Down South was always home,
mint tea and my brother and me
skipping stones in the creek
out behind Papa's house,
while Patti knitted sweaters
for winters that never got too cold.
Now the world's on its head;
tea is dinner and Papa is dead.
Creek dry, house sold, and
my brother and me skipping
birthdays 'cause we feel old.
I bought a map and drove all over
but I still don't know
if I'll ever get used to
looking right and shifting left,
or finding the sun obliging us obliquely
as she squats low, old and tired,
to the North.
My birthday's tomorrow. Used to be
we'd suck crablegs and chug Rolling Rocks;
we were summer babies, Robbie and me.
Now I'm wearing extra socks
And wishing my ma were here
But I know she won't come:
she'd have to buy a new coat.
Down South now means August cold snap,
the forties roaring my wool cap
off my head. This island's my home now,
ol' Stewart sees to it
that I open my heart somehow
and throw my anchor down
and stay:
Kia Ora, as they say.
And I will: no one dragged me here,
sailed in on my own Pegasus
and fell in love with more wilderness
than I ever knew existed.
But on my birthday I'll drink
my usual bourbon and hear
the ice in glasses, tink-tink,
as I see my ma pour one more
Julep from her cracked pottery jug,
for me.
And I'll smell the mint and hear
Robbie's big man-laugh and wonder
why he moved to Canada.
And I'll feel
Papa's creekmud between my toes,
and I'll face east and dream
of going North.
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Ode to Stewart Island, New Zealand and North Carolina...
good very. poet were you know didn't I. poetic are stories your though.
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"finding the sun obliging us obliquely"
Nice!
What a lovely poem. so poignant and yet it dances in the light.
It does dance. The rhythm and play with memory and words.
Dances and bounces beautifully, I third Lou and Jane!
I like the music and phrasing throughout this piece, Michelle. Works well with the form. Good piece.
This DOES dance - it leaps, twirls, cartwheels and bounces off the page :)
thanks, all! playing with words and rhythm. have you seen "Billy Connolly's World Tour: New Zealand?" he starts down in Stewart Island; I think that kicked off this piece, which is part fiction/part real (my mother's mint juleps are real: the best in the world).
Having lived in NC for a number of years, I can say that this is bang on. I love crab legs and Rolling Rock. Bourbon, too, but that's more of a KY thing.
No mention of BBQ? Maybe you were not in that part of NC. Also super good with Rolling Rock.
Thanks Matthew! Oh, yes, the NC BBQ: vinegar based, not that ketchupy syrupy New England affair... Yum, with or without bourbon! Truth be told, my childhood memories are a medley of NC, MD, and Eastern Shore (Chesapeake) stories (which is where these particular crab legs originate). Trips to NC to visit Papa and Patti always involved a stop at Bill's BBQ in Richmond, VA. Ever been there?
I "fave"-ed this.
Great lines in this one.
I like:
"we were summer babies, Robbie and me.
Now I'm wearing extra socks..."
and:
"big man-laugh"
I'll be quoting all day. If I could, I'd put the whole poem in the comments page. :)
I like everything about it.
Oh, man, this poem is great. Love it.