We Don't Need No Education
by Bill Yarrow
You were sitting with your vexed complexion,
your dour shoulders, your hoarse aloneness
in the front row of my English for Unwed Mothers
class, and I hadn't yet read your essay on “Miscarriages
of Injustice,” nor had you read Montaigne's “That Men
Are Justly Punished for Being Obstinate in the Defense
of a Fort That Is Not in Reason To Be Defended,” and it
wasn't yet Thursday 2004 when we would be sitting
on the curb in front of The Sikh Community Café
where you were telling me, “The body is a lost temple
of bliss and blister,” and the smile on my face was palpably
inapt, and I blurted out, “There's an ill energy that emanates
from your precise heart that I find attractive,” to which
you replied, editing me with a surgeon's cruel disinterest,
“You mean it's an attractive ill energy,” and I said, “Yes,
that's what I mean,” though that wasn't at all what I meant,
and the sun was pursuing the moon in an ineffable dance
of unlikelihood and redress, and you were wearing
your father's shoes though I remember thinking what
large feet you had, learning later that that was unfair
and untrue, learning later that your heart, like all hearts,
was fuzzy, not precise, that your candor was a sham,
that you were neither a mother nor unmarried, that my
interest in you was not interest at all but usury, that I was
a man not in full but in fullishness, a false Montaigne,
whose chin beard, though elegant, was the merest bravado.
What a ride-along in this great slice of life, nice. *
When so few words carry me from contempt to compassion ( and not just a little of each, but a lot) it's easy to just fave and be done with it.
Line after amazing (and entertaining) line. A little miracle. A+ / fav
Much like "A Piece of Him", this poem's strength is that it makes the abstract relatable.*
Palpitations are the devil's workshop. Well said...
This is wildly good. FAVE FAVE FAVE
Crazy-cool! *
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Thanks to Clark, Carol, Jake, Amanda, James (welcome back!), Chris, Charlotte, and Sam, for your gratifying comments. I'm grateful for the faves.
BTW, WHOLLY imaginary.
*, Bill. Great phrase here: "the sun was pursuing the moon in an ineffable dance
of unlikelihood and redress,..."
Duplicity cannot be avoided entirely.
Ah yes! *
Thank you, David, Gary, and Michael!
Love this. The last third of this is amazing. *
Agree with Christian, above. But you had me all the way through. that the body is a lost temple of bliss and blister just rocked it. Love the urgency of confession, too.
So glad I found this this morning.
"not in full but in fullishness"
wow.*
Bill, I love the way you end your pieces. This one, like all the others, makes me re-read everything that came before it. *
Great comments, Christian, Jodi, Gary, and Foster! Much appreciated. Thank you!
Love the way the confessional ending unraveled all that went before it.
Thanks, Patti!
Big love for this, Bill. It's not missing a thing! *
yes, yes. love this one.
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Thank you, Tina and Michelle!
Made being up at 4am a joy
Thanks, Derek!
yes! *
Stopped by to see if I was missing anything, then I read this and had to log in to give it a * because I was missing something.
Thanks for the votes for this one, Jerry and Joani! Much appreciated!