by Myra King
I should have let sleeping dogs lie. Should have let Tilly sleep the gentle death of the innocent. I blame the internet. Somehow, when I emailed all my friends about my sad loss, it seemed to understand and ‘pop ups' waving little flags covered in dog and cat paw prints kept appearing at the top of my pages. Resurrect-a-pet will have your beloved pet back by your side quick as one dog gestation period! it flashed, and just like its namesake, the site kept resurrecting itself as fast as I closed it.
In the end, just to shut it up, I opened it and then, like the site's owners had hoped, I was hooked. All they needed from me was a substantial, but isn't your beloved pet worth it? payment, and some of my pet's DNA.
For sentimental reasons, I had snipped off a bit of Tilly's beautiful fur on her death bed. She is/was a Saluki and her ear fur had/does hang around her face like a golden mane. I'm sorry to be talking like this but, as I type, she sits here perfectly still and staring. I can't say ‘Tilly' because I know it's not her, well not entirely her at any rate. At least she made me give up smoking, for that I should be grateful I guess.
Anyway, I sent away the sample of Tilly's fur and a cheque for 2,000 dollars, the other 2,000 to be paid on delivery.
A week later, I heard back from Resurrect-a-pet. The fur I'd sent was not enough, something to do with having no root follicles. Not enough DNA. I would have to exhume her and get more of what they needed.
There was no way I could do it myself; my stomach and heart were not ready for such confrontation. One of my friends did it for me in the end, making the short trip to the Pet Cemetery and returning with a plastic packet of what looked like not only hair with follicles, but also skin and something else. I packed it off without scrutiny. Now I wished I'd checked it more carefully.
In what seemed like a ridiculously short space of time, there she was: Tilly MarkII, with her DNA-certified certificate (not worth the paper it was printed on as it turned out) and looking as cute as a backpack full of baby koalas.
I'd been held in a suspended sort of grief, alternating between crying and hoping, so my initial reaction was pure joy and gratitude.
But that was not to last, there seemed to be this bluish aura about her that I had not noticed the first time round in puppy hood. And she was very twitchy.
And this is it, dear reader: in Australia grows a beautiful tree, pyranthus curlyfolii purpureus of glorious purple hue and leaves like tiny feathers. Even though it's so gorgeous, it's also highly flammable because of its eucalyptus oil, so folk are discouraged from planting it in their backyards.
How flammable? Well it has been known to burst into flames when people have brushed against it while walking past and, after scientists realised its incendiary qualities, several people who were once believed to have spontaneously combusted, have actually (with back research) been found to have been within six feet of the tree while smoking. Their last words were probably along the lines of, “Oh, what a beautiful tr...” or something of equal gush.
Apparently, the gardener at the Pet Cemetery hadn't known this, as there are several wonderful specimens of pyranthus curlyfolii purpureus adorning the grounds, weeping their feathery purple leaves over the tiny graves.
I know Tilly MarkII can't help it; she can't know her running around causes the friction which sparks off her coat, and sends it moulting with such destruction to the ground.
I have to protect her from the authorities but I feel so guilty. What if someone is killed next time? Of course I'm going to move back to the city. Away from so much bushland just waiting to be ignited.
Her spots of purple, with hairs like tiny feathers, are the problem.
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Writing prompt from Meg Pokrass' yAWP: write a story based on an animal facts
Animal fact: Cloned animals may have different spots to the original, due to varying environmental conditions in the womb.
I don't know quite what to say on this Myra, so much would depend on if it or to what extent it is a real life telling. But I do know it is told in a way that I will not miss this ending coming, even if my house was on fire. It brings to mind a 21st Century look like Waugh did in The Loved One in the sixties I believe. Tragic and darkly laughable. Fav.
Ah, yes, we have some pretty dangerous things here in Aussie land! Amongst other things you would have heard of course, of drop bears?
Thanks Walter for the fav.
Great story. I want an electrified dog, now.
This is very funny Myra, and so nicely done.
Loved "I blame the internet. Somehow, when I emailed all my friends about my sad loss, it seemed to understand and ‘pop ups' waving little flags covered in dog and cat paw prints kept appearing at the top of my pages. "
Dark humour with little flashes of fire - hilarious.
Lovely big chuckles from quite a sinister tale. Great one, Myra!
Oh wow, this was very unexpected and highly entertaining. :) Very creative. I was curious when I read the little excerpt line.
Great piece, Myra. I really like how this story unfolds. Good writing.
Good writing, fun to read, clever and entertaining story,
Pure imagination. So nicely done.
An absolutely bizarre riot, Myra! Ah those incendiary relationships and the lengths we will go to (not) ignite (extinguish) the flames.
I pictured you writing the bit about the collecting of DNA with eyes squeezed shut and the keyboard at arm's length!Yuk. A great imaginary tale, written so well we almost believe it - with a warning note. Don't mess about with nature! A great story again, Myra, and of course, a Fave.
Thanks Matthew, I'm not sure I'd want one really.
Cherise,Sam,J, Sheldon,Johnsienoel,Kait, Claire, Martha and Marit,
Thank you so much for your comments - I certainly had fun writing it!
great stuff. love how the tone carries this piece.
Thanks so much, Sara, it was a fun piece to write!
So imaginative and strange, Myra! So fun. The animal prompt has brought out the wild!! Enjoyed this so much!
Thanks Michelle :-)
A pet lovers delight. Good story.
Thanks, Estelle, I'm pleased you enjoyed it!
Nice story, Myra. I liked the sci-fi premise.
Thanks, George :-)
Love how this is strange and sci-fi yet somehow still feels realistic. Really fun to read.
Jenny, it was fun to write too! Thanks for your nice comments.
That's a pretty interesting story. I like how you mention quitting smoking and then we find out why.
Very inventive, and your telling of it is hilarious in that odd, dark, sad way. You almost believe Tilly II is out there, poor dog.
Thanks, Kari :-)
Thanks, Ajay, yes, as you know in fiction the premise has to be signalled, if it is not to be the frowned upon, rabbit out of the box ending. Pleased you liked it!
Well, this is just strange.
I usually don’t read dog stories because they have a habit of ending badly but I took a chance. Glad I did. I’ve noticed you’re not afraid of taking chances either, both with content and style. I admire that in writing, less in sampling exotic foods. My excuse for entering the unknown is because I have nothing to lose or don’t know any better – it’s your choice.
I suppose what I’m trying to say is that lots of authors find a comfort zone and live happily ever after – but that’s so boring. I’ve just finished two of your pieces now, both totally different in voice and style. I’m impressed by your courage to experiment.
Thanks, Dean :-)
This is a cool story. (Of course I gave up smoking on account of a pet, too, once, but merely because I thought I couldn't possibly feel worse after he died, so wanted to get the other awfulness over with, too.)
Thanks so much, Beate.
Interesting story!
Kevin, glad you enjoyed it :-)
I agree with Mr. Nair. That was excellent foreshadowing you executed. I had to go back and re-read that part and found myself smiling over the twist. Well done.
Thanks, HM :-)
Nice one Myra. Made me think of the 6th day at first, but it took a turn from there to under the tree, and that was a nice touch. Quite a problem with such a pet, isn't it, if you can't even ... well, pet it.
Thanks Augend. Yes indeed you are right!
The 6th day? - must be a movie - I'll look it up.