by Darryl Price
by Darryl Price
by Darryl Price
All these poets with their hands
Full of poems are driving
Me into the wheat fields like
A flock of crows. They offer
You a cigarette and light
The damn thing with a poem.
They give you a little dance,
But when they take off their clothes
Poems are stuck to their feet
Like blades of grass. All their lips
Taste like poems dipped into old
Barbecue sauce. They trail with
You after butterflies or leaping on poor
Fireflies, but when it comes time
To free all the prisoners
Their keys will only unlock
A chest full of more poems.
What's wrong, they will say, don't you
Like poetry? Eyelashes
Wink, but the closer you look
The more you make out the ends
Are fastened with small poems.
Earrings are acrobats with
Poems to be handed out
Like flyers to the breathless thrilled to death
Crowds clamoring below the bleachers. They'll invite you
Over for dinner, but your
Fork and knife will have been replaced
By rolled up poems, tied with
Typed out blurbs. These poets don't
Believe in poetry as
A way of life, of being
Awake, they see it as a
Fabulous job and they must
Get there first for, or die trying.
All these poets want you to
Swallow their words without chewing.
Without thinking. Without
Buttoning or unbuttoning. Without feeling further
For the poor souls who need it
The most. Without so much as
A thank you for the sacrificial listen.
by Darryl Price
by Darryl Price
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"I cannot believe in a God who wants to be praised all the time."--Nietzsche
" Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a great battle."--Philo of Alexandria
.."THE SOUND OF WATER ON ITS GUSHING,GURGLING JOURNEY TO THE DRAINS IS BEAUTIFUL"--Rohinton Mistry
"If you don't know, it's all right. But if you know the truth and you don't say, it's bad karma."--Maharaj-ji
Love never ends.--1 Corinthians 13:8 (NRSV)
You notice I say the Cake FOR God not the Cake AGAINST God. Lest you misunderstand me, I'm saying it's easy to see where we go wrong in our thinking about the big questions.I have the same thoughts running through my own silly head. Obviously God is not some old magical man running around letting bad stuff like the Holocaust happen just because he's inept at following his own ten commandments,or he's too selfish to get involved directly with his own creation. Whatever.Maybe God is just our collective good intentions, our own good will, all of our love just waiting in some balled-up form to be manifested into actions rather than some pretty cool and compassionate thought balloons. I mean it's got to start somewhere, or everywhere, or nowhere. You choose. Point is the old belief systems don't seem up to the challenge anymore. If by their fruits you shall know them then we've seen some pretty rotten results so far from the source, and to be fair, we've seen miracles performed with little more than hopes or dreams in order to get the whole thing started.You can't deny either or both.But I'm pretty sure the love thing works, always seems to work, to some degree. That's something to believe in no matter how dark the circumstances of living get.
I believe this to be one of the most important pieces of my career so far. It's something I've been meaning to say for a while. I'm happy it has made its way into the world.It has been rejected for publication both far and wide and is now up at Kaffe in Katmandu due to the generosity of Marcus Speh. It's actually quite a jolly little poem if you read it the way it was intended.
Thank you Istanbul Literary Review for publishing the original version of "The Cake for God" in your May Issue #20. It's very much appreciated.
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fucking brilliant title, and tht first stanza sets off a holy rush---whooooosh
put me in mind for sme reason of that old song from the sixties, mcarthurs park--someone left the cake out in the rain, i don't think that i can take it, cause it took so long to bake it, and i'll never hve that recipe again, OH NO
which i once sang, soto voce, to ann king in seventh grade, hoping to win her as my girlfriend, and i would have, except her boyfriend danny was standing right next to me, another itialin american kid, and he really liked ann, so i stopped singing and let him have her, which may have been a mistake, but anyway, the cake--is good,
god good one letter away cake.
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what invention, what a confection! *
Well done piece, DP. Great form and title. Love the stanza leaps -
"It won't go away.
It keeps appearing on
toast.It can speak"
Great work.
"It prefers silence as
a means to communicate."
That's what I'm talkin' about. Good one. Very Brautigan-like, which is a wonderful thing.
Wow, really wonderful, Darry!
I love just about everything in this magical poem. Because I know the real heights you are capable of, Darryl, please take another look at the ending. The last sentence is not nearly strong enough to stand up to all the wonder that's gone before.
Bathe in the "french-fried light"--it will come to you!
Totally and completely fantastic.
Genius, actually.
Let’s hang some more stars on this thing!
Perhaps you can have your cake and eat it too if it's everywhere at once.
I saw the moon in a clear blue sky a few day ago. I wasn't really baffled by it but I did feel the presence of something strange and mysterious.
Love your poetry.
Most wonderful, Darryl!
love the sense of humor here and the sense of awe with which the cake is imbued like a golden calf. it seems as if there should be a tradition of poems on mundane things, medieval really, except that the church would probably call it a profanity. great poem.
"french-fried light" - I love that.
So many terrific images in this very magical poem and the wonderful way you weave the grandiose with the mundane.
Think perhaps it should be nostrils, rather than "nostril's" - nostrils, itself, being a pretty funny word to use in this way!
I do think I agree with Bill about the last sentence. I read it again without it...
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Love this, Darryl. Such arresting imagery and a wonderful way to take on dashed hopes. *
I agree with Kim - This is wonderfully arresting. Bravo!
mind bogglingly good, D. Fave. I am just stunned and ready to be more stunned by re-reading it. And re-reading it.
swallowing french-fried light.
wow.
love everything here -- the imagery, the levels of meaning, the poignancy. peace *
Lots of great parallel lines in this one, Darryl. Fresh, imaginative writing, loved it!
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LOVE this -- Read, then reread aloud. Much to admire, the rep of bakery and how that plays off the rep of you, so many lines --
Cake's got
no sense of humor
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"It continues to
baffle like moon half
fallen through blue sky."
Yes.
I am knocked out by this. The mysteries are presented here, again, from the human perspective. Beautiful, beautiful
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Some wonderful lines there. Is there any prose lurking on your page?
Hi Iddhis--yes I have several short stories up, maybe try out THAT KIND OF BODY or SPY VS. SPY. Thanks for your interest in my work. Much appreciated.