The world moves its roving glass eye
around in front of you like a
dog trying to flip over a frisbee,
as if trying to show you how
the loveliness of all things here and yet
there, from an anything goes, different,
always shifting, perspective restores a single vision
to the dreamer of dreams. I can
appreciate that. Everything wants to get noticed.
Still some things ever need to be
magnified by the poets and scientists who
live deeply in our sleepy heads. And some things
need to simply be placed gently into the
ear canal of a shoreline surfing Cypraea
maculifera and offered up with a little silent bow,
humility to the latest sun child to show his curly face, the magnificent wind's beard, or
the baking day's bread at morning's fresh handsome bang bang like a quiet fool's last minute
manna from heaven-- you don't get to
eat the stuff, but just watch it explode, little by
little, into shadows and light, shadows and
light, shadow, then light. But the only
true focus here comes into being for
me when you, who are surely the
placard of this poem's campaign for peace, lay your curved
and carving pink lips along a simple undulating
coral line around your wonderfully spaced smooth
columellar teeth and speak my name, like a little knock on a forbidden door. The words come
out like secret butterflies from a well
hidden wishing hole. It's a striking and
somewhat unsettling phenomenon to say the least.
I didn't invent any of this you
know. You're your own invention in that
body's sense. Someone else could have taken that same
mouth for instance and used it as
a slide rule. I don't know. But
you've managed a peculiar, impossible instrument, capable
of laughing and singing at the same
time, like a bird whistle. I've noticed
this turns and creates the edges of
certain tree-growth boundaries, within just about any
kind of weather to come around, to the fore, to
also contend with for one's anxiously awaiting attention span--
with the extreme noise level exactness of a new pencil
sharpener. How am I not to take
notice of such incredibly wonderful things? You make things
new to my burned out eyes. You
boost sub woofers nailed behind the lit
fixed points hanging there against the clouds
into thinking they should just let it all
hang out and shine like the devil.
Darryl Price 051010
Bonus poems:
This Is A Familiar Finger Thrusting
between the bars of a faraway life.
This then is like a thought or miniature
note simply floating through each and every
wall. I can do that only because I have the nerve--
there is no other way to get these words
to say their business to you. Don't worry.
They are housebroken for the most part and come with their own
complete sentences. All you have to do
is let them swim nude in your pages. They'll only
last as long as you are awakened and yet still dreaming.
In the morning you might notice a
bush outside your window has suddenly
blossomed over night with an extra set
of purple flowers meant for the lucky ones inside.
Darryl Price 051210
Just An Observation
I'm on my way. But that
doesn't quite mean what you think
it does. It means I can't
stop myself from the pull
of the waves anymore
with their many mouths full
of arms instead of teeth.
They'll reach me walking eventually
and I'll go dancing
into a hole in
the ocean. And little
by splashing little I'll have to
become nothing more than
the book of watery
paper my sweetest poems
were written on so long ago for only
you. Until then I go
through every climb watching
for the kinds of living
signs that there is something
more to be said by me
that only exists on
the mathematical planes of
faith along with some impossible late night
luck. One can't
help but be willing to
believe that an end is
only a beginning
again for at least someone
somewhere.After all
nothing stops happening
to everything that is.
That's where the land begins
and the trees take over.
Still the sky waits in a
jealous huff to release
the vicious winds upon
you should you even dare to enter
the castle grounds at
any unusual time.You're free of
course to go around. Around
your feelings. Around
your dreams. Around your desires.
Around your own beautiful
packages.Around having any kind of
new fun in place of the old. The smoldering fires filled with stars
struggling to keep on flaring in spite of the cold periodically catch fire
from within and without--
like coals in a circle
of smoldering blackly curling
ash.But look at it this
way, we got as far as
this one poem together.That's as
good as any modern day miracle to me.
Darryl Price 051410
I Could So Easily Throw Back All The Bullshit
being tossed on me like water off a tiger's whisker
to their retirement pastures for one second more of
your uprising face like the sun and moon's lips combined.
I'd put my whole head inside their angry cape's glaring red
mouth like an open door to breaking for freedom for
all my best enemies to run for swords outstretched my love before choosing any
raid of beautiful flowers for the tops of my own simple
dreams if it meant that above all the glorified
muscular din I could hear your one original voice
signing my name off to the clouds.That's what it comes down to for me.
