by Jack Swenson
My wife gives me the signal to leave, and when I have exited the room, she slides the kitchen doors shut. I glue my ear to one of the doors, but I can't hear what they are saying. Some minutes later, they emerge, and my wife says she is going to walk home with Denise. She'll be back in a bit, she says.
"Well?" I say when she returns, but she isn't talking. However, the look on her face tells me that she has a plan. I keep my mouth shut. I figure I'll find out what's up soon enough. I hope it isn't murder. Barney is well off; if he were to have a fatal mishap, his widow would do very well for herself.
My fears are ungrounded. What my wife has in mind is more like an intervention. We will have a little talk with Barney, she says. "You mean you and me?" I ask. My wife scowls. "Of course," she says. I smile brightly.
And so we have a talk with Barney. He denies everything, of course. But my wife keeps after him until he confesses. He weeps. Yes, yes, he says, he loves the animal. He's always had a thing for females with whiskers and pointed ears. He promises he will break off the affair. And, he swears, it will never happen again.
That night in bed my wife asks me if I think he'll keep his word. "Oh, sure," I say. "Barney's a stand up guy." "Mm," my wife says, and she rolls over and goes to sleep.
I do not tell her when later that week I peek through the curtains in our dining room one evening and through the window of the house next door I see Barney holding the cat in his arms. They are cheek to cheek, moving in a circle. They seem to be doing a slow waltz.
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Appeared in Lesser Flamingo last year.
Good work, Jack. I like the pacing throughout. "And so we have a talk with Barney. He denies everything, of course. But my wife keeps after him until he confesses. He weeps. Yes, yes, he says, he loves the animal. He's always had a thing for females with whiskers and pointed ears." Nice blend of imagery and phrasing.
I adore your cat stories. This one in particular. "He's always had a thing for females with whiskers and pointy ears." I'm wiping away the tears.
Good play, Jack.
I love the barely submerged wobegon humour, the boyish amusement and delight buried in every phrase. Fun story, very believable relationships.
Oh, great. Forever after, I'll not be able to look at my cats quite the same as I did before.
I'm so ashamed.
Great and subversive, your humor, Jack.
This is hilarious.
Excellent, Jack! Love the pacing, love the ending.
Those first two sentences crack me up, Jack. This is just so...odd and skewed, but the storytelling voice is deadpan (which of course makes it so funny!)
"He's always had a thing for females with whiskers and pointed ears." Ha!
Great story! And humor.
Aw, deep down, I want Barney and the cat to make it! Damn the odds!
Great fun!
"He's always had a thing for females with whiskers and pointed ears. "
Still laughing...*