Friday Afternoon, Her Father's Music Shop
Zelda's got atypical tinnitus. She hears tenor sax, bouncing from ear to ear as if someone were turning a knob. As if Lester Young himself were held hostage inside her auditory cortex. She sits on a stool behind the counter of a second-hand musical instrument shop while her father counts change and talks with the customers. Zelda with her hands folded strains to hear their voices like whispers on paper like sheet music like ghosts.
Dalmatian
I dreamt of rulers and coffins dropping from the sky. Rulers, as in kings, emperors, dictators. Rulers in Persian dress with their arms akimbo and un-startled faces. Plain, pine coffins. The neighbor's dog is barking, whining. I push up the window. I love the woman in the polka-dotted scarf who comes here on Saturdays. I love her cool, white forearms turned out as she grips the handle of her bucket.
Faulty Keys and Latches
He carries a sort of purse and fills it with rocks. He likes the heft of it, how it dislocates his shoulder, makes the soles of his feet slap the pavement. He'll tell you he's heard the voice of Satan over the Sunday gospel radio. He'll tell you if you listen long enough the words run together like the teeth of a zipper. And therefore, it makes sense to have a weapon. He is lonely, but not unloved. He dreams of doors hanging off their hinges like dislocated arms. Of warped wooden doors that stick. Of faulty keys and latches. He dreams of throwing rocks at the devil from the wide, broken steps that lead to some porch.
The "un-startled faces" of rulers will stay with me. The Koch brothers' faces the archetypes. There's an urge to slap them or something, see them startled. *
I was going to add, before my comment posted all by itself, ...maybe startle them with a thwack from "his" rock-filled purse.
Ha, thanks for reading Mathew!
"He'll tell you if you listen long enough the words run together like the teeth of a zipper. And therefore, it makes sense to have a weapon."
Great stuff but the last one is my favorite. **
The pacing is masterful.*
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I especially like the last stanza.
Thanks so much Tara, Amanda, Chris Okum! And Lorna...I appreciate the reads.
These are wonderful, all of them. Love their texture, color, nuances. But I'm more partial to that first one. Maybe because I love music.
Oh, wow, thank you so much, Kyle. I'm glad the music got to you.
Like them all but am in love with "Friday Afternoon, Her Father's Music Shop."
Yes, of course -
"He'll tell you if you listen long enough the words run together like the teeth of a zipper. And therefore, it makes sense to have a weapon. He is lonely, but not unloved. He dreams of doors hanging off their hinges like dislocated arms."
All three are wonders. Good set. *
The voice of Satan over the Sunday gospel radio...
I love the derangement in all all of these. Of course Lester Young perked my ears and the doubleness of the title of the second one is brilliant. Polka dots. Each one is a thoughtful gem. Love the way the second one ends. The shift. Oh, I love all three. There you go.*
Thanks, Gary, I think that's my favorite too! And thanks Sam, Steven, and John, for the reads and kind comments!
You never fail to surprise. Love these. *
Oh, thank you, Charlotte!
I recognized this immediately though it has been a while since I read Wild Life. Resonance & staying power! **
Thank you, Jane! And thanks for reading Wild Life!
"He is lonely, but not unloved." really transforms in astonishing ways.
oh hell yeah. *
Thanks, Bud!
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
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And thanks for the Yes x3, James. : )
Ye, more like prose poetry. Astonishing selection of details and imagery in each piece. Three is my fave.*
Thanks, Gary!
Love them all, prose poetry or flash fiction- who cares? Any Kathy Fish mini is a favorite of mine. *****
Thank you so much, Robert! I'm thrilled to see so many micros cropping up here. I love writing them.
Like the teeth of a zipper...love that line. Great set *
Wonderful!
Thank you so much, Sally!
Ah, marvelous work, Kathy. The last one is particularly my favorite!***
Just saw this. Thank you, James Claffey! See you soon!
So many wonderful images/expressions. "unstartled faces" "whispers on paper like sheet music like ghosts" "off their hinges like dislocated arms."
Really love these.
Epiphany, hi! Thanks so much for this.
*, Kathy. All three are gems. But, I really like your 3rd story – a whole lot.
Thanks kindly, David!
"their voices like whispers on paper like sheet music like ghosts"
"rulers and coffins dropping from the sky."
"if you listen long enough the words run together like the teeth of a zipper"
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Hey, thanks so much, Ray! Appreciate the read and star. : )