by Darryl Price
Oh I do wish I did have something more red this time than more blue this time to
fling up into the silly air, like ribbons or neon string, only for you now, when all I can come up
with are chewed on memories that look remarkably
like the threads of a once cherished
but now gone to seed favorite blanket of mine. I always
said I was against nostalgia
as a way of life, but I yearn, I do,
for a drink again of something utterly
new. I collected all these years of
these seashells for the garbage.And now once more I
cast them like dice at your old name. Let them
sink away, please, take them back, back into
the deepest part of everything, far from
where I sit with my emptiness, an old
silent writer with no words at all for love.
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I hate the idea that there's even a spot of something like pity in this piece for you, but I see what you might mean. My shot here was for an honesty of approach and a kind of aching beauty about the long term effects of actually maybe caring about someone so deeply and for so long. Remorse with dignity? Is there even such a thing out there in the universe?The very notion is ridiculous by nature. I think that's what the poem asks and resigns itself to in the end. It is what it is the moment you ask for any definition of its ultimate meaning. It freezes at the point of acceptance.It recedes without warning is all you can be sure of.
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wrenched and tearful, now *
fave!*
"I always
said I was against nostalgia
as a way of life, but I yearn, I do,
for a drink again of something utterly
new."
Good piece, DP. Enjoyed.
I want to take a vacation inside your head for a week or so. Maybe I can figure out where you come up with all these startling images, DP. I could use an infusion about now.*
Love this. So fresh yet feels like an old friend.
Brilliant work, Darryl. I agree with JP. A week inside of your head just might be what the doctor ordered.
interesting.
"an old / worn away writer with no words for love"
Love this poem, but, no, that's not you, my friend.
"No new thing comes into view except the damned view."
This is original and great!
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"No new thing comes into view except the damned view."
Wow! That sums it all up and then some. You could write yards around that line, it's brilliant.
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All feels hauntingly familiar. I like this particularly, `I yearn, I do,
for a drink again of something utterly
new` *
Darryl, it is as if you have looked into my mind and exposed the thoughts in some way...this is so relatable and unusual, the construct and emotions so perfectly encapsulated in truth, and your beautiful poetic vision.
Fave.
self as object
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There's pity with self but it comes across as strong and resilient. A river of shed and unshed tears well channeled creating your very own poetic island, Darryl. Good soil there and strong plants.
Wow. The reader can really feel this yearning.
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I always / said I was against nostalgia / as a way of life, but I yearn, I do, / for a drink again of something utterly / new.
Runaway tears, softly missing stars,
Great imagery.