I don't care any more. I used to. But I can't see that self any more. I get
Virginia's walk into the sea, you
get to choose the monster who devours
you. You make the sacrifice because no
one else can. I don't care any more. What
remains is all you have to give any
way. They don't want to know you. They don't want
to know what happened before they came. Your
smiles or your crying means nothing. They'll look
for the gold in your teeth. Don't care any
more if you meant to tell me how much. This
emptiness, this emptiness, emptiness
is all. I can feel. I loved you. If that
is not enough then it never was close.
Only the sea understands that everyone
will disappear. Waves are all we are. Waves
and froth. Maybe that makes something pretty
in the sun. Maybe it's all dark under
the nightmarish moon. And stars are the nails to
keep our skeletons from running away.
I don't care any more. I thought I would.
Love killed all my heroes. No one was saved.
You know what I'm talking about. It's all done
pretty plainly written in the songs each
generation discovers half-buried
in the sand. At first they think it's treasure.
The sea laughs, more sadly than cruelly. The
dolphins are warning us to stay out of
the pool. I just. Don't. I tried I guess. It
didn't work. You didn't care. And now is
my turn. I'm feeding my lost words to the
seaweed. It's as good as feeding the ducks
who see us as generous fools, not the
elegant dreamers we act like. Sorry.
I thought we had something more to say to
each other's faces. Should never have listened.
If it mattered the sea would not be
opening its mouth on me. There will be
nothing. Gone for currents that are greener.
Poet Seated Before a High Fireplace by Darryl Price
The curtains have always had something interesting to say to us
about the floor. Perhaps we should listen. I know
it's all up to me now. They will speak for me not
with me. But the chair simply wants me to relax, to
stay put, nap. The pipe wants me to commune
with the dying fire and free all its dancing cousins
from their entrapment in the circling arms of the
bullying bricks. I'm sure they could tell a secret
or two whispered up into their sooty spines to the hairy
inhaling stars above. Even the trees, each dancing with
a head full of thick leaves, full of anxious
jumping winds, bang their whitened knuckles upon my window frame, each
pane tonight searching shelter from the relentless,badly
spitting rain. Everything is relentless tonight. My head is
pummeled and sleepy. I'm not so old I no
longer believe in the slow crawl to the nearby vegetable
garden. But there are shadows in the innocent clouds outside.
And ready to spring open fangs under the busy
roots that need to be side-stepped on the way
to the laden table. All of you shall have your soaking moonlight
say. But it will be in as few words
as possible for now. Then it's on to the bedroom with
its own silence of noises. And sleep. I love you all.
Still Life (Columbus) by Darryl Price
There in the pear's waxed features
was another sweet looking
perfectly ripe cheek. It shone
like a sun pearl surrounded
with a galaxie of brown
freckles. I so noticed the
gushing waterfall of hair.
I profoundly was glad in
my heart for the one brush stroked
color of her blue eyes. All
other fruit seemed harmless by
comparison. The bowl grinned.
Blue Snow, Fayburrow Drive by Darryl Price
This is the quiet we have all been waiting for.
It came while we weren't looking. And now the invitations
arrive. Tap tap tap. Everyone wants to accept. Some of
us come in small gleeful groups, bundled together as one.
Others of us are being dragged along by snorting horses.
The horses don't seem to mind. It tickles their ears.
They know what rewards are to follow. And there are
plenty of snowball children meeting ambassadors from the snowman kingdom. And the sledders of course daring anything to slow them
down. Even the sun and his long yellow and gold
scarves seems to be holding his hands over this new
landscape with a cheery welcoming beam. It's here! At last.
Beautiful. Each line and stanza and the whole flowing thing. Things weave together like a lattice of limbs.
Oh, man, Darryl, this sings. I mean Aretha Franklin sings. Better than that. Ray Charles sings. There are turns of phrase here that just stopped me in my tracks. And the overall poem itself unloads such a potent and lasting word on this subject. Quickly becoming one of my favorite poets, and I don't have many. In fact, it's pretty much you and Bukowski at this point and, sadly, Buk's no longer with us. So, really, it down to one.
Part that stunned me into utter and complete attention:
The transitional title to first line...
"We Were What the Trees Were Experiencing
that day but in their elephant slowness..."
I'm not going to hesitate in saying this in greatness.
Shit, man...guess this posted a few time. Oh, well. I'm happy to repeat it.
Beautiful, Darryl. My favorite line:
I found you and you found me
and together we let go of all the things
binding people to their sorrows
It reminds me of the movie Old Joy: Sorrow is nothing but worn out joy.
I like the tree-elephant connection, trees being big and slow and majestic and moving in a kind of slow motion. I like that flora and fauna are warming and that the mortal world is beautiful and the Other is beautiful beyond question and I like that they are now going east of their momentary Eden, as is sad an inevitable,and that they were a kind of spring, that which revived those trees.
Beautiful music in the line, DP. Good form.
Some great lines: "elephant slowness," "warming sun's hands."
Great title, too.
I love your line breaks, and these images! Really amazing piece. Fave.
Really nice, the merging of human within nature. Lovely.
"but in retrospect even i know you only get to pass that way once if youre lucky" a beautiful line, lucky,yes. Being able to appreciate that moment in a poem as you have so eloquently done is a way of passing through that moment again.
This poem is lovely, it has a transcendental quality that melds nature into the human form quite effortlessly
I love the way time suspends in this poem, that singular pureness almost freezes for a nanosecond. Gorgeous, especially the third time around.
Thank you for the kind words about my poem. That makes everything worthwhile--to know that someone has read it and enjoyed it. That is its purpose --for me. To share it. And to know that you have gotten it.
'elephant slowness' - that's great. Enjoyed this.
love the voice here, DP, very much.
I flowed with the words - great poetry Darryl. Fav
This is beautiful and magical. I really like the way locating the point of view in nature itself at first makes it both transcendent and intimate. Love as a force of nature.
Oh, man, Darryl, this sings. I mean Aretha Franklin sings. Better than that. Ray Charles sings. There are turns of phrase here that just stopped me in my tracks. And the overall poem itself unloads such a potent and lasting word on this subject. Quickly becoming one of my favorite poets, and I don't have many. In fact, it's pretty much you and Bukowski at this point and, sadly, Buk's no longer with us. So, really, it down to one.
Part that stunned me into utter and complete attention:
The transitional title to first line...
"We Were What the Trees Were Experiencing
that day but in their elephant slowness..."
I'm not going to hesitate in saying this in greatness.
This is so good. '...with its eager treebuds trying desperately to touch your hair...' Wonderful, moving. Great poem.
enjoyed reading it. beautifull.