I would see her at the gym in the mornings. She usually worked out from six to seven and then took a Pilates class from seven to eight. She was probably a grandmother, but a well preserved one. She had the hips of a mother and the usual dimensions of a well-formed woman in her sixties. She had dyed blond hair in a Dutch-boy style. Her remarkable feature was a perfectly round face with a ready smile and sparkling eyes. I noticed the few times I used a machine after her, that she could pull some hefty weights. She wore an engagement ring and a wedding ring, though I never heard her talk of a husband, either to women or men. Many of the men of her age flirted with her and hit on her in an innocuous way. She seemed to enjoy their attention, if not encourage it. I had never spoken to her in the three years I had been coming to the gym, but then the mostly conservative WASP population of the town, looking at my nose, thought I was some crazy Semitic artist from New York City. Yesterday she was waiting to use a machine I was using and asked my name.
—Jack. Jack Mahler
—Ah, you are the artist? Bill spoke very highly of you.
Bill was a politician I had befriended when we were in physical therapy together when I first arrived in town.
—Well, I said, you know Bill is a politician and a lawyer. You can't trust what he says.
—He says you are a good sculptor and painter. He has shared some of your stories with some other members of the gym.
—Sounds like Bill.
—If you are so good, why haven't I heard of you?
—You got me there. I've been hiding in Brooklyn all my life. But if you send me an e-mail, I'll send you links to images of my work.
—Is it a difficult e-mail?
—No. Here it is: jackmahler1 at nfb dot art. That's an Arabic 1.
—Oh, she said, turning and walking away.
Later I could see her talking to other members of the gym and pointing to me and mouthing, “He's an Arab.”
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Hearing what you want to hear.
A little wry bread for Thanksgiving.
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An Arab. Nice moment.
Now I remember why I never make eye contact with anyone at the gym.*
*ah yes, little WASPY communities and their fear of the outside world.
Clever and telling. But was the narrator's choice innocent or experimental?
An illuminating moment.*
Thank you Gary H, Jerry, Steven, Amanda, Oliver, Alex and Gary P. for reading and commenting and the *
Love the dialogue and that last line! Agree with Gary P. **
Tara-
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Indeed.:-))
Those last two lines--mmmm good. *
*, Daniel. Great close.
Mathew P and David J-
Thank you for reading and commenting. On a good day I put a good wrap on a flash.:-))
Such a great piece of writing *
* Ouch! This hit home. I live in a town that looks askance at the Obama/Biden bumper sticker I refuse to take off my car. Loved this flash, Daniel. Yeah, New York.
Thank you Foster and Nonnie for commenting and the *.
"I thought seriously about moving back to Brooklyn where nobody cared, or if they cared too much, they were considered extremists."
Gotta love those extremes.
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Thank you Bud. Strange the ways of people.
Good one.
Thank you James. Ah, those little town blues.
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Thank you Beate for reading and the *
I love the sly way this opens and that encourages our attraction to the woman. The turn in it comes swiftly and it decisively lands in the end. Compressed, cool stuff. *
Thank Ann for your wonderful comment and the *.
Well, you popped that balloon, David. Him over her any day.
Thank you Lucinda for reading and commenting. Just saw you post today.