by Ann Bogle
On December 2, I met Nils for the first and only time. Nils, a university geographer, found me at an Internet dating website. He drove two hours to meet me on my turf. My car, a 1989 Volvo 240 DL, had been and is still on the fritz, and with the weather expected to turn wintery, which it did, Nils decided to go to me.
I had listed with Internet dating websites for two years without meeting someone that way in person. Mostly, I got affirmation from the sites and little more. I did not shop the photos for Mr. Next. I waited for the men to shop for me, and they did. Sometimes I received five or more electronic winks in a day and did not reply to them; also, I had no interest in replying to them. Then I wondered if I ought to take my profiles down from the websites so no man might believe mistakenly that I was thinking of him, as happened at the beginning: I thought for a week that a certain artist from St. Paul had me in mind because we had mutually “winked” at each other. Neither of us would pay the subscriber fee and correspond.
Nils was different from the start. Since he signed one of his letters with his full name, I searched him at Google and contacted him at work, something that annoyed and confused him: He thought the dating website had committed a security breach. The breach was mine, not one of security, but of etiquette. Nils provided a different email address for my use, and we started to correspond. He turned out to be the best correspondent I had had in twenty years, which was saying quite a lot, since I tended to correspond with writers (albeit writers who ran cool toward correspondence). By contrast, Nils was fiery, opinionated, and sure on personal subjects.
After our date, which included dinner, a glass of wine, and a ridiculous TV show about a private investigator following a woman who worked for a sexual bondage service, we “did it,” as we say here in Minnesota, on the hotel bed. I rarely discuss sex. I had learned early on that it's better never or almost never to mention sex except with the related sex partner and not to discuss past sex with someone else.
One day, out of the blue, and not due to any conversation, it occurred to me that I had not mentioned sex enough. I had left myself open to too much speculation, too many blanks that might lead to an impression of frigidity or boring or unearthly ways. At the website, my sexual personality test revealed that I was a Traditionalist. Nils was an Intellectual.
After our date, my sister, who has a boyfriend, came over with her Weimaraner. I started instantly to tell her of my sex with Nils. She shirked the conversation, tried to change the subject, and more than once, I persisted. I wanted to tell her about it. “I don't want to know about your sex life,” she said at last. “I don't have a sex life,” I told her. “I had sex, once, with Nils.” In 2003, I had sex twice. In 2004 not at all, and in 2005, twice, once with Nils and once with my standard-issue, gray fox once-boyfriend, who had not had sex since 2004.
I called my woman friend, whom I have not seen in two years except for running into her once at a café. “I had sex,” I called joyously into the phone, as if I were calling out my name to hear it echo in the mountains. “You're funny,” she said, but it sounded like “weird” was what she meant. She has had a boyfriend for years; having sex for me was weird, and talking about it was even weirder. True, when I had a boyfriend, I had sex each day, and it had not seemed weird at all, but once-a-year sex was of another order and was genuinely noteworthy.
To be even more bold (and speak more about sex), I told two men about it; I told them my date with Nils had included amazing sex. I told them it was timed for conception. I told them I wanted “it,” meaning the baby, even though I wasn't pregnant.
I wrote to Nils: “Sex with you was of the highest order I have ever experienced. I was nearly drunk on it. I ‘saw' nothing except my open vagina against a screen, as if the whole room and world were nothing except an all-around vision inside a cunt. A flower, that is.
“It was deep, indeed. So now I must ask you (since I was in stellar orbit) did you come inside me? Usually, I know that sort of thing. This time I wouldn't be able to say.”
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Published as "Fiction by Ann Bogle" at Altered Scale Blog, Jefferson Hansen, Ed., April 9, 2012.
http://thealteredscale.blogspot.com/2012/04/fiction-by-ann-bogle.html
Appeared January 23, 2006 at Ana Verse:
http://annbogle.blogspot.com/2006/01/first-sex.html
For a companion piece published on Fictionaut on January 9, 2021, see:
http://fictionaut.com/stories/ann-bogle/more-about-nils-whose-real-name-is-georges
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Brilliant *
Strong writing, Ann. And voice.
