by Jack Swenson
Lovers Over Paris
The redhead dances and plays the tambourine. The pale brunette holds out her hands to accept flowers from the clown. The brunette is a comely wench, a bare back rider, a star of the center ring. But tonight the circus is dark. She is free to go to her lover, to embrace, to float in the night sky.
The young man blushes with joy and throws up one hand, prepares to woo, to dance. Below the redheaded companion's feet is a bridge joining left bank and right. She is wearing red shoes.
In a narrow lane, a man, a poor expatriate artist, is out for a midnight stroll. He has been drinking wine. He makes mental notes as he watches the tableaux unfolding in the bright blue sky. He gazes at the sweet trio with hungry eyes.
La Mariee
My bride wore a red dress with a white veil. We seemed to float in air. The preacher asked me a question, and I said “I do.” In the street below, a man in a cap and knickers played some kind of a flute. A goat carried a bass fiddle. We floated away; to where? To Heaven or Hell. To Never-Never Land. A lobster holding a candle lit the way. The sky was blue; the groom—que ce serait moi—shimmered in the moonlight. I adjusted my lady's veil. Her eyes and hair were the color of coal dust. She carried a bouquet of flowers, white like her gossamer veil, virginal, pure, unsullied. I was neither happy nor sad. I looked at her as we drifted away, in my eyes an unspoken question.
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Check out the paintings; Google the subtitles.
Yes, both dreams, disturbing and beautiful in a way we never quite find in our waking moments.
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You do well on the high wire of dreams! This is lovely.
"Her eyes and hair were the color of coal dust."
Hungry eyes and unspoken questions. La vie c'est une histoire d'amour.
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lovely lyrical language
i will google both paintings now
but i think i saw the second one in a Julia Roberts movie...
yep. pretty embarrassing i connected that great painting to julia roberts because i could not remember the name of the artist...chagall!!!!
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Love this idea--prose descriptions of pictures. Begin with neutral objective description. Sleight-of-hand in evidence as we realize the subjective is palpably there too. Very nice!
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Jack, you and Chagall. A marriage made in your mind, heavenly. fave - mar
Good use of imagery, Jack. I like the form. Works well. Great writing style in the set.
Jack, It is dreamlike and I love the movement of this piece!!! It's its own painting! Nice! *****
i think for me the line about being neither happy nor sad holds it all together with some kind of wonderful glue.
Great idea!
Well done, Jack. It's brought out a different side of you.
so poignant, painfully affected feelings.
so good Jack
This has a dreamy quality to it, and you paint a lovely picture with your words. I admire this and you, Jack!
Fave.
You really capture the essence of a dream, dream-like state. This reads like a Beatles song :) and I love the language. *
Jack, I echo what everyone else has said about the dream like quality of these and how well you've used prose to describe paintings. I'll also add that the man in the first piece and the narrator of the second fit in well with the "Jack Swenson" world of characters/narrators that we've all come to love so much. Impressive.
Such a great, pretty piece Jack.
So scenic and magical. Fantastic piece.