*
This has all the energy of firelight and paddle moving through water. Living history. I really enjoyed it!
This moves with the speed of her fingers weaving.
Thank you.
Lxx
Whenever you venture into strict forms, you do well, Joani. Vivid imagery. Good poem.
Lovely writing, and I learned a little history to boot.*
Vivid, violent imagery. I can still see the busy fingers weaving. *
Just wonderful, Joani :-)
Thank you, everyone. The villanelle is my favorite (and practically ONLY) form. This one just kept going as I researched more about the sash. Apparently, the women who wove them would dip them in bees' wax so they were water-tight, and their trader husbands would also use them as drinking cups. I appreciate the read and comments.
Wild Bill Hickok carried a brace of Colt Navy revolvers in his sash.
Great!
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Thank you!
Gorgeous writing. This is my favorite line: "and still wild roses star far fields the same." *
I got a thrill in the nape of my neck reading this. I was just wondering, would you mind very much if I stole this for the book I've been working on? I'm a little tired of writing it myself, and this is perfect for it? No? Well, I had to ask. *
Beate and Nonnie: Thank you.
Beautiful the way the weave of the sash and the weave of the poem intermesh.
Thanks David.