sara t.


Location brooklyn, ny
Website http://

About Me

Im just a simple girl with a not so simple life.

Please people, critique away!!

If something i wrote sucks, I want to know in detail exactly how hard and why it sucked.

Likewise, if it rocked, rock my world with your compliments!!

Any favorite authors? Books?

"the god of small things" by Arundhati Roy

sara t.'s Wall

Roz Warren – Sep 04, 2012

Sara: Thanks for the kind words about How To Become A Great Writer! Glad I was on your radar and glad that you are now on mine.

Erin McGrath – Oct 11, 2011

Thank you, Sara, I am especially fond of the first line myself, I'm glad it ended up working. Thanks for the comment, I appreciate it!

Luke Tennis – Oct 09, 2011

Gosh, thanks so much, Sara! It is actually part of a story. There are a couple other stories, too, with this narrator. I'm new to fictionaut, and it seems to me that it's best to post short pieces. I could be wrong. I'd like to post longer stories, haven't tried it yet, though. But I do appreciate your comment!

Susan Rukeyser – Oct 07, 2011

Thanks so much for your comments on "Invasive Species." I love your response to it.

Darryl Price – Oct 04, 2011

sara t. it's always good to see you again. Thanks for the comment.

ABxx – Aug 02, 2010

Thanks so much for commenting, Sara. Looking forward to reading your work.

Bill Yarrow – Jul 07, 2010

Thanks, Sara, for your kind comments about "The Sky is Simply White."

J.B. Lacombe – Jun 01, 2010

Sara, thank you for reading and commenting on Eggshells. It has been a pleasure reading your work as well :)

J.B. Lacombe – May 28, 2010

Sara, thanks for your comment on Somebody to Love. I'm glad you liked that line!

Joan Stepp Smith – May 27, 2010

Much appreciate your comments on my poem, Leave Theory After The Ungodly Snow . Thanks, Sara.

Kait Mauro – May 26, 2010

Thank you for the comment on The Weight of Jade! I see you are from Brooklyn, I'm going to NYC for the first time this weekend! :) Any recommendations for things I need to see?

Myra King – May 25, 2010

Sara, thnak you so much for your kind words about Red Fox Rampant.

Michelle Elvy – May 25, 2010

Thanks, Sara, for your comments on Elephant. Glad you liked the piss and the human part of it, too.

Doug Bond – May 25, 2010

sara--thx for reading Folded Flower...glad the brevity worked...it helped having a word limit, even if re-writes put me slightly over!

Claire King – May 25, 2010

Sara, thanks so much for reading and commenting on Peach. I have two daughters. This stuff haunts me. But at least I know it's out there for mitigation. I'm new and still looking around, look forward to reading all your stories!

Martha Williams – May 24, 2010

Hi Sara - thanks so much for your comment on Hummingbird. I'm really glad you liked it. M

Myra King – May 23, 2010

I'm glad you liked Empty House, thanks for the nice comments,Sara.

Walter Bjorkman – May 22, 2010

Sara - thanks for the comments on Ties, I bow to your grace.

Stephanie Bobo – May 21, 2010

Many thanks, sara t., for your kind response to "Bread, Fish, Serpent, Stone"!

Ryder Collins – May 17, 2010

Thank you, Sara, for your kind comments on "Every time we kiss..."!

Matthew A. Hamilton – May 14, 2010

Thank you for your comments on My Favorite Color. Based on your suggestions I read it again and agree that the last line is not needed.

Jane Hammons – May 13, 2010

Thanks for your comments about the challenges and rewards of poetry.

J.L. – May 13, 2010

Sara, thank you for your kind comment on "Hey Jude." Glad to meet you on here!

Julie Innis – May 12, 2010

Thank you!!!

Rick Rofihe – May 09, 2010

Thanks for your kind and generous response to "Jelly Doughnuts", Sara.
Very best,
RR

Cherise Wolas – May 05, 2010

Sara, thanks for the lovely comments on Things I Should Have Done - #3, so glad you enjoyed it. That's the third, so far, in the series, #1 and #2 are up here too. Thanks for reading!

Meg Pokrass – May 05, 2010

thank you very much for your kind comments on MILF!

Stephanie Bobo – May 01, 2010

Thanks, Sara, for reading "Hammer Nail Nail" and your kind words!

Martha Williams – Apr 26, 2010

Hi, Sara - thank you for your kind comment on 'Nobody Told Marni'. I'm really glad you liked it. M

Beate Sigriddaughter – Apr 25, 2010

Thank you, Sara, for your comments on The Lucky Children, and for your comments on so many of my words. I truly appreciate it.

Myra King – Apr 25, 2010

Thanks Sara, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem.

Stephanie Bobo – Apr 25, 2010

Thank you Sara for reading "Classmates" and your kind words. I have been thinking about that a lot lately--how things people do that seem small or foolish can be a kind of bravery.

Myra King – Apr 21, 2010

Thanks, Sara, for your nice comments about Suite Loss.

