by Sam Rasnake
There was a boy who cried wolf. We know this fable, and call it the beginning of literature. Thing with no name. But truth is — it was a wolf who cried boy. According to Kafka, anticipating Nabokov, the origin of literature is when a wolf comes down from the crags, out of the dark, forbidding forest, and into the open, crying, “Boy! Boy!” but there is no boy. The pack is, of course, astounded, mesmerized. Someone first tells it. Someone writes it down. Dreams it. And so on.
There had to be a wolf, eventually — we all know this — to write it down. A book written by a wolf — about people no less, about trucks, banks, and pots full of water, about blazing fires and mountain laurel, sheep and cattle. On the back cover, he wears a jacket and jeans, a fedora and scarf, one paw at his hip. His bio reads: “His work has been widely published in The Village Voice, Conundrum, Teton Tales, and Alpha. The first wolf to be recipient of a Fulbright, he studied literature and architecture in the Carpathians. For two years he wrote a weekly column for the Denver Times, ‘The Poet and the Beast.' Living in the Wyoming Basin, he directs a creative writing program from his den.”
The story begins ... There were no pigs' huts of straw or stick or stone. No chimney or door. Nothing worth his time to enter, nothing to tear down for another meal — which was quite disturbing, even for a wolf, since the times were so depressed and one never knew where the next meal, or if and when — might be coming. Of the book, critics write of how well the protagonist assimilates the mind of a pig. Thumbs up. Five stars. Book of the Week. A sales ranking of 383. “More real than real.”
— published in Emprise Review, and featured on Lake Effect — Flash Fiction Friday, and also included in Cinéma Vérité
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This piece was strongly influenced by El Hacedor by Jorge Luis Borges. That influence applies to all my writing.
The work was published in Emprise Review, July 2011
http://emprisereview.com/emprise-20/the-wolf-who-cried-boy/
Thanks to Amber Sparks.
In June 2011 the piece was featured on the Lake Effect - Flash Fiction Friday (public radio):
http://www.wuwm.com/programs/lake_effect/le_sgmt.php?segmentid=7642
Thanks to Robert Vaughan.
The work was also included in Cinéma Vérité (A-Minor Press).,
Your brain is a rapidly moving river Sam.
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"how well the protagonist assimilates the mind of a pig." Oh, wow. More real than real indeed. *
The beginning of literature, yes, and it's continuation in your work: illuminating and entertaining.
Glad you like how this piece presents itself, Susan. It's a departure from my approach to poetry.
Appreciate the read, Jack. Thanks for your comment. Yes.
Thanks for your words, J Mykell, and for reading. Glad the piece works for you.
I loved this piece the first time I read it, Sam, which is why I was so thrilled that you gave me the honor of reading it on my Flash Fiction Friday program in June. Thanks for that, but more importantly, thanks for inspiring me again and again. It never ends.
Fave.
A good piece, it's humor sly and quiet. Had a children's book once, I can't remember the name, that reversed the three little pigs and big, bad wolf, making him the picked-on protagonist. I liked the rebelliousness of it all. I like this too, Sam.
its--please forgive--Day-long English classes make me stupid.
The flash’s appearance on FFF was special, Robert. Couldn't be more pleased. Your comment about inspiration makes me want to write more fiction.
Thanks for the read and words, Joani. I’m glad the humor in this piece worked for you.
I’m glad you enjoyed the piece, William.
I do so love this piece, Sam. It's way beyond clever. fave
Brilliant. *
I'm glad you like this work, MaryAnne. Appreciate the read.
And Jim, I appreciate that. Thanks for reading this piece.
Susan called your brain a river. Thought about that. If I had to call your brain anything, I suppose a 'rapidly moving river' would work.
You're certainly original.
This is a brilliant, funny piece.
And if I could talk to my brain-? ... "Hey - Get back in the skull where you belong."
Thanks for the read and words, James. Appreciated.
