[From the award winning fiction collection 'The Meaning of Children' http://amzn.to/KznFvA]
Some folks say your hands can tell the story of your life. Well, my hands cain't talk, but they've made so many pies, I bet they could do it themselves if you cut 'em off and gave 'em the right ingredients, I sure do.
'Course, I ain't made pie in going on forty years now. But for me, pie's like ridin' a bike: it's something I'll never forget.
It's the crust ever'one frets on. You got to measure out two cups of flour exactly, and a teaspoon salt. Eamon liked to tease me about this. He'd say, “Been making pie long?”
And I'd go, “My whole life entire.”
And he'd say, “And you still measuring?”
There's things I did by feel. Mothering, for instance. Baking, I measured.
Mix that flour and salt in a bowl. I always used my largest, white with blue stripes round the side. A wedding gift from my Mama, come in a nested set, three different sizes. Like him and his two brothers, Eamon liked to say. Then cut in a cup of Crisco with a pastry blender, looks sort of like a small harp. When he was young and still in the kitchen, Eamon'd play on it a time or two, just to show me. You got to work that fat in real good, blend it, all the way through. The recipes say “till it looks like small peas,” but that ain't nowhere near enough. I pity the woman what tries to make piecrust from the recipe on the side of a tin of Crisco, I sure do. You got to mix it in completely. Stop too soon, all you got's lumps of fat with flour on the outside. Never get a piecrust out of that. Get it right and it clumps up on its own. More you mix, the bigger they get. Pea-size ain't near enough, no sir. Needs to be lima beans. Bigger, even.
Then add your water, a tablespoon at a time. Mix well after each one. Four tablespoons in all, that's a quarter cup. Less sometimes, if it's real humid.
It was the day that Eamon left, ever'body's clothes sticking to 'em like a second skin.
Well.
Dust your hands with flour, make the dough into a ball. Knead it a bit if you like, just to be sure. And don't pay no never mind to them that says too much handling'll make that pie crust tough. You don't got to worry about that at all, uh-uh. The more you handle it, the better.
Babies are like that, too. Folks think you spoil 'em, picking them up whenever they cry. But some babies need it. They just have to feel your hands on 'em. You can carry them around with you all day if you have to. No sir, if it's one thing I know, holding them close is the making of men, not the ruining.
Next, you roll out that dough. Cut it in two. Plunk half on a piece of wax paper and dust it with a little flour, soft as talc. Cover with more of that wax paper, a little flour to keep that from sticking, too. A bottle of pop will do in a pinch if you don't have a rolling pin. Roll it thin, peel the top paper off, and take the bottom with the pie crust on it and flip it into a pie plate. Peel the paper off real careful-like, but don't pay no mind if it tears--just dip your fingers in some flour and press it right back. Mends it up and no one'll ever know the difference. But you can only compare a boy and a pie so far.
Put the filling in, roll the other crust out, too, and put that on top. Crimp the sides together real good so it don't leak none and cut some slits on top, for the steam.
Bake it, four hundred-twenty-five degrees, forty-five minutes to an hour, depending what-all's inside.
Best pie I ever made? Oh, that was on an early summer day, like I said, more'n forty years ago now. Ain't never made another. Promised myself I wouldn't, not till he come back home.
Well.
I remember it like yesterday. All of us smiling and laughing, talking and talking about nothing really, no sir. Eamon was like a brand-new penny that day, shining, handsome, everything before him. Telling me how much he loved me and respected his daddy, the two of them clapping each other on the back every time they was in spitting distance. Eamon even said he loved his germy younger brothers, punching them in the shoulder all day long, and then hugging them tight, just the once. His daddy was so proud of him. Funny how a suit with brass buttons can make a man lose all sense.
“It's an honour to serve,” Eamon said. And I knew what he meant, I surely did.
The whole family was there, uncles and aunts, cousins, friends and neighbours, too. Even the Mayor, like it was some goddamn Fourth of July. We laid on a barbeque, just the way he liked it—ribs, cole slaw, potato salad, devilled eggs, corn on the cob, biscuits, watermelon, and of course his favourite, rhubarb pie. Made four of them that morning. Ever'body said I made the lightest crust around. Like I told you, the trick is to work it enough, to get everything mixed in just right.
Women often fail at pie because they give up too soon.
I brought it out to him, still warm from the oven, ice cream on the side. Eamon liked it that way, the tart bleeding into the sweet.
The light from the sun slanted long and low.
“If anything happens,” he said.
And I hushed him, wouldn't hear it. Just wouldn't. I told him, “You finish that pie, now. Your ice cream's melting in the heat.”
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Won Gemini Magazine's First Flash Fiction Contest, published there first, 2009. Nominated for Pushcart and Best of the Net nomination (Sundress Publications) awards.
Inspired by Nancy Zafris' workshop at Kenyon College and Luis Urrea's workshop at Fishtrap, the people I met there (and their stories), summer 2008.
And because I love pie, making it even more than eating it. Rest in peace, Auntie Bev...
November 2010: This just in: "Pie" was one of 50 stories to make the Commendations List in the just-concluded Aesthetica Creative Works Competition (UK).
Your voice is so distinctive, and the story leaves me aching. Wonderfully meaningful writing.
