Johnsienoel

Thank you for reading and commenting on my “Alice in Wonderland Syndrome” story!

Glad you liked "Dis-Ease." Thanks for commenting on it.

I empathise with your empathy with birds and pity their problems with buildings. For evidence of this, see the last sentence in my piece 'the phallicism of skyscrapers'.

thanks so much for your kind note on my short. my computer has been acting out for 24 hours but as soon as she's back to her usual self i look forward to catching up on your work.

Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, From the Kitchen Of my Childhood. : -)

Thanks for stopping by my wall, Johnsienoel. Yes, it does seem like they listen. When I first went into these woods, they of course scattered like roaches when the lights turned on (except the geese, they rarely give ground). Now, its almost as if they are offended if I dont call hello or give a wave. And that's just over a month's time. For all of our scatterings in life as artists, familiarity DOES breed comfort, which is not a bad thing.

The direct language is one feature in the story. And that works. I like the way the dialogue moves in the piece. Good form. And especially like the parenthetical asides. The layers are there. It's an impacting read. I like it, Jennifer - and obviously Legendary did.

Hey! M&P is reading for their next issue, I'm pretty sure - send them something asap.

hey - a fellow downanddirty alum! Love the Legendary. Good to see your work here as well.

Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments. I look forward to reading your work.

punt away, jen. punt punt punt.

Hola, thank you for your overly kind comments. I am inviting you to my workshoppy group (it's "private" and stories there aren't searchable on google. Welcome and thanks again. D

Thanks Mel!