1946, What I wanted..
by Meg Tuite
I wanted to sit in that class in Iowa next to Flannery as she recited that first story that stopped the world with an accent so dense with dogwood we had to strain to collect every word.
I wanted to sit inside a silence of forever with the other students and Mr. Engles, the instructor, who couldn't speak. That twang of deepest Georgia still resonating in the air that mesmorized us into nothingness.
I wanted to clap with the teacher and students because no words could fit under that prosaic door of timelessness that had been shut on prose that afternoon.
I wanted to run with the laughing girls from class to the local cemetery to gather up all the bouquets of flowers we could steal.
I wanted to sneak back into Flannery's room with the rest of them, loaded down with carnations, roses and lilacs and scatter them over her bed, her rug, her essence.
I wanted to flood Flannery with a gratitude that stopped an entire class full of pens and paper and criticism from charging forward for a day.
I wanted to see Flannery open her door to her tiny room bursting with flowers and love that speech had no room to edge into.
I wanted to go back to my room alone and flood my empty page with tears at the sunrise Flannery had bestowed on my world on that first day she read in 1946 as she had blasted me with a landscape deeper than the grandest canyon on the first day I read her when I was fourteen.
OMG, I am blown away by this fabulous memento to FC!
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Thank you so much, Susan!!! I'm so glad you liked it!! I have a deep love for Flannery and have read her work over and over!!! Always amazed by how great she is!
Wow I really enjoyed this. its beautiful and soulful.
"...dense with dogwood..."
Oh, yes.
Thank you, Katie and James! So appreciate your reading and commenting!
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**** back at you Bill!! Thanks for reading!!!
Very nice and creative! I would like to be in that moment too! Thank you for bringing it to life, Meg. *
Thanks so much, Quenby! That would have been quite a workshop!!!
An amazing moment here - "I wanted to sneak back into Flannery's room with the rest of them, loaded down with carnations, roses and lilacs and scatter them over her bed, her rug, her essence." Wonderful.
Thank you so much, Sam! I appreciate your reading and your comment!
Yeah, this is amazing. You pull the reader in with the first sentence and don't let go.
Thank you so much, Christian! Don't want to let go!!!
The great ones grab you and change your life, don't they? Nice.
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Thanks so much, Jack!!!
Your story captures the essence of that first experience of discovery when an author awakens new and exciting possibilities in your world. I enjoyed reading it.
Flannery definitely did that for me! Thanks so much for your comments J. Mykell Collinz!!!!
Love this Meg! Flannery is one of my all-time favorites :)
Absolutely outstanding. *
Thank you, Marcelle and Jim!!! I feel the Flannery love out there!!!
I want all this, too! Love the imagery in this. *
I know, Kim, wouldn't it be an amazing place to be if we could time travel!!!!!
The pure delight we feel when we first connect to a writer's work -- you nailed it!
Thank you so much, Cheryl! It felt explosive when I first read Flannery!!!
Yeah! I say. Very good one, Meg. * (This is a very cool school Susan has started, eh?)
Thanks, Catherine! Yes, this was a great prompt! Loved it!
You evoke so much love and goodness here. It’s wonderfully contagious!
Thank you so much, Kari! You've made my day!!! I appreciate your reading and your comment is contagious!!!
You took me back to graduate school. Thanks. :)
That must have been a great grad school experience!!! Thanks so much, Christopher, for reading and commenting!!
"an accent so dense with dogwood"
My god that rings. And I try not to gush here, but you've hit all the right notes for me. Lyrical language and imagery, historical characters embedded into a fictive dream, an ending sends a flurry of everything I mentioned before this right into the mid-section of my gut.
I gush.
I can't help it.
Thank you so much, Sheldon!!! What a beautiful comment!! This story is going to be published in May in the Istanbul Lit. Review. I so appreciate your reading and commenting on this!!!! Especially coming from a Southern writer!!! Dang!!!
Yes! Once upon a time I was going to do my thesis on Flannery and then I did not and I am SO glad I did not, since most people end up hating the subject of their thesis and now I still go back and reread Flannery often and continue to love her. You create her world so well. Congratulations! *
Andrew, I'm so glad you are still rereading Flannery. I never lose the excitement when reading one of her stories! Brilliance!! I keep her around always!!! Thanks so much for commenting and reading, Andrew!!
I just went back through your stories and realized that I meant to fave this wonderful one and never did. Oops, never too late to fave a story that I have read about a half dozen times now. LOVE IT! *
Robert, Thank you so much for reading this again and faving!!! So appreciate your comments, always!!!
I want to clap for you! How beautiful. *
Thank you so much, Beate!!! As you can tell, I am a huge fan of Flannery O'Connor!!!
Saw this on the feed and missed it the first time around. Wow, Meg. This is fantastic writing. I, too, am a fan of our Flannery.*
Thank you, Joani!! She is beyond the beyond!!! I'm so glad you liked the Flannery tribute!
you probably heard this: http://manasto.tumblr.com/post/107920720/a-good-man-is-hard-to-find-by-flannery-oconnor
this is a wonderful tribute. very evocative, brimming with the scent of the dogwood and the south.
Dear James,
I have, but thank you for sharing the link!! I so appreciate your reading and commenting!
How did I miss this bubbly, bubbling love letter to Flannery O'Connor? Lush and gushing.
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(Ever read her "other" novel, "The Violent Bear It Away"? That is my absolute favorite thing by O'Connor. Absolutely destroyed me when I read it in the way of Russian novels that exhilarate as they annihilate. Never found anyone else who read it and want to talk about it with someone someday!)
I did read that novel a long time ago, but should pick it up again. I've read everything she's written and feel the same way about the Russians!! Thank you, Bill, for reading the bubbling love letter to Flannery!! And when I reread, we should have a discussion going!!
Like this one a lot, Meg, as you already know. *
thank you so much, Barry!!!!
Beautiful, passionate tribute to Flannery O'Connor. Really brilliant to imagine being in that first class hearing her read. Fave*.
Wouldn't it be amazing, Gloria!! Thank you so much for reading and the invitation to your new grp on Fictionaut. Great idea!
Cheers!!