Sara – Apr 15, 2010

Sara, thanks so much for reading my story. I appreciate your thoughts. You raised a great question, which I tried to answer over on the page. Hope that helps, some.

Kirsty Logan – Apr 14, 2010

Thanks so much for your comments on my poems, they're much appreciated :)

A. Pseudonym – Apr 13, 2010

Thanks for the comment on "Pacific", Sarah.

Tara – Apr 13, 2010

Thanks for reading my story, Sara!

Martha Williams – Apr 12, 2010

thanks, sara, for your thoughtful comments on 'mother of two sentences', much appreciated. just read your 'toothbrush' - really liked it. martha

Myra King – Apr 11, 2010

Thanks,Sara. Yes, you may be right about my story, Without Consent. Does a guy exist who could be this remorseful? Would a teenager like Danny feel so bad so soon, after the event and then to carry that guilt for so long? Does his youth stand in his favour - seeing that the part of the brain, which controls impulse behaviour does not mature until 25? I don't know, I only know that I would forgive him.

Beate Sigriddaughter – Apr 11, 2010

Thanks for reading Reunion. It's one that's quite close to my heart.

Matthew A. Hamilton – Apr 11, 2010

Thanks for reading 15 Minutes More. I agree, it could use some tightening up. I assume the editor at Raphael's Village will take care of that.

Myra King – Apr 11, 2010

Thanks, Sara, for your lovely comments on 'cake tin rusted'.

James Robison – Apr 11, 2010

Nice to get to know my colleagues over on the Blue.

James Robison – Apr 11, 2010

Thank you for your nice words about Claws.

Myra King – Apr 08, 2010

Thanks Sara, for your very kind words about 'The Right Words' much appreciated.

Myra King – Apr 07, 2010

Hi,Sara, I'm really glad you enjoyed my story. Rather cathartic to write but it took me along time to get it out there. I was lucky enough to win an open mic night with this piece and I was shaking the whole time I was reading it.

Scott A. Nicholson – Apr 06, 2010

I just wanted to say hi and thank you for your comment on Accidental Faith. Sorry for the late reply, but I seem to be slowly weening myself into this whole social networking thing. Not staying on top of it like I should. I'll make sure to check out your own work!

Foster Trecost – Apr 01, 2010

Hi Sara - thanks for reading Eight States Away. Your comments were really appreciated. foster.

Foster Trecost – Mar 29, 2010

Hi Sara, I'm a bit late with this, but wanted to thank you for reading A Dream Life. foster.

Jason McCormick – Mar 28, 2010

Thanks for the comments, Sara!

A. Pseudonym – Mar 26, 2010

Hi Sarah - thanks for the comment on the CHUD story. I had fun with that one. Glad to make your acquaintance!

Stephanie Bobo – Mar 26, 2010

sara t., thank you for your comments on "Maps"!

Walter Bjorkman – Mar 25, 2010

Sara - thanks for reading & commenting on "My Beloved Favilla", and no, it was just the guitar, though I wanted the mis-conception. If I treated anyone like that, I wouldn't have been with them in the first place!
Walter

John Woodington – Mar 25, 2010

Can you scan it and email it to me?

John Woodington – Mar 24, 2010

Let me know if you find that male/female computer piece. I'd be interested in reading it.

Thanks for the nice comment!

Jack Swenson – Mar 24, 2010

Sara: Thanks for your comment about my cats stories. I thought about changing the viewpoint of one when I paired them, then said to heck with it. I agree that the second one is a better story. True, too!

George LaCas – Mar 10, 2010

Hi Sara, thank you for commenting on "Algae Freunden."

Foster Trecost – Mar 09, 2010

Hi Sara, thanks for reading Cactus - I really appreciate your comments.

Sharanya Manivannan – Mar 08, 2010

Yup, it's on the blog and the mailer too. Thank you so much!

Sharanya Manivannan – Mar 08, 2010

Hi Sara - I haven't logged into Fictionaut too often lately so I have yet to catch up on your new posts, but Marcelle Heath dropped me a note to say that you had selected my piece as a Fictionaut Fave. Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

Foster Trecost – Mar 05, 2010

Hi Sara, I'm happy you liked my little chapter flash. Thanks for commenting.

Joshua Moses – Mar 02, 2010

thanks sara, I appreciate it.

Foster Trecost – Mar 02, 2010

Hi Sara, Thanks for reading A Life Twice Told - I'm glad you liked it.

Finnegan Flawnt – Feb 28, 2010

well, great piece, sara, what can i say. i see you're enjoying yourself and i'm enjoying reading your pieces.

Em dash – Feb 25, 2010

Hello hello hello Sara! Thanks so much for the lovely comment you left on 634. It was very sweet of you & made me smile like a total idiot. I hope today is working out alright for you, where ever you may be!

Julie Innis – Feb 24, 2010

Sara, thank you! I really appreciated your comments on "Sanctuary"!

Barry Friesen – Feb 22, 2010

Good points, Sara. I'm at the grandkids stage myself, and one of the joys of that is that you get to at least control the dosage! Ha! Not so easy during parenting time.

