“It's time to move the chair,” said Grandma matter-of-factly. I knew what she meant: time to put the old green easy-chair on the curb, the one with the saggy seat and fraying arms, the one which smelled of oil and sweat and Old Spice and also old age and even faintly of forbidden cigarette smoke. I knew it was time to take it away but dreaded it. That chair had been Grandpa's favorite. I came home from school every day and found him sitting in his chair. After short happy days at primary school, I would climb into his lap and read him books about farm animals. In later years, I scratched my homework notes sitting cross-legged at the coffee table while he concentrated on crosswords. “Maisy, what's the world's tallest building?” he might ask. The chair was as constant in my life as Grandpa. Prom dates were cross-examined, college friends were greeted from it, occasionally asked, “seven-letter word for hairy?” Once I was lectured about smoking from the chair, but I knew Grandpa occasionally snuck outside to grab a Pall Mall — I'd discovered his pack hidden in the coffee table drawer way back during my algebra years.
In the end, the hospital trips were dreadful, the funeral was bitter. But removing the green chair was my least favorite task. I rescued Grandpa's last pack of Pall Malls from the coffee table drawer, half-carried and half-pushed the chair across the lawn, and chain-smoked his cigarettes 'til dark.
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written for 'least favorite' theme at 52|250. This is all fiction: I have never smoked a Pall Mall in my life.
Loved this description of the chair: "the one with the saggy seat and fraying arms, the one which smelled of oil and sweat and Old Spice and also old age and even faintly of forbidden cigarette smoke."
I like how this story develops, showing the relationship between the narrator and Grandpa, and the ending is quite fitting. Fave.
Made me think of John Prine - "Grandpa Was a Carpenter". Great way to begin the piece - strong image of the chair:
"...old green easy-chair on the curb, the one with the saggy seat and fraying arms, the one which smelled of oil and sweat and Old Spice and also old age and even faintly of forbidden cigarette smoke."
I like this piece, Michelle.
Hirsute!
Perfect, surprising but inevitable finish, Michelle. This is lovely. *
Time to move the chair. And there it all is.
Wonderful.
More extensive comments at 52/250, Michelle, but I really loved this piece. I can't wait to read more of your work. A definite fave. * -- Q
Love the depiction of the chair as both throne and pulpit. Very nicely done.*
a universal story filtered through your keen careful eye is what makes this so special.
love the details like farm animals, 7 word for hairy, etc.
love, too, the ending -- that final image, yes, but the penultimate one too - that chair - half-carried/half-pushed: perfect.
yes, to the above--
it's lovely and ours now, michelle---thank you for rendering it so exquisitely in so small a space, and for sharing it with us.
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Like this a lot, Michelle.
"my algebra years"--great phrase.
Capitalizing The Chair calls too much attention to it, IMO. Story would work just as well with it in small letters.
Thanks everyone, for the careful comments and the faves. This theme really stumped me til the very last hour. Sometimes you just gotta wait for the right moment.
And Bill-- I think I agree. Glad you pointed that out.
Your usual deft touches; not a word wasted. Great ending. Terrific story all in all.
Loved this especially the ending.
Well done Michelle.
Faved.
Gave me a little chill, this sad-sweet story
such lovely memories.
wonderfully slow rising and falling throughout with a smash yet tender ending. perhaps only an ex-smoker can really understand.
super
Strong piece. *
Thanks, Beate, and to the others too who came here later in 2010, 2011. I appreciate the reads!