tiny bits
each one found meant
something had blown
apart. that someone
was no longer
with us. but
somewhere that things
were crawling towards
unity
again. another
gun had been
fired. would peace always
start over?
it's funny how
it will. a hand
attaches to
a wrist. fingers
are flexed one
by one as dreams are
fashioned into
hugging arms made
for holding close
those we still long
to discover
like brand new stars.
Sweeteners
They drop themselves right
into the mix like
parachuting seeds, only
these pods they
spring from are the
everyday open
doors we all pass through on
our way to and
from breaths. Ah, why call it
anything else
but ordinary, this miracle
life?
Toy Soldier
It was the only thing I found
on the beach that day. There were
no comrades. Nothing to show what had
happened to the rest of the gang.
He was aimed and ready to fire
but he was alone and his gun
was pointing at the water with a
plastic steadfastness that forever froze its barrel
into the eyes of the enemy like
a mirror mounted on a rock wall.
I felt sorry for him so I
took him home with me. Now he
guards the computer, some books and cds,
with all the verve he has left
in him. Even at night he remains
on duty, ever in uniform, waiting to
fulfill his destiny, fire if needs be.
The cat keeps an eye on him.
The Dying Trees
took a long time
to open their
tight bark-encrusted
eyes and when
they did I was
immediately
struck with how
deeply those orbs
sank into mine.
"We are already
saying all
there is to say,"
they whispered, leaves
dropping at me
like mounted tears.
"Don't speak." I said,
"I know you are
in pain and I
wish with all my
heart you were not."
Loopholes
It all flows back, which
doesn't necessarily mean goes black.
You were made to disappear
down a hole of your
own making. That's not to
say the adventure's not worth
the arm and a leg
you'll be missing when it's
all over. Oh just think
of the clever story you'll
make inside the head of
someone reading this right now.
Darryl, I do not want to hijack your comments box, yet I do. You shook thought into me a number of times with this group of poems. The idea that "peace starts over" (from the poem "tiny bits")in an almost miniature instant was startlingly good. I also loved the nonlinearity of
"holding close those we still long to discover". The set was remarkable, and each one is more than powerful enough to stand alone, I believe.
great title
Interesting piece, DP. Form is vital here, and it works for me. I like the grouping.
Home run.
i find your art very filling, darryl. these pieces fall into the place they were evidently made for. loopholes especially speaks to me.
A nice smorgasboard here, Sir. the first I especially adore, all ferlinghetti-like with fingers flexing.
But the toy soldier and the last line -- yes, the cats do keep an eye on all. Great stuff, makes my insides grin. Peace *
They're all good.
Flash cards. Great.
Tiny Bits especially spoke to me for personal reasons, but I found them all fine poems.
This series starts with a bang but does NOT end with a whimper. Fave.
Darryl, you always get huge stars from me for your titles and this is no exception. I like that you're giving us a chapbook here.
This made me smile: Oh just think
of the clever story you'll
make inside the head of
someone reading this right now.
Came back to read this again, but cannot fave it again, which is a pity.
yes, the last stanza sticks it. Wonderful work.
"took a long time
to open their
tight bark-encrusted
eyes" I've been walking in the woods a fair bit lately, and this line got to me.
Yes, love that title! The Dying Trees struck me the most of all because of the dialogue and the sad simplicity of that camaraderie. Tiny bits is wonderful. I particularly love the notions of “crawling towards unity” and peace starting over. And Toy Soldier reminded me of one such soldier I loved when I was little (I also unearthed him at the beach).
"somewhere things
were crawling towards
unity
again. another
gun has been
fired. "
Love them all, but I'm torn between tiny bits and Toy Soldiers as a fave. They seem related. tiny bits gives me the sense of war and peace as a continuum instead of a set of opposites, and the Toy Soldier is caught in stasis, unable to move with the flow.
Beautiful, thought-provoking work, Darryl.
Yes.
I particularly like the Toy Soldier.
Good grouping of works. Toy Soldier seems to encompasses the themes here best, to me - from birth through life to death, with a form and style to match.
"as dreams are
fashioned into
hugging arms made
for holding close
those we still long
to discover
like brand new stars."
I just adore this...
All very effective, and the grouping of them is quite thought provoking.
Lovely, DP.
Yep, Fave.
The imagery is solid and the connections even more so. Love the title, Don Quixote flash cards. It invokes some illusory journey. Great stuff.
Another win, DP. Each of these. Rich and full. Favorite moment:
"this miracle life?"
It works for me because I've so often heard or read the phrase "this miracle OF life" or "the miracle OF life."
Wonderful collection. "Toy Soldier" resonated with me. Your title for this is well selected.
Great title. Excellent poems. Very satisfying read.