He stood on his porch and breathed in, long and full. Behind his ribcage, on the left, a twinge. He acknowledged the pain and bid it away with his exhalation. Sun filtered through leaves, dappling him in light and shadow. He focused on the red bird in the hedgerow. He raised his left foot into the cleft above his knee. Breathe in. I will beat this. Breathe out. Bad energy. He balanced on his right leg, a statue. A flurry of wings. He remembered the needle sticks, the crimson-filled vials, and wobbled in the small breeze.
Lying in the dewy grass in corpse pose, the stars of heaven above him, it was hard not to let worries take over his breath. He thought most of the burdens on his wife and teenage daughter. He thought of his yoga students missing class, of no longer learning at the feet of his guru. He itemized unfinished projects. The moon rose over the tree line, a huge white ghost, the air so clear he discerned craters and mountains. He focused on the largest indent and breathed but the holes in the moon reminded him not of a face but of lacunae, the holes in his body left behind by marauding white blood cells that multiplied and multiplied until they conquered the red cells and built their own fortresses, lemon-sized lumps circling his kidney. His breath leaked out and he bolted up with a choking sound.
After the surgery he slept, his body too weak for anything else. People fluttered in and out of his room, angel shadows leaving fingerprints on his forehead, his cheek, the top of his hand. He remembered what he taught his students, to breathe out bad and breathe in good, and he surrendered to his breath. On each inhale he imagined golden sunshine flooding his bloodstream, his organs, his muscle and bone, then pushing dead cells and other debris through his lungs and pores on each exhale. Days passed. He breathed gentle arpeggios and dreamt of standing in a glade of redwoods, birds circling his head, mountains towering above the treetops. Fingertips tented in prayer position, he raised his hands over his head, feet rooted to the earth, and breathed.
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Inspired by my friend Joe, a yogi who survived a 16 hour surgery this week that removed a kidney and other tissues eaten by cancer. He faces his ordeal with more courage and grace than I could ever imagine, supported and guided by his strong spiritual core. In life, there are those rare individuals who always teach, even under the most dire circumstances. Joe is such a person. My small way of giving deeksha. Peace...
Strong imagery in this, Linda -
"He raised his left foot into the cleft above his knee. Breathe in. I will beat this. Breathe out. Bad energy. He balanced on his right leg, a statue. A flurry of wings."
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"Days passed. He breathed gentle arpeggios and dreamt of standing in a glade of redwoods, birds circling his head, mountains towering above the treetops."
Well-written. I like the piece.
This is filled with beautiful metaphor and imagery. Especially like the allusion doing double duty with this line: "Lying in the dewy grass in corpse pose, the stars of heaven above him, it was hard not to let worries take over his breath." Lovely work. *
Vivid and powerful. I like the way this moves like a breath: in, out. May he live long and prosper. *
Wow, yeah.
lovely, powerful tribute, Linda. fave
I love the intertwining of the sickness with the strong thoughts. Many beautiful word choices in this.
"He breathed gentle arpeggios"
The breath of the good flows through this.
This is Stunning!!! *
Thank you all for reading. I've been preoccupied with thinking of my friend, offering up any help I can. Next weekend we are having a fundraising benefit for him and his family to help with the medical expenses, and I will read this story. Peace...
Sweet pain, gentle breath, a life.
stunning, agreed. *****
Good writing: very nicely dramatized; sound advice on dealing with illness and healing.
Wonderful, Linda. *
Beautiful imagery. Wonderful piece written about...
Powerful work.
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This has such profound depth and lyrical stunning lines throughout. I could feel your love in every passing sentence. What a wonderful tribute.
Fave.
Dear all, thank you for your read and generous comments on this story. A group of us are hosting a fundraising benefit for my friend and I will read this -- hope it makes a difference. Peace...
Apparently, I forgot to fave. Corrected that omission.
Linda,
This is beautiful!! "Days passed. He breathed gentle arpeggios and dreamt of standing in a glade of redwoods, birds circling his head, mountains towering above the treetops." And heartbreaking and yet empowering!!! WOW! I am so sorry for your friend!!! ****
Then angel shadows leaving footprints! Yep, this got to me. *
Yes, what Jack said about this moving "like breath" and filled with love.*
This is so wonderful, Linda. Full of deep compassion and deep love and heart-rending imagery. *
Dear all, thank you for reading this story, a tribute and a prayer for my friend Joe. I read this at a benefit to raise money to help cover his medical care costs (we raised almost $4000). It felt healing to do so. I appreciate your kind words and faves. Peace...
beautiful, linda. all the best to your friend.
Marcus, thank you for reading and faving and, most of all, your good wishes for Joe. Peace...