The very softness of your soul sound has turned
me into a silent listener's listener.I want to
be just left alone now with the headphones of life firmly forever in place. I
have made my choice. They might not like it,
because it ends the afternoon's frothy entertainments, because it
spells the departure from the party train at last,
but I swear I am ready to pick up every last one of
your suitcases and carry them all like a good
little monkey to wherever you are going-- even if
that means from place to place.I have removed
the nails from around my shoes. I have fallen
through the open airplane's sucking door. I have heard the
glistening rocket's engines blasting off their own last fuel cells
to the cemetery of the lost forever past.There's
nothing left of me.Here is all that amazing glory for
the taking while there with you is a new
life filled to the brim with giving it all as you go through. A thing
they absolutely abhor I can tell you. How thoughtless. How truly dull.How
boring.But let the frauds continue their gambling games without
me.Until I saw you I had no idea
I was just the house martin taking a bath in a concrete bowl in front of the whole watching world. I thought I
was brave in my tiny birdbath of a way
for puffing out my feathers to the slightest provided
shadow.But your presence showed me another reason to
want to use my wings. And not just to
fly home again.I had no idea that I was made
to be with me.I know it sounds funny. I'm
willing to be the fool. But I am no
longer lost and looking.I recognize us as the land to
which I have always truly belonged. Thus I wave my
flag. I sign my name. I dare to leave
the group. That is the beginning of my final breath to you all.
That I sailed around the unknown world to get to you.
That tomorrow is still on the horizon's warming plate, ready to be eaten.
Darryl Price 042710
You Made the Mistake
of being somewhere
you are tonight. Wait.
That thought is gone. In
its place is a song.
I just don't care if
it's old or brand new
as long as it's true.
We'll make our own beauty
out of the fact
of our being or
not. You can't plan for
these rare things. You may
get stars that only
bloom once in a hundred
years, or you may
get a sulking child-
like sky that doesn't
approve of your happiness.
We'll have to
make do with the light
in each other's eyes.Okay?
Darryl Price 0512210
Love the title! & I'm also very much liking the rhythm of this. It puts me in mind of Berryman.
So, so beautiful - just breathtaking.
Your poems always transport me to some ethereal place, and you're a wonderful guide.
This is nice work, DP. I like the rhythm of this form.
This is vintage...rare form, man. It does have a tac-tac-tac feel to it. You succeeded there and throughout. That closing stanza, man. It's one of those I kind of want to just retype to see how it felt to write those words.
"...hanging there behind the clouds/ into thinking they should just let it/ hang out and shine like the devil."
you know what I think Darryl? i think you should be a song writer. Yes, your lyrics demand a tune.
Darryl, I like to think I have a pretty extensive vocabulary, but I've got my dictionary out (something I don't need to usually pull out from my shelf as I sit here reading on fictionaut), and I'm looking up columellar, and I'm looking up maculifera (which my dictionary doesn't have). So know I know what columellar means, but I don't know about maculifera, what I do know....
This is a lovely love poem.
And I agree with Sara T,. time to put your writing to music.
Thank you all so very much. I know your lives must be very busy and I appreciate your time and your kind words. A maculifera is a kind of shell.By the way I used to be in several bands when I was younger.
"The words come / out like secret butterflies from a well / hidden wishing hive." God, I love that line. Love it all. Also "We'll make our own beauty
out of the fact / of our being or
not."
Darryl, you speak to the space in me where over-educated theorist, slightly embarrassed romantic, and happily situated regular joe all come together for some deeply satisfying conversation.
Darryl,
You have the voice of a creator, but also that of a translator - of the inner thoughts and images of a creator - make any sense?
Beautiful and thoughtful throughout all pieces.
I thought I'd commented on this one before, but oh well. It's one to read again and again. Beautiful work as always, Darryl.
These are all knockout poems, D.P. As always, your original way of looking at the world has me thinking in different ways. I so loved "I Could Easily Throw Back All Those Bulls," and its wonderful momentum keeps opening and opening. This is such a brave declarative "here I am" poem. Lucky the recipient of this love poem. Bravo. Keep putting it out there!
A powerful orator of prose:
These were the most divine lines -
"me when you who are surely the
placard of this poem lay your curved and carving lips along a simple undulating
pink line around your wonderfully spaced smooth
columellar teeth and speak"
d,
you just keep rolling, baby--
the lines, how they give themselves, one after another
so generous, aiming for grace,
your poet's heart
All these poems are like the waves of the ocean at different times, neap or spring tide - with all their current ebb and flow. I felt like a boat being carried, buoyed along by your words. Your work is mesmerizing, Darryl. Fav
I think the first is my fave, though all have given great food for thought, imagery, and music. Kudos!
Lots to savor here, DP. I'll print out to take with me on my journey this week. Lovely lines all, but the best? The first - The world moves its roving glass eye. Perfetto. Peace...
Good work. I like, "The words come out like secret butterflies from a well hidden wishing hive," and "After all nothing stops happening to everything that is."
I give "I Could So Easily Throw Back All Those Bulls" a star.
So there's this:
Everything wants to get noticed.
and then this -
little into shadows and light,shadows and
light,shadow, then light.
and the imagery --
a mouth as a slide rule:
gotta love.
"The world moves its roving glass eye
around in front of you like a
dog trying to flip over a frisbee
as if trying to show you how "
this is its own little poem. The rest is a gift. Great, great, great throughout...
