by Jerry Ratch
She cut me adrift
On an iceberg of words
And words melt
As you know
Looks like we may have
Gone out on the limb
A little too far without
A toe-hold on Reality
Doesn't it?
But I saw the headlines:
Cows Bound for Slaughterhouse Make a Dash for Freedom
And
Yet another mall evacuated in upstate New York
Due to heavy infestation of mall rats
Well, I thought I'd seen and heard about enough
Until now, because
My muse just blew a fuse
When suddenly a little boy
Who looked a lot like me, asked:
“Do you think God will play with me?”
Well, that … that's a great question, Timmy
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Those last few stanzas -- big yes! *
For me: the first stanza ... **
Love the close
Great last line, yes.
The close rocks!
Well, somebody's got to like the middle--that'd be me! Ackshully the whole thing's a humdinger.
Opening stanza is killer.
And words melt as you know...
We are all melting.**