Nicholas immediately knew what he was supposed to do and not to do, in his new office.
He was supposed to work at the desk on his laptop. He was not supposed to look out the window. He was supposed to hold meetings with one or two executives or colleagues at the small table. He was supposed to put some books in the shelf, books that made him look informed, reading, smart. He was not supposed to shag a female staff member on either his desk or on the small table. He was supposed to keep his door closed during confidential meetings. He was not supposed to open the windows and scream his anger out or jump from them to a certain death. He was supposed to take his coffee from the hallway where the company provided machines with fourteen different types of caffeinated drink into his office. He was not supposed to leave the paper cups standing around anywhere. He was supposed to throw them in the wet waste basket next to the machine. He was not supposed to put art or posters he liked up on the wall, either instead or in addition to the choice made for him by the corporation. He was supposed to place photographs of his family, if he had them, on the desk. He was not supposed to leave a pair of handcuffs or a butt plug, if he had them, laying around on that desk.
It was a small world with many rules, every thing signifying an action or the suppression of an action, and quite possibly also the thought leading to such an action. It was an environment that denied the existence or necessity of personal creativity and expression, because his day was meant to be mindlessly busy, and keep him busy, in the name of the company, not his muse.
This office was more or less like any other he'd ever worked in, and it confirmed Nicholas' belief that he could predict the next few years, apart from the human relationships, which also filled this place and brought it to life, against the odds prescribed by the catalog of commandments.
Whoever had designed this place and drawn up the rules wasn't just kidding.
Nicholas sat down at the desk. He put his hands on it and slowly slid forward, elbows at an odd angle, back curved like a panther ready to charge - not a comfortable, but a position engineered to be effectual. He lifted one bun by twisting his hip, grimaced, let out a long groan of delight and farted loudly.
This was going to be good.
In the face of constrictions: In the face of the constant mental and spiritual gulags that we shall encounter - our last place of spirituality and hope lies in the private moments when we can give ourselves the smallest of personal pleasures....
Even His infallible, the Pope, must float the air biscuit from time to time.
Happy April's Fool Finnegan. Thanks for this piece my friend.
Wonderful list of "supposed to's"--the corporate commandments. That sections has a rhythm of its own.
Breaking loose!.. Just wish I could be a fly in the wall at the onslaught of the the stiff conformists in that office.. ! "more tea, vicar?"
Great work, Finnegan. Amazing ending.
Great one, Finnegan. I think you’ve captured the do’s and don’ts of the corporate world pretty well here.
thanks hazar - i know you have a place of special tenderness for corporate clones in your heart... "the pope's air biscuit" is a title in its own right for a story yet to be written...
thanks jon - very perceptive: this is the core of the piece which also was written first. all the rest is not quite an afterthought but an embedding of that commandment core.
thanks sam, christian - with the right background, this almost wrote itself. the truth shall be told!
ta, heather. i think you'd love to be a "fly on the wall" there...my favourite fart cover up is "who stepped on the duck"...
Makes me wish I had an offfice instead of a cubicle...
Terrific story, and great funny ending. Nicholas will win at his game, it's a sure thing
Too funny!
Yes! This is a great story. Nicholas and I are on the same page.
thanks susan and jason nicholas henry mccormick! someone has also been kind enough to add tags to this story. i wonder what else will emerge this way...
I didn't see the ending coming. When it arrived, I gave it a standing ovation!
jack, were you just standing or...you know...did your enthusiasm generate any gas?
Finn,nicely done. The repetition of do's and don'ts really make the ending stronger. Thumbing your nose at rules without actually breaking them is only way to stay sane in this world!
thanks sara - well observed. i had wondered about the relationship of the commandment paragraph and the ending myself. you also summed up the manifesto of office place sanity nicely!
Ah, a distant cousin of Franziska?
beate - thanks - i think nicholas is actually a flatter character than franziska. we don't know too much about him except that he wields a wondrous weapon.
Ah, bucking convention! I love it!I've often wondered what if I did this....
Funny.
oh man. this one makes me happy I no longer work in an office. well done!
Fun, fun stuff. And I enjoyed the way we're given the things Nicholas shouldn't be doing as a way of showing us all things Nicholas is, in fact, doing. And a big, nice fart to end with was, well, satisfying.
Dang day job. Wicked. Fund to read, and perfectly punctuated ending. And you used "just kidding" in a novel way, too!
ah, myra, matthew, sheldon and stephanie - thanks very much! lovely post-fool's day comments to wake up to before the easter break!
Brilliant, Finnegan. LOVE this!
Never was a fart more of a smokescreen (sorry, I couldn't resist) than this: the detail gives the author away. I thought Flawnt wanted to write fiction?
Have you been eavesdropping in my office?
I have said many times that a corporation is such a small, small world. That President Jane Doe is like God around the corporation, but is just Jane Doe everywhere else.
Anyway, have you heard of the Flatulence Filter? It's a product designed for offices and airplanes to absorb farts.
Funny stuff, Flawnt. I like farts.
thanks katrina, also for coming right out and saying "i like farts". i can't shake off the impression that many fictionauts are rather squeamish when it comes to the scatological side of life while genitalia enjoy a generally wider endorsement by the literati.
The fart is the perfect touch here. Flatulence can say so much sometimes...
kim, thanks. you put your finger on the essential ingredient here.
hee hee.
'listen to my body talk . . my body talk.' the ennui and the irreverence. good read. how much empathy there is for this 'quiet rebellion' against manic productivity -- for the fear of not having one is palpable and great -- and yet it's still so common a sentiment that everyone relates . . . even those well into careers in unemployment!
thanks christopher! and jack - perhaps too few ex-suits on this site to really appreciate the sordid reflection of the sad ennui's joker face in this piece. your comment sits well with me. silent farts reverberate around the corporate world - no tragedy there because they don't endanger anyone least of all the system. saw "in good company" (2004) w/dennis quaid, topher grace again - spot on analysis in that flick.
Try this sharing an office with 5 other Junior Managers...
This piece describes exactly why I quit the corporate world and decided never to make a dime again. Wait, that came out wrong... :-)
thanks jonas, for your comment - glad to hear you threw off yer shackles. money isn't all. it still is good.
Nicholas can be my friend. He is real and we like him.
woohoo martha! thanks for reading. i'll tell nicholas. he'll be overjoyed. all this attention for a ...simple motion of the bowels. smashing!
Finn, excellent - best fart on the site.
Ah, Flawnt this has brightened up my morning no end. You star!
Two ass cheeks up, sir.