What I wanted was my snarky reproductive endocrinologist to get a goddamn gray hair, who was he in his smooth Armani suit to tell me my FSH sat where my LH should, higher than a cloud and incompatible with life?
What I wanted was long-in-the-sheets sex, not timed sex, rush home from work sex, turkey baster sex, clomid sex, no sex.
What I wanted was one more cycle, permission from my health insurance for a sixth and final go with the lupron and follistim, one more chance for that quarter-million dollar baby conceived in petri, fueled with micronutrients fed with a micro-pipette, some kind of shapeless, beakless bird.
What I wanted was two good quality embryos; hell, I wanted three or four, but that was greedy, and since in five tries I'd barely produced one...
What I wanted was ovaries the size of walnuts, freedom from clomid-induced hallucinations, skin without pock-marks from fat and skinny needles, to not want to hang myself when I shot up with progesterone.
What I wanted was to win the lottery, to pay back my debtors, to buy me a baby, a little china girl or twins from Guatemala, not a kid made in the usa -- what I did not want was bio-mom showing up two months, two years, two decades later to claim hers.
What I wanted was a miracle, jesus-style.
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Thought I'd write about life. Why not? It's all I wanted back in 1998.
Har! Too much Linda -fav!
Linda, this is a keeper. Fertility has its own vocabulary. Thanks for writing and posting it. *
This is gorgeous and vulnerable. Thanks for sharing it. *
Killer end line. Very nice, Linda.
Wonderful form. Good piece of writing.
Turkey baster sex? But I digress. Amen to all the other comments. This is a winner.
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I like the pace of this. It stays at speed and delivers the goods without a spilled box of contents.Agree with Sam good piece.
Strong one, Linda. *
By the way, should Jesus be capitalized?
MJ, thank you so much for the read and the fave! peace...
Ann, yes, infertility has it's own language. Thank you for noting this, and the fave. Peace...
Harley, thank you so much for your generous comment and fave. Peace...
Jules, thank you for reading. Peace...
Sam, thank you -- I'm always honored when you read my words. Peace...
DP, thank you for reading -- love it when you stop to read my words! Peace...
Jim, thank you for reading and the fave. For this woman, the j stays small. Peace...
keep wishing Linda, you never know.
good wishes.
TY Estelle for reading and faving. Turns out, 6th time was the charm. But that's another story. Peace...
The frustration of this woman is palpable. I know the feeling of not being able to conceive (also know the happy feeling, two boys later). But yah, this is an excellent portrait of her world-consuming passion for children.
The repetition here is wonderful "What I wanted" over and over--and then "what I did not want" Along with what others have said above, I really like the way this sounds. *
Cathy, thanks so much for dropping by and reading. Infetility is world-consuming - yes. Peace...
Jane, thanks for reading and faving 1998, What I wanted. It makes me happy that you like the way this piece 'sounds'. Mouth feel is everything. Peace...
Imagery fires out of this in vivid bursts, making the subject immediate, felt, wrenching.
love the use of the medical terms in here, Lovely and wrenching as D said above.
David, thank you for the kind words and star on 1998. Um, yep, that's the way it felt. Peace...
Shelagh, thank you for generous comment and fave on 1998. I tend to write about health/medicine -- fodder from the day job. Peace...
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Gary, thank you - I'll take a compliment of 'raw wallop' from you any time. Peace...
excellent!
Beate, thank you for reading and faving 1998 - smooch! peace...