Thanks for the feedback on Farewell Party. I think I'm going to scale it back even further. My focus was what you had--on rumor--but I came to see two things going on were distracting.
your picture scared me! luckily, you're friends with the gentle julie innis who puts all her dark hearts into stories so i won't run from you. welcome, joshua.
Um, WOW re your comments to my story. Dude, you are no joke. I need to step up my editing game. You were born the same year as my younger brother, who is also about 3x smarter than me. Welcome to F-aut and thanks so much. Will give my story some serious attention soon in light of your prescient, amazing comments. Julie wasn't kidding about your skills as a reader/editor. And I like Chabon...will have to check out that story. D
Hi, Joshua. Thanks for reading and faving "Before the Door." The triplets? A Muse thing!
Posting the novel I'm working on, The Monkey's Uncle, to http://the-monkeys-uncle.blogspot.com/. Please read at your own risk.
Thanks for the feedback on Farewell Party. I think I'm going to scale it back even further. My focus was what you had--on rumor--but I came to see two things going on were distracting.
Thank you for your workshoppy comments! I really appreciate the time and thought you gave my story.
Hi Joshua, and welcome. Thanks for reading and commenting on my story - I really appreciate your time.
Hey Joshua. Thanks for the nice comment. I dig your story.
I've never seen this man before in my life!
I'm with Finnegan! Your picture is scarier than your reviews, man. I LOVE IT.
your picture scared me! luckily, you're friends with the gentle julie innis who puts all her dark hearts into stories so i won't run from you. welcome, joshua.
Um, WOW re your comments to my story. Dude, you are no joke. I need to step up my editing game. You were born the same year as my younger brother, who is also about 3x smarter than me. Welcome to F-aut and thanks so much. Will give my story some serious attention soon in light of your prescient, amazing comments. Julie wasn't kidding about your skills as a reader/editor. And I like Chabon...will have to check out that story. D
Hi Josh, I think you'll find a bit of comfort here among contemporaries. We're a friendly group. Anxious to read your work.
Welcome...Joshua to the workshoppy group. Hope my comments help a bit. I dig the story a lot.
you're welcome and thank you in return!
Welcome, Joshua!
Welcome! A friend of Julie's is a friend of ours.
Hey! Good to see you here.