by Kathy Fish
The aunt and uncle's farm, early spring, the earth smell of unsown fields, and Sunday lunch. My uncle sprawled in the recliner, his work boots raised like an affront. Burning Camel stuck to his lower lip. Snoring. The aunts and my mother drinking coffee, my aunt whispers about strange things coming out of her when she goes to the bathroom. My mother spies us on the floor pretending to play crazy eights. She indicates with her cigarette the back door. All our lives we've been following that little point of fire. We are given kites to assemble. Rickety-ass kites. Balsa wood and paper. Balls and balls of string. We tromp down the path between the trees. The field opens up to us like something born. My older brother Bill and his girlfriend shy in the face of their molten horniness. They drop their kites and head for the barn. Bits of colored paper we tear halfway, straddle them on the strings, watch them race like children. My younger brother innovates with headlines he tears from the Press-Citizen: Local Boy Bowls 7-10 Split! Up, up it goes. The rogue German Shepherd is trying to bite everyone. Bit cousin Nancy in the face last month. Couple Wed 75 Years Die Fifteen Minutes Apart. Heavenward. O glorious day! The kites bob and weave, boxed by the wind. The German Shepherd running in circles. Planets Collide! Bill comes hopping out of the barn screaming. His knee wide open, dangling, meat falling off the bone (the way my aunt describes slow cooked pork ribs). The German Shepherd, insane over the blood. They'd been jumping from the hayloft, Bill and the girlfriend, his knee sliced by something under the straw. Some farm implement lying in wait, some menacing blade. Space Aliens Take Over House of Representatives! To the clouds! Bill, howling. Blood just everywhere. His knee inside the German Shepherd's jaws. Nobody sees Uncle John until he's there, taking aim. A blast. Bill on the ground alive and bleeding. The German Shepherd, dead. Little brother still tearing up the newspaper. Rickety Kites Survive Nuclear Blast! The kites, untethered, rise further, disappear. Our faces upturned like the best kind of prayer.
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Originally published in New World Writing: http://newworldwriting.net/back/spring-2014/kathy-fish/
Holy σκατά! I'm wincing here. Serious wincing. Ouch! *****
My but that was a day gone bad. You can not trust rickety-ass kites.
We had the Press-Citizen where I went to college.
Thanks, Mathew and Steven!
Calamity of 'roids. Great scene. That little point of fire.*
Pure, the best kind of work. *
Oh, Kathy!
We should not survive childhood but do.
Thanks for reading, Gary P., Gary H., James, and Ann. I appreciate the kind words.
Gary H., I agree. We shouldn't survive. But, mostly, we do.
Beautiful snapshot.*
The final line is so necessary - and pure power. Great piece. **
Ah I've read this a few times by now. A pleasure every time, Kathy!
Big *. Yep.
Wow. Such a powerful mash-up of innocence and everything but.*
Some connected things can never come asunder. So much power in the suggestiveness of connections--hornieness, meat hanging off the bone, fields opening up like something born . . . Great stuff. *
Wow, thanks so much, Amanda, Sam, Michelle, Jen, and John. Your kind words and support mean a lot.
How fine this is.
David, thank you so much!
It's the simple this happened and then that happened way you've told the story that makes the horror of the end so potent. *
Thanks so much, Tina!
Ditto to everyone, Kathy. This is great.*
Thanks, Emily!
So, so great, Kathy, as usual. One big OUCH!!! xo *
Ha, this is a bit of a departure for me, Robert! Thanks so much for reading!
<I>We tromp down the path between the trees. The field opens up to us like something born. My older brother Bill and his girlfriend shy in the face of their molten horniness. </i>--The language in this is exquisite. I got lost in it! Luscious details and turn of phrases. "*"
Oh thanks, Kyle! I'm glad tha language works for you in this piece. Appreciate the nice comment!
Sublime.*
Thanks, James Claffey. : )
Strong writing that is amazing in its CONFIDENCE. PAINTING WITH COURAGE AND A SURE HAND.
Oh, you're kind. Thanks for the great comment, Darryl!
Whoa, intense! Really fine writing.
Ed, thank you so much for reading and the nice comment. I appreciate it!
Great last line. *
Thanks so much, Beate!
The accumulation of detail and images. Great writing. *
Oh, thank you so much, Daniel!
I want to be one of those kites.
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You are. You are one of those kites. Thanks, Bud.
I never did trust a German Shepard.*
Oh, they're beautiful dogs! Just not this one...thanks for reading, Tim.
the best kind of prayer--
happy to see it at NWW,
happy to see it here--
cheers,
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Thanks, Gary P. Good to see you!
Thanks for the star on this story, S.J. I appreciate it!
Love this story, Kathy. I shared it twice on my facebook page this year, and to a group or two as well, as I recall.
(New Fictionaut member here, born yesterday. This was the first story I faved.)