A superb voice
got a lump in my throat from this one. who knew one can write about pie to this affect? i like the way you compare men to pies "holding them close is the making of men, not the ruining" and then in the next paragraph say "but you can only compare a boy and a pie so far" when talking about mending there are always scars. I also like the way the mother tries to mask her scars and her grief, but can't. And its the not making pies anymore thats the most telling.
This is so well set up, and at the end you get that "oh, no" feeling. The ending hurts; I agree with Beate. Wonderfully written; deft amd powerful ending.
This is a marvelous piece. Great work, Beverly. Made me think of Patty Griffin's song "Making Pies".
Thank you all for your kind, generous comments. The workshops I mentioned in the "inspiration" section really helped. Nancy had us working on memories that we would want to take with us into eternity (see review for the film "After Life" on the NYT website).
Luis suggested his group "write about what the hands know." In his group, a Marines vet sat next to a conscientious objector--I'm talkin' Vietnam here, people--next to a woman for St. Louis who'd brought her sister's ashes to Paris to be scattered, next to a woman from Texas whose mother (on her 7th birthday) was raped by her mother's husband...I think that's where the accent comes from.(What a great place Fishtrap is--if you're anywhere near Oregon, run there! Summer Fishtrap is in July).
The inspiration for the story is longer than the story itself...bottom line is, if it moves me, it's worth writing about.
Gemini Mag editor David Bright told me he knew my story would win his contest when one of his readers told him that it made her cry.
Sam, I will definitely look up the Patty Griffin song. Beate, thanks so much again for inviting me in. Jack, thanks for the "oh no" moment (will go down in history next to the "a-haa" one). Ajay, I look forward to reading "Fifty-one". And Sara yes, I agree, not making pies is a biggie.
I made pies your way for 20 years, wonderful - crisco, ummm - no more - we worry too much about cholesterol. But we are still alive, so phooey!
A great piece.
Nice story. I'm craving some pie now. Can't wait to get back to the US and smother my face in all that fatty deliciousness.
I'm from Canada...
Nicely done to perfection. Smells good too.
Thanks, Darryl (I like to dab a little vanilla behind my ears. I also swear by a little nutmeg sprinkled over the apples in the pie, in addition to the cinnamon. Oh, and Auntie Bev's secret was a tablespoon or so of butter--I even use margarine--in little chunks before putting on the top crust).
Hmm...I can't decide if I'm writing a book of stories or a book of recipes.
I feel my literary senses tingling...
Love the voice of this story. I'd listen to all kinds from this narrator. Front porch stuff. Let's get this on tape stuff. The live forever stuff.
What everyone else said. Times three. Just beautiful.
Thank you, Sheldon, and you too (3 times) Linda. You've decided me: I have a piece coming out in mp3 format at EarLit Shorts (http://rattlingbooks.blogspot.com/2009/03/call-for-submissions-earlit-shorts.html) and I think I'm going to send them "Pie."
Holy-boly, Bev. Yeah, I cried when where this was going broke through the crust. "But you can only compare a boy and a pie so far." What a blood-pie of a story. Hit the heart. Great work.
So THAT'S what you look like, Barry! I've known you virtually 3 years now (or so--memories fly when you're having fun!) and this is the first photo I've seen of you!
Thanks for your kind words re. "Pie." It came courtesy of the wonderful teachers and workshop colleagues I was privileged to know in June and July 2008. I keep changing it, like polishing a bumpy pebble. Looking forward to catching up with new and old friends here on Fictionaut. Thanks for looking me up and let me know what you're up to...
Cheers,
This is a magnificent story. Touched an benchmark of elemental sadness on the human scale, but ever so lightly, ever so lightly ...
@Sam Rasnake: You are so right about that Patty Griffin song, "Making Pies." We're all singing from the same song-book.
You can find it on youtube (http://tinyurl.com/y5449yv) your aural delectation.
Being touched is what it's all about, far as I'm concerned, James. And I mean that in a good way, not in the "touched in the head" way (though I've written of that, too).
Such a strong voice I can hear her in my mind. Literary fiction at its best!
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Like Water for Pie. This is wonderful, and yes such an alive and honest voice. Well done!
Love the deceptive simplicity of the voice, love the way the emotion crept up on me and then overtook me. Love.
Thanks for reading and commenting, Myra, Lou and Colette. Like water for pie...I like that!
Congratulations on your top contender finish in the Glass Woman Prize, Beverly! I love this story so very much. I adore the voice and style of the narrator, and the way she works through the story, through the heartache, until we share it too. And the pie! Love it.
So deftly balanced, the literal and the foreboding..."one thing I know, holding them close is the making of men, not the ruining." And then very near the end: The tart bleeding into the sweet. Oh, my I'd like another piece of pie...
Big lump in the throat fav!
Thanks for your kind comments, Kari and Doug. Just this weekend, hubby told me he had a hankering for my apple pie...been awhile. Wonder if I can find any good apples round about now?
Thanks for reading,
Bev
This just in: "Pie" was one of 50 stories to make the Commendations List in the just-concluded Aesthetica Creative Works Competition (UK).
Amazing story. It deserves every honor. *
Thanks so much!
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