Dog Park
We met an old friend and his old dog. We went off leash on the lush Buffalo grass. He and I—this old friend, I mean—talked mostly of divorce, something we shared between us.
“Is someone in my back yard every night?” I asked.
“I don't think so,” he said, “but it's hard to say.”
“The dog, she's always jumping up and looking out there. It could simply be rats, but still, it frightens me.”
“I have a side alley,” he said, “as you well know. My dog goes bananas on it every night around eight.” He called to his dog then—she had run too far—and as she came back to us, he said, “Sometimes seven o'clock in the winter.”
Our dogs are of different ages and one tired before the other.
“Let's get them some water,” my old friend said, “and avoid these children on the way.”
I agreed. We re-leashed them and veered away from the kids. One was having a tantrum.
“Dogs don't like tantrums,” he said. “It unnerves them.”
I nodded, but thought he spoke mostly of himself. Men don't like tantrums, I thought. Something is happening in the world.
“When you lived here,” he said, “when you were married—when we were both married—I thought you were so beautiful.”
“I'm still beautiful,” I said. I pressed the metal button so the dog could drink from the dog-height water fountain.
“Ma'am,” my old friend said in falsetto. “That's not for dogs. That's for very, very, very tiny people.” He placed his hand on my back and breathed out a laugh. “More beautiful,” he said. “You have nostalgia on your side now.”
We embraced and then we parted, both with our leashed dogs. After a run in the park, mine tends to curl herself like a donut and fall into a deep sleep. Sometimes when I look at her, I feel this sleep will last a lifetime, but then, at some point, I trust she will wake.
Oh I read this in Quick Fiction. I love Quick Fiction and I love this gorgeous story, Kate! ***
Thanks, Kathy! And I just faved your Repair Man story--it's fabulous!
Oh, thank you, Kate!
I love this, and not simply because I am a dog person. Wonderful work, KHC.
Thanks, Julie!
Love it, Kate! Exquisite, emotionally rich story, expressed with an economy of words. *
Thank you, Frank!
Simply told yet rich with imagery and emotion. Well done, Kate!
Thanks, Tina!
I appreciated the undercurrents. *
Thanks Lynn!
This is a magical little tale. "We embraced and then we parted...." Bnag bang! Wonderful. *
Thanks, Jack! Love the horns!
Men don't like tantrums, I thought. Something is happening in the world.
Just love those two lines stuck together, contrary to some degree but perfectly placed.
Lovely!
I'm blown away. Favorite.
Thanks Shelagh! And Thanks Meg!
I'm with Shelagh in particular but all of the comments are spot on. This is quite a story. I've submitted about 300 pieces to Quick Fiction and feel a little more okay about going 0fer after reading this.
Thanks, David for reading and for your comment and for the star!
What do you mean by "...going Ofer after reading this" Typo, I'm assuming, but curious.
“I'm still beautiful,” I said. -- my favorite line; shows me a person who has managed to heal from the inevitable contortion of divorce.
Thanks, Beate!
There's a lot going on here, and such nuanced feelings and meanings. I love that last line.
Yes, oh, yes, Kate. Wonderful story. Love that conclusion. *
Thank you!