by Jake Barnes
“Easter's coming,” my wife says. “Should I dress as a bunny or a chicken?” she asks. She means for the costume party. I tell her I thought we were going as Adam and Eve. She wrinkles her nose.
I tell her about the Easter Beer Hunt we had when I was a stripling. Most of us had just graduated from college. We were renting a place on Lake Minnetonka, just a hop, skip, and a jump from the Twin Cities.
I say I can't remember whose idea it was, but my friend Mary and I volunteered to hide the beer. Our “eggs” were those little cans of malt liquor. You had to drink anything you found. Those were the rules.
We compromise about the costumes. She dresses as the Easter Bunny, I go as Donald Duck.
While we are still discussing our options, I tell her about the time I won an Easter egg decorating contest. I was in first grade. My prize was a live baby chick. WW II had just started, and I painted three eggs in the likeness of Hitler, Mussolini, and Tojo. I called my entry “The Three Rotten Eggs.”
I got to keep the chicken, too. Kept him all that summer. I got a few more chickens to keep him company. In the fall, my father dispatched them all. Cut off their heads one day in the driveway behind our house. I cried and cried, but I knew the rule: No Animals in the House.
I forgave my father because I know he hated doing what had to be done. I never forgave my mother.
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I was inspired (?) by several incidents from days gone by.
My father once thought it would be good to raise rabbits.
I thought it was a good idea too. (though I remember thinking How did we start with two and end with twelve? How did *that* happen?)
Six months later that night's dinner was...graphic, once explained.
Killed by father, cooked by mother.
*sigh*
I love the simple sentences you write. The first thing I learned in journalism school was that clear, simple sentences are often the hardest ones to write. And I enjoyed the story. *
Interesting conjunction of past and present.
Another good one.
Ever hear of this?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Ducktators
I think there's another animated short with eggs and Hitler and co. also.
Huh. A lot to think about here. Nice layers.
Good structure. I like the unfolding here. Good piece.
Thank you Sam, Sally, Bill, Gary, Paul, Matthew. U R da best!
Yup. Another good one.
This is one of my favourites of your stories. Love visiting your fictional good old days.
You have the best endings .*
You always elevate the normal to exquisite in your stories. *
Steven, Carol, Amanda, Charlotte.
Wow! I'm delighted by your comments. Thanks to you all!
No wastage. Each sentence takes us further down your path, and you always get us to a good end.*
Very good writing, Jake...lots of depth here, layers *
There's a lot going on here. I like it all. *
Wonderful chicken and egg story. I gather you think the chicken came before the egg, and then rotten eggs at that. :-))
Keep writing. *