sara t.

Sara: Thanks for the kind words about How To Become A Great Writer! Glad I was on your radar and glad that you are now on mine.

Gosh, thanks so much, Sara! It is actually part of a story. There are a couple other stories, too, with this narrator. I'm new to fictionaut, and it seems to me that it's best to post short pieces. I could be wrong. I'd like to post longer stories, haven't tried it yet, though. But I do appreciate your comment!

sara t. it's always good to see you again. Thanks for the comment.

Thanks, Sara, for your kind comments about "The Sky is Simply White."

Sara, thanks for your comment on Somebody to Love. I'm glad you liked that line!

Thank you for the comment on The Weight of Jade! I see you are from Brooklyn, I'm going to NYC for the first time this weekend! :) Any recommendations for things I need to see?

Thanks, Sara, for your comments on Elephant. Glad you liked the piss and the human part of it, too.

Sara, thanks so much for reading and commenting on Peach. I have two daughters. This stuff haunts me. But at least I know it's out there for mitigation. I'm new and still looking around, look forward to reading all your stories!

I'm glad you liked Empty House, thanks for the nice comments,Sara.

Many thanks, sara t., for your kind response to "Bread, Fish, Serpent, Stone"!

Thank you for your comments on My Favorite Color. Based on your suggestions I read it again and agree that the last line is not needed.

Sara, thank you for your kind comment on "Hey Jude." Glad to meet you on here!

Thanks for your kind and generous response to "Jelly Doughnuts", Sara.
Very best,
RR

thank you very much for your kind comments on MILF!

Hi, Sara - thank you for your kind comment on 'Nobody Told Marni'. I'm really glad you liked it. M

Thanks Sara, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem.

Thanks, Sara, for your nice comments about Suite Loss.

Thanks so much for your comments on my poems, they're much appreciated :)

Thanks for reading my story, Sara!

Thanks,Sara. Yes, you may be right about my story, Without Consent. Does a guy exist who could be this remorseful? Would a teenager like Danny feel so bad so soon, after the event and then to carry that guilt for so long? Does his youth stand in his favour - seeing that the part of the brain, which controls impulse behaviour does not mature until 25? I don't know, I only know that I would forgive him.

Thanks for reading 15 Minutes More. I agree, it could use some tightening up. I assume the editor at Raphael's Village will take care of that.

Nice to get to know my colleagues over on the Blue.

Thanks Sara, for your very kind words about 'The Right Words' much appreciated.

I just wanted to say hi and thank you for your comment on Accidental Faith. Sorry for the late reply, but I seem to be slowly weening myself into this whole social networking thing. Not staying on top of it like I should. I'll make sure to check out your own work!

Hi Sara, I'm a bit late with this, but wanted to thank you for reading A Dream Life. foster.

Hi Sarah - thanks for the comment on the CHUD story. I had fun with that one. Glad to make your acquaintance!

Sara - thanks for reading & commenting on "My Beloved Favilla", and no, it was just the guitar, though I wanted the mis-conception. If I treated anyone like that, I wouldn't have been with them in the first place!
Walter

Let me know if you find that male/female computer piece. I'd be interested in reading it.

Thanks for the nice comment!

Hi Sara, thank you for commenting on "Algae Freunden."

Yup, it's on the blog and the mailer too. Thank you so much!

Hi Sara, I'm happy you liked my little chapter flash. Thanks for commenting.

Hi Sara, Thanks for reading A Life Twice Told - I'm glad you liked it.

Hello hello hello Sara! Thanks so much for the lovely comment you left on 634. It was very sweet of you & made me smile like a total idiot. I hope today is working out alright for you, where ever you may be!

Good points, Sara. I'm at the grandkids stage myself, and one of the joys of that is that you get to at least control the dosage! Ha! Not so easy during parenting time.

Sara, so nice to hear you also liked Walk on Water. I loved loved the scene where they were driving back from the beach and the brother was translating that song for his guest. Such a great, brutal movie.

Any luck finding your panic attack piece? Still love to read it. Thanks, again, for the kind words on Friction.

Thanks for your comments on my story, sara t.!

Thanks so much for reading my story and adding a comment. Hope to have the rest of the story up soon!

Thanks for the comment on "Visitation Hour." I'm glad you enjoyed it!.

Thanks for the read and comments on Cupcake! Your reaction is just what I was looking for.

Thanks again, Sara!
Jerry

Sara, thanks for your comment on Mary Magdalen. I love your Annie stories. Some of that achy indifference strikes home. I also love this from "I, Too, Dream:"
I dream that no mother
Will exhalt her sons death
To cope
With her pain

Yes, Sara!

Thank you, Sara!
Jerry

you're quite welcome. stay with it - it's a good thing.

whoops, i missed your kind wall note. Happy New Year.

Thanks for your kind and prompt comment! It's only been up about 3 minutes. You must have seen it quickly because we're both in Brooklyn. Wait... does the internet work like that?

hey, i hear you and i understand you. personally, i find it difficult to mix critique and encouragement on the "public wall". that's what the workshoppy groups are for ... i use the "hidden workshop" - you get to it via the doormat thread in the "workshop group"...or by messaging (and massaging if you want) susan gibb or dorothee lang...once the critiqueing starts it won't stop believe me...

Sara, thanks so much for checking out my story. And a fellow Brooklynite no less!

i'll be damned if i don't write on your wall to welcome you. i liked annie's chase, too!