by Jerry Ratch
A wrinkled old woman sat at the table next to me. “Are you a writer?” she asked.
“Yes, I am.”
“Are you Jewish?”
“No, I'm not,” I replied.
“Where do you come from?” she asked in her broken English.
“Chicago,” I said. “The Bohemian ghetto there, on the South side. That's where all my relatives come from.”
“Are you Czech?”
“Yes.”
“That is good,” she said. “The Czechs were good people to us, to the Jews. They would help us. I am from Budapest.”
“When did you come over?” I asked.
“1947. I don't speak still too good.”
“You do fine.”
“Aren't you Jewish?” she asked. “You look Jewish.”
“I don't know for sure,” I said. “My girlfriend is. I'm not so sure about me.”
“I don't pray anymore,” the old woman said. “Because when we were in the concentration camps, where was He?” She looked directly at me, whispering behind her hand, “If you see God, don't tell Him.”
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Perfect.
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Yeah.
She sounds aDORable... :)
Amazing capture of a moment, perfect in the telling.
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Beautiful.
Lxx
I'm re-reading Humboldt's Gift and notice that Bellow refers to the South Side as "South Chicago." Since he grew up in Chicago I assume he knows what locals call it but when I lived there (69-73) I always heard it called the South Side (as opposed to the North Side). Maybe in the 40s that's what they called it.
Great little character piece. BIG fav!
Con, when I was there, it was always the South Side of Chicago.
And a big thanks to all!
Good one, Jerry. The narrator's," I'm not so sure...My girlfriend is," Perfect response.
Flows in a marvelous way. I can picture myself in the next booth, eavesdropping, smiling and stifling a chuckle. Fv*
This is a keeper.*
I love this. It's totally convincing. It could fit in both the God and holocaust groups if you were interested. *
Completely wow. *
Thanks to everyone!
Great title, echoed in the last line.
Oh. So perfect. *