I really appreciate the feedback. I haven't worked on this in a while, so the initial "fervor" is gone. I think I have to go back and make the changes, maybe having the son play a more minor role, still taking stuff, but maybe by accident having the box of letters. And starting with the narrator relating some clues to he and his wife's life together, how he thought they had a perfect life, and then to find out she might have had someone else but he'll never really know. Yeah, I'm feeling it.
go to the faq that jurgen wrote up, it explains how groups work pretty well. you can add a story that you have published on f'naut simply by clicking "group it." etc etc
yeah, i have been at MR for a while now, a great place--
it's out at Inertia and the NPR 3 minute fiction contest...these are the rejects (none returned with comments, not that I expect that) Monkey Bicycle, Quick Fiction, Frigg, Mud Lucious, Vestal Review, Necessary Fiction
Thanks, Tara! He's Leo. In addition to the number of charming services he provides as a cat, his photogenic mug makes for an excellent avatar. I'd recommend him to you, but yours is quite nice already, and it seems you have some feline writing buddies of your own, as well. (Loved this interview: http://artandliterature.wordpress.com/2009/03/18/ten-questions-for-tara-laskowski/ ) Cheers...and [a belated] congratulations, too!
Heya, Tara.
Yjsmld gpt yjr jr;[ pm Dvstu z,pbor/ (In other words: Thanks for the help on Scary Movie.)
indeed, Tara, the SLQ artwork was perfect!!
Damn, "Little Girls" looks perfect on SLQ. Loved it when I read a draft on the naut and love it even more now. Great job.
I really appreciate the feedback. I haven't worked on this in a while, so the initial "fervor" is gone. I think I have to go back and make the changes, maybe having the son play a more minor role, still taking stuff, but maybe by accident having the box of letters. And starting with the narrator relating some clues to he and his wife's life together, how he thought they had a perfect life, and then to find out she might have had someone else but he'll never really know. Yeah, I'm feeling it.
thanks Tara for the words on the Gratcher.
hi tara,
thanks for joining up--
go to the faq that jurgen wrote up, it explains how groups work pretty well. you can add a story that you have published on f'naut simply by clicking "group it." etc etc
yeah, i have been at MR for a while now, a great place--
all best,
gary
SL was a no.
it's out at Inertia and the NPR 3 minute fiction contest...these are the rejects (none returned with comments, not that I expect that) Monkey Bicycle, Quick Fiction, Frigg, Mud Lucious, Vestal Review, Necessary Fiction
Thanks...that piece remains homeless. There must be a hole in it that I'm not seeing.
Hi Tara,
Thanks for stopping in on my comma piece. :) Hope your own work is going great! All warmest, H
hi tara,
thanks for taking the time to read "gail" and for your comment--
all best in your work,
gary
Thanks, Tara! He's Leo. In addition to the number of charming services he provides as a cat, his photogenic mug makes for an excellent avatar. I'd recommend him to you, but yours is quite nice already, and it seems you have some feline writing buddies of your own, as well. (Loved this interview: http://artandliterature.wordpress.com/2009/03/18/ten-questions-for-tara-laskowski/ ) Cheers...and [a belated] congratulations, too!
Hi Tara, thanks for your kind note. Kudos on the 09 Fish Fellowship! That's awesome. She's one of my favorite writers.
Has anyone ever told you that you look like Holly Hunter? You do!
Hi Tara!
That's Lily. She's actually Ellen Parker's pug, but we've sort of adopted each other. :)
Tara, congratulations!
there she is. invite art so he doesn't fuss. I'm out of invites (I think).
second that. go GMU.
congrats on the 09 fish fellowship