It rained hard all morning. They had to raise their voices to be heard over the noise of it. Beak's toes, dangling out under the awning, were numb from the pelting, nearly frozen. Beak always wore sandals.
"Do you want to..." He leaned forward. "Do you want to hear some jazz this evening?”
They were drinking coffee outside the Brasserie du Montparnasse.
"Where?" Margaret asked. "To tell you the truth I've come to hate the jazz. No offense."
Beak took no offense. He lit a slim, brown cigarette and drew on it. "But have you heard the flugelhorn? I mean, have you heard a particularly adept flugelhorn?"
Margaret allowed that she had not. There were many things she'd not heard. She felt, however, that she'd heard enough.
The waiter balanced a tray of fresh coffees, holding a menu over his head. They took the cups and nodded their thanks. The waiter rushed away. The rain blew sideways now, the daisy in the center of the table swung round in its vase. Beak pushed his chair back further under the awning, protecting his feet.
"Let's leave," Margaret said.
Beak spooned sugar into his cup and stirred in a leisurely fashion.
"Okay," she said, "but after this. Immediately after this. Maybe we could see a film. Do you want to see a film? I'm so sick of the jazz."
"What?"
"I'm so sick of the jazz!" She shivered. Really, it was not a good day. "My stomach hurts."
Beak lifted his newspaper and flipped both sides back and folded it in half, running the side of his hand along the crease.
"It says here..."
"It's the coffee. It's too strong. My stomach's a ball of acid right now." Margaret wrapped her arms around her middle.
"Well, stop drinking it then. Here, I'll take it." Beak pulled her cup towards him. "It says here the flugelhorn is the deepest, most mysterious of the jazz instruments. Furthermore..."
"I'll call Carolyn. Maybe she and Jack would like to see a film." Margaret watched a drenched cat dash across the avenue. It raced up a chestnut tree after a squirrel.
“Furthermore, a particularly adept flugelhorn, the sound of it, the timbre, has the ability to transport. Did you hear that, Margaret? Transport! Now. Wouldn't you like to be transported?”
"Beak, we're the only ones out here. I'm cold. My stomach hurts. Do I want to be transported? Yes. Take me home."
"Do you know that one side of your face is a little lower than the other?"
"Beak..."
"I'm serious! Your mouth, your eyelid. Margaret, have you had a stroke? Look, it stopped raining! Now you're being silly. Sit down, sit down! I promise we'll go in five minutes.”
"I wonder if we should get a divorce."
"Now there's a question! Sit down, we can talk about it. We can discuss it reasonably. Are you sure you're up for it, though? Maybe we should discuss it tomorrow. We'll go to a film tonight. We'll go with Jack and Carolyn. We'll have the best evening of our lives. We'll get very drunk and then go home and have exceedingly passionate sex and in the morning, we'll discuss it. But you..." Beak touched Margaret's nose,"...won't feel like it anymore."
Kathy, I remember this one!
I love especially the way Margaret calls it
"the jazz."
:)
* fave *
I love jazz but am not offended. The flugelhorn is great. Reminds me a little of "Hills Like White Elephants." Great work. *
Oddly chilling.*
The last stage, when all discussion has only one subject. Masterful, to lay out so much so deftly in dialogue.
Appreciate the reads and kind words, Dennis, Amanda, John, and David!
I'm throwing out all my pens now.
"Now there's a question! Sit down, we can talk about it. We can discuss it reasonably. Are you sure you're up for it, though? Maybe we should discuss it tomorrow. We'll go to a film tonight."
Oh my. ***
Oh, thank you, Sam! But I'd be very upset with you if you threw out all your pens. Don't do it.
I'm afraid to look at the other comments to see if anyone else said this: Flugelhorn or no, this sure as hell transported me. In fact, I'm laffing so hard the librarians have begun circling and closing in on me... *****
Just about had my laffter under control...then I read Amanda's comment.
Yay, Mathew, your laffter makes me happy here. Thanks for reading!
Something vaguely Salingeresque with this one.*
So chillingly real and deftly written. The last two paragraphs are killer. *
Thanks, Oliver (I'll take "Salingeresque" as a compliment) and thanks, Daniel!
Flugelhorn is a great instrument.
Fine piece, this.
I think this is a charming vignette between spouses/lovers. It reminds me of convos with my husband. I like how she says "the Jazz", too. *
Thanks Gary! Thanks, Charlotte! Appreciate the reads and comments.
A world in a teacup. Sharp dialog, too.*
Thanks so much, James.
"I've come to hate the jazz."
Something so beautiful and complicated, a marriage as hard to define as improv, has suddenly become sour and the musicians, both of them, have seen their flutes and saxophones and stand up bass guitars melt. Isn't that something?
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"There were many things she'd not heard. She felt, however, that she'd heard enough." *
Bud, your comments always qualify as their own perfect prose poems. Thank you. And thanks so much, Jane!
I love this because they're people I know. Beak, for all his jazz loving, needs to start listening. Wonderful. **
Kathy, I just love your stories.
Thanks, Loren and James. I really appreciate the read and kind words.
Late to the party, but enjoyed. Finely wrought!*
Thanks so much, Gary!
What Gary Powell said. ***
Thanks kindly, Tara!
Perfect snapshot!
Oh, thanks so much, Epiphany!
I thought I posted a comment here yesterday, but apparently I was so consumed I forgot to actually hit the send button. Amazing work.*** Ditto what Sam said.
Ha, Jen, I'm pretty sure I've done the same thing! Thanks!
Love the detail of the "Flugelhorn". It fits his character. Wonderful descriptions and not without sly humor. "*"
Love this: "There were many things she'd not heard. She felt, however, that she'd heard enough." *
Kyle, thank you and I'm glad you found the humor here. : )
Thanks, Beate!
I have to say it improves life (and for a year that is the only test in my book!) to read your stories again, Kathy. I feel the shiver of the weather in the story and her visceral fatigue at that sense of nothing and their togetherness in it and his other direction: his enthusiasm for the jazz. *
What a nice thing to say, Ann, thanks so much!
"I'm serious! Your mouth, your eyelid. Margaret, have you had a stroke? - Love that line.
Steven, thank you!
The name 'Beak' alone lifts this story to great heights.*
Oh, thank you! i can't remember now where I came up with that. Appreciate the read, Tim.
I was wondering who was going to "win" all the way through. Now I know who is going to "lose.". You had me at "Beak's toes, dangling out under the awning," Totally absorbing dialogue. More please.
Thanks so much, Carl! Glad you enjoyed.
yes! *
I forgot to add: Yes, Yes!
Thanks for the 3 yeses, Jerry Ratch. : )
This story reminds me of Kathy Fish! *
(Your book arrived. Thanks for the writing lessons)
Thanks, Ramon! Hope you enjoy the book.
I don't know why stories stay up here as long as they do, but I want to thank everyone who read and commented on this odd story. I really appreciate it.