by Jake Barnes
My art teacher hated Salvador Dali. I think he despised both the man and his art, I'm not sure. Nor do I know why he went crazy whenever Dali's name came up. He was an impostor, the little man said. A fake. His mustache would bristle. He glared at us under knit brows.
He was a good teacher. He let us do what we wanted to do, even if it was unconventional. The first thing I learned in the class was that I wasn't an artist. I couldn't draw. So I used mixed media do disguise my faulty eye; I wet the paper, used ink and water colors. I managed some interesting effects that way.
The model used to circulate among us on her break, eyeing our work. If she liked what she saw, she might stop and talk with the artist for a bit. If not, she just moved on to the next student's space. My abstract blurbs and blobs made her smile and nod her head.
I had mixed feelings about standing so close to a naked woman. I had never been in one's company before. It was exciting but disconcerting. At first it brought the color to my face and tied my tongue. As time went on, it became routine.
I wonder what happened to those good people? Walter, my teacher, is dead and gone, no doubt. I was tall, gawky teenager when I was a freshman in college. I'm sure the model is no longer with us either. Too bad. She was a good person. A good teacher in her own way.
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I was a freshman at the university. It was my favorite class.
Excellent.*
I can understand why it was your favorite class. Wish I'd have had the inspiration (and the nerve) to take an art class. I can't draw either. I kept waiting for the snark to peek out of the innocence here, but am now ashamed that I did. *
Nice. Reminded my of some of my own art classes. I had a horrible crush on a Junior girl in that class my Freshman year. Later, I knew she'd have gone out with me and been infinitely interesting if only I'd asked her out.
Under earth, nourishing corn.
Amazingly restrained.
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Can't draw to save my life, but my best friend growing up now makes a living doing illustrations for books.
Sure she'd do yours...as long as there were no naked models involved.*
A wonderful life drawing story, Jake. *
This could be a bio of my nephew. He eventually became an extraordinary draftsman and oil painter. He says anyone can learn to draw,eventually.
Enjoyed. Nice work.
Quiet and tinged with a little regret. Bet you wished you'd asked that model out.*
Sweet. *
"As time went on, it became routine." Your story fights that, brilliantly. *
"I wonder what happened to those good people?"
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I'd actually worked as an artist's model before.
+, Jake. What a well-written, unique story. I like it. Painting can be difficult. When a naked model is involved, I'll bet it was hard.