by J.A. Pak
in the style of The Tale of Genji.
The punch of a good haiku. Very nice. *
You tell me! *
Well played tune.
A perfect thought, succinctly put. *
You've made me very happy, Jake, Beate, Gary, Amanda, James, Charlotte!
Love the sound at the end - the foghorn in darkness. Just right.
Thanks, Sam! You're also on the happy list! :)
Not one word too many or too few.
What every poem wants to hear. Thanks so much, Bill.