21stC irl (easy action) party
by Penny Goring
Brian
Spit
George
Jacques
Lizzy
Jim
Jimi
Animal
Kathy
Adrienne
Karen
Steve
Denise
Tom
Ralph
Andy
Donkey
Sarage
Pickup
Vivienne
Malcom
Adam
Bianca
David
Thurston
Joseph
Eva
Louise
Dolly
Eve
Cindy
Nan
Patti
Polly
Penny
Nick
Siouxie
Hugh
Claes
Leigh
Trojan
Nico
Lou
Jean
Dennis
Anthony
Martin
Antony
David
David
David
Janey
Mole
Tim
Viva
Kurt
Iggy
Derek
Alice
Mary
Ian
Les
Christian
Johnny
Denny
Yves
Perry
Robert
Chloe
Sid
Tilda
Fred
Arthur
Michael
Zeno
Debbie
Kelly
Corinne
Shirley
Fleur
Maxine
Ellen
Wobble
Dean
Richard
Bruce
Terry
Vince
Suzanne
Phil
Eileen
Ezra
Melina
Lilith
Kevin
Stan
Tadgh
Juliette
Angel
Dan
Josh
Goffo
Rory
Christopher
Electra
Peter
Ari
Billy the Girl
Basher
Martin
the other Martin
Gail
Tiara
Lisa
Jordon
Amelia
Nic
Max
Yasmin
Marc
and
Mark
got naked and rolled into a ball.
All the shapes in all the mirrors.
Russell sucked lots of toes.
Maxine watched.
Spit farted.
By which I mean to say I adore you.
Nobody took pics.
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Author's Note
dress love to the extreme, exciting to the floor, love doesn’t exist, and i love you
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cool party poem, luv the strobe of names. No pix but video leaked. I bet it was Angel, U no she does stuff w/ toes. *
One knows one is IN trouble when a name repeats three times, as in David, David, David, and one begins to examine just that triplicate name for meaning. All names mean or have a mean average. I like Brenda's comment above to describe this guest-list-with-title as a story. In real life. Catherine M. is the writer whose book I have read up to page 30 that reminds me of it in narrative prose. Page 30 because reading it I felt cavernous. *
As it happens, David means 'beloved.' Just sayin'.
Don't know who Catherine M. is but I like what you've done. *
YES.*
love me a good list*
Oh, I remember it now.
Absolutely. Wonderful way the music moves, Penny. The closing lines make it work completely.
I'm clapping.
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Umm, one of them is called 'Donkey'. Didn't anyone else get worried by that?
Who could not love this poem?
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By the laws of the internet, doesn't no pics mean it didn't happen? O.o
@frankie https://vimeo.com/64540020
Fun, fun, fun!
Good god, Penny. J'adore.
Wonderful way to end it!
Oh yes!*
OMG! soooooo funny, sooooo like a party I’ve never been to (ah, ok, don’t really remember) but wish I had been there. Well, maybe. Nicely done, Penny, exceedingly clever!
Yup.
Orgy, porgy, Ford and fun
Kiss the girls and make them one.
<3
This made me laugh out loud. Literally.