"One day, out of the blue, and not due to any conversation, it occurred to me that I had not mentioned sex enough. I had left myself open to too much speculation, too many blanks that might give the impression of frigidity or boring or unearthly ways. At the website, my sexual personality test revealed that I am a Traditionalist. Nils is an Intellectual."
I like.
Why this made me laugh aloud many times, I can't say. Maybe it's me, but your words were responsible. *
Way brilliant. *
Fantastic, reminds me of Miranda July. *
nice stuff.
I like it. :)
this is pretty damn sexy I have to say -- memoir may be a poet's only marketplace recourse these days
That's an important question in the last paragraph. Did Nils ever answer? ~ * ~
This is really good writing Ann- compelling, engaging, real - full of compassion for human vulnerabilities and just damn good story telling. *
Ann,
There is no one, anywhere, who does what you do or who can do what you do. Incomparably good.
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bueno!
Ann the voice you write from (your women voice) is generally constrained, and then it tells things, lets things out, and it's just amazing how the things come out: the obsession with the numbers, for instance, how many times with how many partners in how many years. Brilliant!
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Thanks all readers for your comments and fav's on this piece, the first in a series.
The genre for this piece, I've thought, is "sexual journalism." If I do write a series, I will become, however briefly, a sexual journalist. It would be a shame to give up my principles then not to be paid. It would be called "kiss and tell" in the real world, even if I hide the men's identities. I really ought to be paid. I read that Anne Lamott recommends owning all our stories and writing them as we like. She faults the people in our lives for not behaving better if their stories become print. What if someone did not misbehave, however? What if we encounter a saint? How do we write about it without injuring that party? The REAL story behind this story is LONG and would take a year to tell. The man, Nils, was both more interesting and complicated than I describe. I told the editor a fuller version of the story in an email, and he labeled this one fiction since it's so simplified.
The tense in paragraph 1 is a little unsettled. The tense in paragraph 2 seems actually wrong after reading paragraph 1.
It is an error in grammar that REVEALS something about what I would like to say, that I had never met someone that way, after stating that I had met someone that way once.
STET though it is grammatically wrong.
Edited for tense. November 12, 2012, 12:52 a.m. CST.
God I like this one. Funny and true and starring our silly sweet home, the upper Midwest. You damn betcha... A fave.
Steve, so right. Minnesota Nice, Minnesota Rice (is for weddings). I do not declare it in the story. I hoped that itemizing sex incidents (one or none per year) might convey it. Susan Tepper (not a Midwesterner) read it as the narrator's counting obsession. Not so! A celibacy reigns, even for the gorgeous. As in politics, there are sexual incumbents and non-elects. In Texas, every woman I knew had a boyfriend then another if something failed. In Minnesota, in a room full of recovery people, one sexually active male, one female, twenty (forty) inactive, at a time. What visitor to the arts would believe it who had not LIVED here?
Extremely quirky, unique, matter-of-fact very funny story.
Loving the quirky humor and the voice in this. Good stuff.
ann---speechless
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I enjoyed this very much. It makes me want to start making fake profiles on dating sites again.
Gloria, Rob, Gary, and Frankie, thanks much for reading, commenting, and faving.
The tense shifts bothered me as I edited this (and other stories) to include in my story ms. Jeff Hansen liked the shifts and still likes them after considering them regularized here. The story with contradictory tense is at Altered Scale blog and Ana Verse.
Will come back to this and read again. Football is in my ear. But I love your voice. Favorite.
March 16, 2013, updated. Tree buyer. Arbor Day is the best day to commemorate sex in Minnesota.
"sex" as John Bauer put it, _is_ the problem; I agree. Phosphorescence likes to be near it.
Delightful story, and your last comment here opens up a whole new...nuance for exploration: "Phosphorescence likes to be near it."