by Ann Bogle
The wedding was to have taken place at the spout, at the fish mouth of the fountain, where the ice had stopped its tumble from the bubbler, that in summer entertained the old and the children and caused the others to look for pennies in their pockets and purses, pennies to cast to the feet of nudes. Parish priest passed over, the pastor was to have given the order of service and the man, the groom, a handsome daredevil of rectitude, was to have given his hand to the woman, the bride, the statuesque caregiver of whispers. G. had had this in mind the entire time, asking how does this? wearing white mink for winter, before supper. Given savings. The running arm of love of one man for one woman who saves him, each day mattering a little more than the next, each day mattering a little more than the last. Each day mattering more than the thirst. How in this loving matter only loving matters. The man, the woman, the footpath. The lovers heard early in the morning at their water. Pouring water for coffee from the tap. Arriving graciously, cautiously, warily, safely to nest. Talk of love on the phone. It was an easy conversation. The love was a bumper crop. The love was coming out noodles through the receiver. He loved her more than he had ever loved anyone. His happiness was complete. She let him more than she had ever let anyone love her. The happiness was a tablecloth for a picnic. The happiness was the carpet in the hallway. The happiness was the wall behind the painting. The happiness was the sky behind the cloud. The happiness was the seating in the Saab. The happiness was the carrier, the weekend, the chimes. The happiness was not among the people or women who were to have witnessed it, who could not be clear without or about it, who were in it, whose own happiness was phrased in book order—she, her happiness was to have been a seal within eternity, in the Wednesdays of life.
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Appeared at Ana Verse on December 11, 2007 and October 9, 2012:
brilliant writing. ***
Thanks, James Claffey!
Slight revisions 12:56 p.m. CDT Oct. 9, 2012.
Further slight revision, 1:34 p.m. CDT Oct. 9, 2012.
This is so rich, Ann. Super good writing *
I love "The happiness..." sequence in this. Ann, great. *
"The happiness was the wall behind the painting." Good piece, Ann. *
Very nice, very human.
("to cast to" How about "to cast at"?)
Wow. I love the realness, the honesty of this. It really connects.
I really love the way this piece moves.*
Foster, Chris, Sam, Edgar, Ima, and Jen, thanks for your appreciation. The piece was hid at my blog since December 2007. Because of your response, I've turned it out. Thanks!
Rich and layered. One brilliant image after the next.*
Thanks, Gary!
Others' happiness is of our imagination. We never really know others' happiness. A wedding is one delusional party.
"The happiness was a tablecloth for a picnic. The happiness was the carpet in the hallway. The happiness was the wall behind the painting. The happiness was the sky behind the cloud. The happiness was the seating in the Volvo." beautiful parallel structure, love
sorry, I can't find words. This is a blanket of wonderful.
Stunning, beautiful.
Fave, Ann. How did I miss this lovely piece. Usually when I see words like love and happiness I wonder if those terms are universally accepted by most of us as absolutes. I'm sure they are relative "compared to what" words. Here though, Ann, you come close to making me change my mind. Terrific imagery all around, too.
If this was the only line, and nothing else worked, the piece would thrill me, “The love was coming out noodles through the receiver.”
Thanks, new readers to this story. I so appreciate it.
Fantastic writing, Ann. Marvelous gem!
Fave.
Thanks, Robert!
Gorgeous piece. *
This is so beautifully full. Great piece, Ann.
Thanks, Beate and Susan.
Great. It's a revelation.*
Thanks so much for reading, John.
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it's lovely, ann--
thank you
g
this moved me. Pennies at the feet of nudes!
"loves like noodles through the receiver" is in fact sublime
Lovely
I'm not sure what love is anymore, but this is a wonderful expression of love.
Terrific, Ann.
Hey, Joe Bardin, always great to see you here, and thanks to both you and Dan. I don't know what I think love is, either, yet I think I know what happiness is, so that counts for something.
Else. Thanks, Gar!
oh this is fanbloodytastic, Ann. i relish every word. *
Thanks, Penny!