I'm a hundred years old, a thousand.
My bones make sounds like old door hinges
and rickety stair treads.
I do okay. No teens at the stores ask me
if I need them to carry my purchases to my car, not yet.
But I'm older than your parents, probably. And
my ideas, to you, smell like dust on doilies.
Sound like an out of tune piano.
You damn well should know that
my feelings are stronger than yours.
So strong as to leave me breathless.
And you're lucky I hold my dry tongue,
you whippersnapper,
you whelp.
* good read before I sleep tonight.
I love
"My bones make sounds like old door hinges
and rickety stair treads."
Those whelps keep getting younger & younger, don't they?
* for characterization.*
Darn whelps, anyway. Yes, the hell with going gentle into that "good night."
I'm a hundred years old, a thousand.
My bones make sounds like old door hinges.... Love that ***
That's how it was then AND WE LIKED IT!!! *
Yup.*
Nice bite!
Enjoyed the poem. *
fine work.
*, Ms, Beighley. Great theme, imagery and verse.
Thank you all.
Strong feelings = good poem.
Tell it, girl.*
Good stuff! -*
Nothing says old lady like "smell like dust on doilies." Hang in there my fellow old one. *
Like this very much.
I love: my ideas, to you, smell like dust on doilies and the last lines will show them, by God, and you kids get off my lawn!
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