by J.A. Pak
Bob had been sitting in the car for over twenty minutes. Parked up on the next hill, he had a good view of Dulcey's house. He'd come to feel responsible for the house. Like a good family doctor. With care, houses could last forever. Bob's thinking was that a house like Dulcey's should last only as long as the love did. Another year, Bob thought, another year and then he'd repaint. Some of the upstairs window frames needed repair. He'd do it all in one go. It was a grand house and he loved the feel of it.
He started the car and drove home full of contentment.
Carol's car was in the garage. Surprised, Bob bounced into the house and grabbed Carol by the waist, giving her a messy smooch on her cheek.
“My, you're in a good mood,” Carol said.
“So I am, so I am.” He gave her another kiss.
“You want to go over to Dulcey's for dinner?” Carol didn't see Dulcey as much as she would have liked. With her new job at the museum and all her volunteer work, she had even less time now than when the kids had been little. She missed her piano lessons. She'd start again soon.
“When do they expect us?” Bob asked.
“Around eight. Why?”
“I wanted to know if we have time,” he said. “And we do.”
He threw Carol over his shoulder and took her into the bedroom. On the bed he tickled her until she was crying with laughter. And then the tickles became caresses, the fingers, lips. The love they made was very quick, very hungry. The rest of the hour they spent lying together, holding hands. They were like warm little radiators.
Rain began to fall as they drove to Dulcey's. Hand in hand they ran towards the house. Little droplets of rain covered the button of Carol's nose. Bob wiped them away tenderly with his thumb. Carol put her hand around Bob's neck and kissed him passionately.
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From my novel Anchored Leaves.
perfect rendition of the title.
Sweet. Made me smile. *
This piece is its own "warm little radiator". I'm smiling, too.
oh, yes.*
Great warmth.
Thanks so much, James, Charlotte, Carol, Mathew, Gary. I'm relieved to hear that the warmth is in the piece and not just in my head.
Good moment here. Nice view of the characters.
Cozy moments. Such a glowing visual - On the bed he tickled her until she was crying with laughter. **
Nice. Fave line: "They were like warm little radiators."
jb
Thanks so much, Sam, Rachna and Jake.
"They were like warm little radiators." Nice moment.*
Beautifully rendered, tender and sweet.
Thank you, Gary and Darryl!
As others have noted, "They were like warm little radiators" is an outstanding line in a very warming, enjoyable piece.
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Thanks so much, Bill.
Lovely. *
So glad you liked it, Beate. Thank you!
Very sweet part of a story ... novel, as you mention. If it is all this sweet, we will not need anything for long again. Try this: (close without the last sentence and see if you like it that way). *
Thanks so much Ann. Alas, much of the novel is more bitter than sweet. I like it without the last sentence but I need that sentence to show a different part of Carol.