Sinister Age of the Draft
by Meg Tuite
When I turned six I became victim to one of the many human abuses of dumping a child out of the back of a station wagon into the snot-filled clutches of a pack of anonymous kids. It was an enforced group dynamics that came with all its paranoids, masochists and victims for no other reason than that we had turned the same sinister age of the draft, and as it was a Catholic school in the 70's, abuse was not only condoned, but expected at any and all levels.
The teacher was a myopic, old woman with a pink barrette and brown teeth who spent a large portion of her day trying to figure out what her pension would be if she quit that afternoon, punching numbers into an adding machine, picking it up and sneering at it as reality spread bitterness over her face, while we were left to ourselves—a sort of Lord of the Flies meets Mickey Mouse—in which the forces of evil press in on the good like white bread on peanut butter. The so-called good, a weak but whiny lot, who actually clung to that abstract of "justice for all," would tattle to Mrs. Pufry...Mzzz Puffy, she hit me...Mzzz Puffy he said the bad word...Mzzz Puffy, I gotta go...Mzzz Puffy, Thomas is hanging in the cloakroom again..." and Mrs. Pufry's hand would absently lash out at the sniveling chorus and shoo them back to their seats without looking up, including the one who had to go, who was now shamed into retreat with the rest of them, finding out early in life that time was never to be on his side as he fought a losing battle with the vicious stream that laughed its way down his pant legs.
After lunch and regulated nap, Mrs. Pufry would suddenly lurch up out of her chair and stumble toward the supply cabinets, like some hideous, reanimated corpse, and hurl herself around the room throwing out instructions, crayons, construction paper and panic, forcing an art deadline on all of us.
The class experienced its first creative block, staring at the paper, a pile of broken crayons, the clock that rushed around in a circle none of us could decipher, and Mrs. Pufry, now looming over us, pacing the aisles, staring down at the feeble slashes and stick men with disgust, cuffing a few heads yelling, "hurry up, fill that page, nobody asked for Picasso!"
When the final bell rang at three o'clock and our parents lined up outside for their wards, each shaky child clutched a lopsided monkey, tortured landscapes, family portraits with a member of two missing, heads without bodies, bodies without heads, in what could have been a fair rendition of the birth, or at the very least, the first mass movement toward minimalism. School turned out to be a daily workshop in human dynamics.
This is un-f--ing believable!!! Child abuse at its funniest, bestest, most horrible moments and told with such dexterity of pen and mind!
BRAVA MEG!
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Thank you so much, Susan!!! I so appreciate your generous comments!!! I had fun writing this one thinking of the grade school Catholic insanity!
This one brings back some VIVID memories (kudos to your incredible sensory details and micro use of scenes). The teacher's name is just fantastic, even sounds like crap! And the result is this dazzling combination of scary, thrilling, offbeat, disgusting momentum that you propel to that very last satiable line. FAVE!
Thank you so much, Robert!!! Did you go to Catholic school? I guess just going to school, any school is enough? I so appreciate your amazing comments!!!!
if mrs puffy is "real" that's a brilliant line to use on children - classic! Would love to use that myself, of course I don't teach..."hurry up, fill that page, nobody asked for Picasso!"
brown teeth and pink barrette. Pink & brown actually go well together. So she did have some taste. This is great, Meg, filled with so much dark humor & nitty little details - love it!
Mzzzz Puffy or Pufry or Butt fry is deliciously horrid. So many great little word treasures here. Giggle. I'm a recovering catholic and appreciate the free therapy, Meg. *
Thank you so much, Shelagh!!! Yes, Ms. Pufry was definitely color coordinated!!! Ha! I love that! I so appreciate your reading and commenting, Shelagh!!!
Michael, I think Butt fry is my favorite so far!!! So glad you liked this and are recovering from the psychopaths we were in the trenches with!!! I think it's a lifelong path and probably why we're writing! A lot of damn material!!!!
Also a recovering Catho-holic, like Michael, this rang too true, although I was able to laugh since it's been many decades since Sister Mary Torquemada taught me the general meaning of the phrase, "fear of God."
Fave and a big amen!