Jack Swenson – Feb 22, 2010

Sana, I appreciate the kind words about my stories. I agree with your comment about the last story; it's got more heft to it.

David Erlewine – Feb 22, 2010

Sara, so nice to hear you also liked Walk on Water. I loved loved the scene where they were driving back from the beach and the brother was translating that song for his guest. Such a great, brutal movie.

Katrina Gray – Feb 15, 2010

So glad you liked "Peach." What a lovely message to receive on this snowy winter morning. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment.

ChrisTopher Meidl – Feb 12, 2010

Any luck finding your panic attack piece? Still love to read it. Thanks, again, for the kind words on Friction.

pam rosenblatt – Feb 08, 2010

thank you, sara, for your comments on "winter's presence 2010". i'm happy you understood the poem. your feedback is greatly appreciated!

Carol Reid – Feb 08, 2010

Thanks for your comments on my story, sara t.!

ChrisTopher Meidl – Feb 08, 2010

Do let me know if/when you post the panic attack story. I'd love to read it. Thanks, again, for commenting on Friction.

Kirthana Ramisetti – Feb 02, 2010

Thanks so much for reading my story and adding a comment. Hope to have the rest of the story up soon!

Cynthia Reeser – Jan 29, 2010

I enjoyed reading about Annie, and look forward to reading more about her. Cheers!

John Woodington – Jan 28, 2010

Thanks for the comment on "Visitation Hour." I'm glad you enjoyed it!.

Sara – Jan 28, 2010

hi sara, thanks again for your thoughts on my work. i see you've got quite a few posted so i've got to play catch-up!

Johnsienoel – Jan 25, 2010

Thanks for the read and comments on Cupcake! Your reaction is just what I was looking for.

Sara – Jan 24, 2010

Sara, thanks so much for your generous comments on Jew. I look forward to reading your work.

Jerry Ratch – Jan 21, 2010

Thanks again, Sara!
Jerry

Beate Sigriddaughter – Jan 21, 2010

Sara, thanks for your message! I continue to be amazed that those lines should be controversial, but I've been around long enough to know how that would be so, of course. I come from a time when families were still announcing the death of their sons, brothers, husbands, fathers with "proud sorrow."
Yes re Facebook. But you'll have to contact me, as I don't think I'll have the patience to discover the right Sara T. And I have to admit that I'm not terribly active on Facebook.

Beate Sigriddaughter – Jan 21, 2010

Sara, thanks for your comment on Mary Magdalen. I love your Annie stories. Some of that achy indifference strikes home. I also love this from "I, Too, Dream:"
I dream that no mother
Will exhalt her sons death
To cope
With her pain

Yes, Sara!

Townsend Walker – Jan 19, 2010

Sara,

Thank you for reading and commenting on my story.

Townsend

Jerry Ratch – Jan 18, 2010

Thank you, Sara!
Jerry

David Erlewine – Jan 18, 2010

Thanks so much, Sara! Whagt a nice comment re Movie Night. Much obliged. D

Larry Strattner – Jan 13, 2010

you're quite welcome. stay with it - it's a good thing.

Sharanya Manivannan – Jan 11, 2010

Thank you, Sara! I really appreciate your kind words about my writing. I've started following you here on Fictionaut and will check out your pieces as well. All the best!

David Erlewine – Jan 09, 2010

whoops, i missed your kind wall note. Happy New Year.

Larry Strattner – Jan 05, 2010

Thanks for your comments. Appreciated.

Sean Ferrell – Jan 03, 2010

Thanks for your kind and prompt comment! It's only been up about 3 minutes. You must have seen it quickly because we're both in Brooklyn. Wait... does the internet work like that?

Lou Godbold – Dec 31, 2009

Oooh! That's so weird! I did just read 'Breathing.' Check out my comment. (That's the second time today Fictionaut seems to be working as a kind of Greater Consciousness.) Gulp!

Finnegan Flawnt – Dec 30, 2009

hey, i hear you and i understand you. personally, i find it difficult to mix critique and encouragement on the "public wall". that's what the workshoppy groups are for ... i use the "hidden workshop" - you get to it via the doormat thread in the "workshop group"...or by messaging (and massaging if you want) susan gibb or dorothee lang...once the critiqueing starts it won't stop believe me...

Julie Innis – Dec 29, 2009

Sara - love love love your work! Especially curious to know if Annie might become part of a longer story? Not that she needs to - Annie's Chase works exceptionally well at its present length. Looking forward to reading mroe of your work.

Julie Innis – Dec 29, 2009

Sara, thanks so much for checking out my story. And a fellow Brooklynite no less!

Finnegan Flawnt – Dec 28, 2009

oh, you will get feedback here, especially (big secret) if you give feedback to others. the secret of any community existence: give more than/as you get. cheers! (will check it out...next few days...tired now, late in europe!)

Finnegan Flawnt – Dec 28, 2009

i'll be damned if i don't write on your wall to welcome you. i liked annie's chase, too!

You must log in to write on sara t.'s wall.