Fascinating, Sam. The Borges influence comes through and what you do with it has your definite original take. Well done.
I'm pleased the Borges' connection comes through, Christian. Glad you like the writing here.
"There had to be a wolf..." I like this line, nestled in among really, great writing. *
And it's so true - as Carl Sagan might say, given enough time - and the just-right keyboard - a wolf could write Hamlet & Sonnet 138. Thanks for the read and comment, Foster.
I'll fave this on creativity alone, not to mention the strong writing.
Glad you like this piece, Joe. I appreciate your read and words.
This puts everything into perspective, I think. "the boy who cried wolf" / "the wolf who cried boy"--we humans believing we must fear the wolf while the wolf really needs to fear the boy...sorry if I am going overboard. This is an interesting piece. *
Not overboard at all, Bobbi. It should be a foundation stone - the loss of fear. Appreciate your thoughts on this piece.
I love what Bobbi said and that makes perfect sense to me, this is very well done Sam.
I'm glad you like the work, Meg.
If it weren't for your writing and persistence, I don't know if I'd be making any attempts at fiction. So thanks for your cyber presence.
I love this weird, wild story! I'd love to see it illustrated, but maybe that's because I have a thing for Fedoras, especially on wolves.
A wolf in a fedora needs to be painted. Yes. Illustrations would be great. Thanks for the read and comment, Kate.
Does this mean all writers are wolves?
A writer friend of mine says we have to choose between being a sheep (follower) or being a wolf (individual and creating).
"The first wolf to be recipient of a Fulbright, he studied literature and architecture in the Carpathians."
Loved this. :)
There's a country song called "A Sioux Named Boy." Just thought I'd mention it.
Great piece. Worthy of Borges!
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Brilliance!!! "Of the book, critics write of how well the protagonist assimilates the mind of a pig." From beginning to end, including the title you had me!!! Outstanding, Sam!!! *****
Yes to your question, Berit. Here's the opening line to a poem of mine: Words have wolves in them. Thanks for the read and words.
Glad you liked the piece, Bill. Appreciate your comment. I'll have to give the song a listen.
Thanks for the comment about the story, Meg. I'm pleased the writing works for you. Appreciated.
I love how you've imitated both the bio and the literary review in this piece. Brilliant. *
I'm glad the piece worked for you, Greg. Thanks for reading.
I just want to say again how much I like this. I try not to say that anything by someone is my favorite piece by them, because I know I haven't read everything by anybody, but this is certainly up there of those I have read, Sam.
I can't always tell why a piece I've read may connect with me - I just know when it happens. Glad this piece connects with you, Jim. Thanks for letting me know that.
i'm a sucker for story within story and this provides even more—i love how you bring mythology and existentialism in through the back door & in the end the foreground is all we see while with the third ear we listen to the crying wolf. marvelous.
I love this! *
Have to have the layers, Marcus. The only way to go. Glad you circled back to the cry. Thanks.
Glad you like the piece, Beate. Appreciate the read and comment.
This piece is more real than real. Way good.
Thanks for the comment, Matthew. I'm glad you enjoyed the work.
Love how this turns a thing we all recognize on its head and then with precision executes a story as fresh as a breath splitting to the surface of a great body of water.
Really like your description, Sheldon. Thanks for the read and comment. Glad you like the piece.
This is awesome!
I'm glad you like the piece, Katie. Thanks for reading.
Thumbs up, five stars for the wolf in jacket and jeans, paw on hip, says the Village Voice. A Fullbright in the Carpathians. Surreal, funny and dark. A great combination. Fave*
"Listen to them - children of the night. What music they make."
I don't know why I didn't see this sooner... again thanks to Gloria's note, I saw this This is murderously good. Thanks.
The first wolf to be recipient of a Fulbright, he studied literature and architecture in the Carpathians.
Gentle and of the wild. *
Thanks, Gloria, Steven, & Ann. I appreciate your reading this work.
Nice to read some of your work sam
Thanks for reading, Fin.