Reckless:
He shows a wreaking disregard for the safety of others.
He has of late, he knows not how, lost his mirth. Wild and foolhardy, he bungee-jumps from sharp objects, dallying, drives three sheets to the wind, drinks kamikaze shots while bowling for dollars he doesn't have.
To be or not to be, he is reckless like a necklace strung too tight without a clasp, a wasp with no asp
Abandon:
She ditches the car on a back road in an attempt to flee her past. She puts her hand over her mouth, the robin egg crushes underfoot. She can taste danger seeping through her pores, down her back, into the willow roots.
Incapable of her own distress, she will fling herself, unrestrained, to the swamp, rue, from the brook. She springs free from encroachment, skimming like an amoeba across quicksand
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This piece originally appeared in Heavy Feather Review, and is one of 30 pieces in my second chapbook: Diptychs + Triptychs + Lipsticks + Dipshits, from Deadly Chaps Press, Joseph Quintela publisher:
This is a marvelous piece, Robert.
"He has of late, he knows not how, lost his mirth."
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"She can taste danger seeping through her pores, down her back, into the willow roots."
For me, it's one of your best. Strong. ***
Wonderful stories. Love the "lost the asp" line.
You are amazing.
I like the title of the chapbook, too. *
Fantastic!
Fave.
If this is any indication of your latest chap, I can't wait to get a copy of it, Robert! I still love reading Microtones.
This piece rocks! *
strong shit right there. I'd like to put this poem in a cannonball and blow up the moon. *
LOVE THIS! ****
Thanks Sam, Andrea, Jake, Wallace, Mike, Bud and MEG!!! xoxo
Your chapbook is excellent, and this poem is a small example of why I love your writing. Congratulations! *
Love the playful use of alliteration, eye winking reference to iconic titles and phrases in the lexicon of popular culture, the capricious imagery and cleverly placed and surprising internal rhymes. Rambunctious and mischievous piece Robert. One of my favorite pieces of yours. Really looking forward to reading the entire new chap, old chap! ;-) *
First of all, I love the title of this new book, Robert, and if this allusory work is an indication of its sly brilliance, I'm gonna love what's inside it, too. I especially love the sound of this line "To be or not to be, he is reckless like a necklace strung too tight without a clasp, a wasp with no asp" Poor Hamlet, poor Ophelia!*
Theo, MGM and Joani: your comments warm my heart! Thanks a ton! xo
I'd say I love the language play here, but I love that in all your pieces.*
*, Robert. One of my several favorite lines:
"She ditches the car on a back road in an attempt to flee her past."
Amanda: so kind of you! Thanks a ton!
David: you are a scholar and a gentleman! Thanks a lot.
Robert Shakespeare Vaughan! You are an awesome writer. A fave for a favorite.
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"A wasp with no asp". Yes. *
Dear Bill, thanks a ton! You are my hero! And Tina B...thanks so much for the comments and support! YAY!
This one took some cajones, i think, and I love it.
"To be or not to be, he is reckless like a necklace strung too tight without a clasp, a wasp with no asp"
Steven, thanks for your support and nice comments!
Hey Papa: get a real job.
SO glad I found this this morning.*
Thanks, Gary! I appreciate that.
Vivid crush under foot of the delicate robin's egg shell. The prose veers toward the abstract and yet remains tactile. These two, he and she, seem related, as if they are the on-off sides of the same switch. Darn cool. *
Ann, thanks a ton! Love your comment 'as if they are on-off sides of the same switch.' Damn, what a great remark!
Reading these few words is an exciting experience. Great.*
Thanks so much, Nonnie! I appreciate your support.
Fine writing, Robert, as good as it gets *
Hey Fos, thanks so much!
Lovely prose, Robert!
Thanks, Vincent!
YES *
Thanks Marcelle!