Ha! Now, Sister Mary Torquemada put the fear of God in me!!! Her name sounds like what would happen if one spontaneously combusted!!! Thank you, James, for reading and adding your Catho-holic touches to your comments!!! AMEN!!!!
I can very much relate to this story, Meg (12 years of Catholic education, yikes). Like the long sentences, the great descriptives and Mrs. Pufry, the perfect visual of a "reanimated corpse." *
Love this. Especially love the last paragraph.
Thank you so much, Kathy! God, there's a hellava lot of us out there!!! Most of those nuns were reanimated corpses, although they only reanimated to become slasher-like zombies!!!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Lou!! So appreciate it!!!
I know...*shudder...but the whole experience is great fodder for writing, ha...
LOVE michael's comment, above. ickmeister catholic, oh, is good--nice work, meg *
Very funny, sickly funny, in a marvelous way. Makes me count blessings and even do the sign of that certain trio that I'm not Catholic.... not that there's anything wrong in being Catholic!, well, maybe there is....!
Nice work!
Thank you so much, Gary!! I like ickmeister catholic!! That says it!!
Sickly is right, Cherise!!! And yes, there are so many things wrong with...well, you know!!! Thank you so much for reading, commenting and making me laugh, all of those who have commented!!!
God, I loved this! We went to the same school! A shame we all have such horrible, vivid memories of those times, but as Kathy said, "Great fodder for writing." Big Fave, Meg.
what a great story & the language, meg, the language...roars with thunder, this one, really rolled down all the way from memory hill into my lap.
Dear MaryAnne, Such beautiful memories!!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
Dear Marcus,
So glad that you liked this and really appreciate your generous comments!!! Even your comments are poetry,"really rolled down all the way from memory hill into my lap." I love that!!! Thank you so much!!
Catholic means universal and this is universal, Meg. It digs through the dirt of details to get at a higher truth.
"hurry up, fill that page, nobody asked for Picasso!"
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Dear Bill,
Thank you so, so much for your incredible comments!! I really appreciate your taking the time to read and comment, Bill!!!!
Great writing, Meg! I thought this first appeared in Midnight Screaming Magazine.
Dear Ajay,
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! Yes, MSM had a version of it! I'm so glad you liked it!!! Cheers!
Jesus, Mary and Joseph! Lord of the Flies meets Micky Mouse. I still have marks from that metal edge on the ruler. You don't mention those shiny black uniform shoes that would let me look up your uniform dress. They almost made wearing the tie worth it.
My elementary schooling was in communist Czechoslovakia but the experience was identical, including daily beatings. Catholic -- universal indeed. Terrific evocation of the horrors. And that experience is indeed much fodder for writing. *
Dear Larry,
Wasn't there a book, "Do patent leather shoes reflect up?" I seem to remember that, but don't remember the author! Thank you so much for your Jesus, Mary and Joseph comments! Ha! Much appreciated and I am loving all these horror flashbacks to the early days from the comments!!!
Dear Andrew, I think you and Bill Yarrow are right! It's universal!! And those are the experiences we don't forget! Not so beautiful, but definitely memorable!!! Thank you so much for commenting and sharing your experience!!! Much appreciated!
Funny in that gut-sick-feeling sort of way. I think I'm the only one who never experienced the wrath of the good sisters. You make it very real, very scary. Peace *
Dear Linda,
I'm so glad you never experienced the wrath!!! It was a bit daunting!!! But, once again, lots of material to work with!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!! So appreciate it!
Catching up on Fictionaut posts. Ah, the beauty of education. Loved this. *
Dear Christopher,
Thank you so much!!! Yes, so many beautiful memories!!!
"Time was never to be on his side as he fought a losing battle with the vicious stream that laughed its way down his pant legs."
Poor boy!
"hurry up, fill that page, nobody asked for Picasso!"
Ahh, the dimness and dubiousness of childhood memories. :) Thanks for sharing them with us.
gruesomely awesome. *
Thank you so much, Berit!!!!
I love your comments, Beate! "Gruesomely awesome," one of my all-time favorites! Thank you so much!!!