What I wanted in 1981

"plus i stained his hockey sheets
right over the red wings"

yes. that brought me there. and funny at the time.

i really like this a lot.

thanks Meg. :)

I love this, Rene! Detroit Red Wings, btw, finished last in the final standings of the Norris Division in 1981-82. If she had stained hockey sheets right over the mighty Montreal Canadiens’ red C logo I wouldn’t be awarding your poem, as I am now, a *!

Thanks Frank! And staining the Canadien's would be less poetic as well.

Hey now! Great work Rene. A creative theme you've got going here.

Fave.

Thanks Roberto. And you're right, the wings keep popping up.

LOVE this, Rene.

Everything is captured so well in this snap shot: the emotion, the mood, the scene. Great. *

Thank you so much Harley.

Good ending. It popped me in the face (in the good way).

So good!
*

Nicely done, Rene. I like the form.

Christopher,Susan and Sam, Thank you all so much.

The stain on the hockey sheets, the wanting to take it the fuck back. Gets me in the chest. Peace *

Kickass piece, Rene. Big fav.