you know, yvette, you are the first and only person i know who also read/likes waltari's book "the egyptian". i loved this book so much! thanks also for your close reading...this made me change an attribute (too much 'tiny') but i don't understand your crit rgd the bride. do you want her taller? i thought she was tall enough. or do you want soviet toaster?
Thanks for going over my story, Fin recently. I've reworked it a bit based on your comments and those of others, and I think it is far better thanks to your suggestions. I have two ready to send out now, and am of course saddened just a little to see them go...
Hi Yvette, I've been in Pensacola, and now my brother from New York is visiting, so I've been staying off my computer pretty much. It's good to have a break from it now and then, I guess. Nice to hear from you though. xxoononnie
Thank you for those kind words. They light up the work that I do.
Thank you for reading and the kind comments on Skin.
And where are those wonderful stories, Ms. Y? Tap,tap, tap. Thanks for reading and commenting on East River.
Xoxoxoxo,
Lucinda
Thank you Yvette I am so pleased you read and liked my latest chapter of my novel, X!
thx for your lovely comment on my little poem, yvette--cheers, g
...and le guin, you have le guin on your list. score!
you know, yvette, you are the first and only person i know who also read/likes waltari's book "the egyptian". i loved this book so much! thanks also for your close reading...this made me change an attribute (too much 'tiny') but i don't understand your crit rgd the bride. do you want her taller? i thought she was tall enough. or do you want soviet toaster?
Thanks for the feedback on "Minority Report" and other pieces.
Thanks again for your great feedback, Yvette!
Hi Yvette,
Thanks for your kind comments on "Three Dreamers." I appreciate your advice as well - and think I'll trim that dialogue :)
Thanks for going over my story, Fin recently. I've reworked it a bit based on your comments and those of others, and I think it is far better thanks to your suggestions. I have two ready to send out now, and am of course saddened just a little to see them go...
Thanks much for your comments on my story!
To taste the words--now that's a real writer's answer.I very much like the brave listing of Seuss and Sendak.Very cool!
Hi Yvette, I've been in Pensacola, and now my brother from New York is visiting, so I've been staying off my computer pretty much. It's good to have a break from it now and then, I guess. Nice to hear from you though. xxoononnie
Great, Yvette, so happy it worked out!
Welcome Yvette. Glad you found the place. Lots of inspiration here!