Thanks so very much, all of you fine and generous folks. Every writer walks the fine line between entertainment and something else I like to call soul to soul communication. If it works it's a two-way radio.Thanks for the kind and friendly conversation. It helps tremendously.
"nailed against the lit
fixed points hanging there behind the clouds
into thinking they should just let it
hang out and shine like the devil. "
This part stuck with me. I love how you used shine as a description of the devil- very original and fitting.
It is as good as a miracle. Love this, Darryl!
I love these lines:
"Everything wants to get noticed. / Still some things need to be ever / magnified..." and "In the morning you might notice a / bush outside your window has suddenly / blossomed over night with an extra set / of purple flowers for the lucky one." and "We'll have to / make do with the light / in each other's eyes."
Molly, Kim and Beate: thank you. I want my stuff to reach you. That's what it's for. Your words and your time help me to continue to try and make something original you'll hopefully want to read again.
"as if trying to show you how / the loveliness of all things here and / there from an anything goes different yet /always shifting perspective restores a single vision / to the dreamer of dreams. I can / appreciate that.Everything wants to get noticed. / Still some things need to be ever / magnified by the poets and scientists who
live in our heads"
I find this marvelous. There's a sense of childlike wonder in your poems that reminds me of W.C. Williams.
"Everything wants to get noticed." Bravo! Dr. Williams would applaud that line on many levels.
I hear Williams in lines like this also: "How am I not to take / notice of such things? You make things / new to my burned out eyes."
But you know me. I'm all about pruning. Great as this poem is, I think it needs pruning. Pruning, in my opinion (and I may be alone in my view here), would elevate this poem even higher.
Thus "The words come
out like secret butterflies from a well / hidden wishing hive. / It's a striking and / somewhat unsettling phenomenon to say the least" would, in my editing, become "The words come / out like secret butterflies." You don't need the rest! Let the brilliance of that simile do its powerful work. Don't dilute it.
One more example:
"...laughing and singing at the same / time.Like a bird whistle. I've noticed / this turns and creates the edges of / certain tree's boundaries with just about any / kind of weather to the fore to / also contend with for one's anxious attention-span / with the exactness of a new pencil / sharpener."
This should, in my opinion, become "laughing and singing at the same / time.Like a bird whistle." That's enough. Actually, that's perfect! You don't need the rest.
Darryl, you're Thomas Wolfe, a genius gushing the rushing lushness of words. But what would Wolfe have been, what would he have really accomplished, without Maxwell Perkins?
(I may have stepped here into the inappropriate dogshit of sermonizing. If so, I apologize. Just want to make my comments to you useful.)
Everything wants to get noticed... I love that idea and what you've done with it here, DP. Thanks for sharing this! Glad I've come here...
Enjoyed Familiar Finger also; and glad to re-read Just an Observation again. Loved that the first time around, love it here too.
You always seem to get to the push and pull of life with your words. Attraction is so strong in your lines -- there's a kind of energy that pulls people and things together, and pulls the reader in, too. I feel the energy, always.
Oh, and I really like this You Made the Mistake at the end... It comes as a 'oh and by the way' kind of thing, after the others, but I really love the idea there: The thought is here, then gone. Old or new, being or not.. love these things crashing against each other.
Bill-they are more than useful, they are accepted, welcomed and appreciated, but if I used your advice all the time I wouldn't be me-I'd be what is expected of someone like me. All lines would be nice and clean and not at all confusing--granted.But people like me just aren't this perfect, my poems go on a bit too much-just like me-because they represent my own confusions about the world and so forth.I could trim them to please the teacher and get the "a" but I fear I'd be selling out that someone or something that exists in a little more of a messy room.Thanks!
Thanks Michelle!
Your poems carry so well, they really do. This main piece is a typewriter with a beat, for sure (and not just at the surface). The word play is imaginative and the images created add depth and meaning. The other poems are beautiful too. I really like “Just an Observation.” So many lines to love there, especially:
“After all
nothing stops happening
to everything that is.”
That line rings across time – it’s so full.
“I Could So Easily Throw Back All Those Bulls” – such passion there.
That is an absolutely fascinating, original, and important statement, Darryl. Reading it, I am completely blown away. I really want to think about what you are saying here. You are making me radically rethink my own aesthetic!
I think what you have written is the beginning of a kind of poetic manifesto, as significant in its way as Frank O'Hara's "Personism: A Manifesto." I think you should elaborate on your view and publish it. It's a 21st century artistic credo. It's a new voice. It's a new idea!
Mmmmm. Each of these poems is so lovely and romantic, Darryl. I sigh to read them today. Love that gorgeous voice. Cheers, friend! :) xo
Mmmmm. Each of these poems is so lovely and romantic, Darryl. I sigh to read them today. Love that gorgeous voice. Cheers, friend! :) xo
Love all the musical references. I know of your love for the Fab Four. It all works very well here.
Awesome.