by Bill Yarrow
Sleep like a bear grabs you and won't let go.
Hunger is an ever-opening wound,
brashness a rash whose sudden appearance
is mysterious and unnerving. Like
a long film dissolve, your dreams linger in
wild, new schemes. Your intelligence feels like
a weapon that's been fired in battle
but never been cleaned. Now regret, like a
bus backfire at 3 AM, has startled
you out of your chair. Generosity,
like a foreign city you always meant
to visit, stares at you with pleading eyes.
You're ashamed of selfishness, that blanket
whose softness and warmth you cannot give up.
Tolerance: dollars in someone else's
wallet. Arrogance: cake in the mouth of
a man too old to still be eating cake.
Life, like a kite string, is slipping out of
your hands. Wait! Is any of this true? No.
Poems are not made of nothing but the truth.
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This poem was published in Pirene's Fountain.
This poem appears in "Against Prompts."
https://www.amazon.com/Against-Prompts-Bill-Yarrow/dp/1943170282
Pentameter lines. Something a little bit different for me.
Nice movement here, from one image to another - like pre-sleep thoughts often do. I particularly like the regret, like a bus backfire at 3 AM. *
This grabbed me like a bear and forced me to see myself in its shifting mirrors.
*. too true
Thank you, Beate, Matt and Jerry!
Your work Bill reads like a canvas of common interior we visit as if it be a foreign country, yet refuses to be viewed touristically.
I like inventories and lists. This is a wonderful inventory of terrific images.
Thanks, Amantine! Thanks, Daniel!
Poems are not made of nothing but the truth
I love that line!
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Hi, Ann! Thanks!
I'm with Ann. Great work, Bill,
Thank you, David!
You're a piece of work. xo
Hi, Joani! Gracias, amiga!
Enjoyed.
Love 'nothing but the truth."
The whole truth.
Enjoyed!
Thanks, Gary and Dianne!
"Sleep like a bear grabs you and won't let go.
Hunger is an ever-opening wound"
These lines haunt me.*
Thank you, Tim!
"Sleep like a bear grabs you and won't let go." --and with that, the lines hold their grip through the final three lines and the last line itself.
Good work.
such rhythm
Thanks, Edward! Thanks, Kitty!
* YES
ding ding ding ding
Thanks, Gary!