by Mark Reep
We have no more leaders, only rulers who live in another country. I don't ask why my cousin's hand is bandaged, what he's been burning, what's tarped in his truck. I say I don't watch the news but last night I dreamt I was Jesus Christ, and you know the worst part? My cousin stares at me. He shakes his head. I say you ever think about the pressure? Mess up once, and then what? Start over? My cousin laughs. His teeth are awful. I wouldna lasted long, he says. Got any coffee?
I cut up little squares of baloney, fry him a soft omelet he won't eat. He wants to use my phone. I say they shut it off. I know he doesn't believe me but he doesn't push it.
At the door he says better not, he needs a shower. I hug him anyway. He's heat and bones and stink but still tall enough to rest his chin on my head. He says nothing. I nod against his chest. When he pulls away his sleeve catches the latch. I say wait wait and he stops and smiles the way he does now, so you can't see his teeth, and lets me free him.
Our needs are a far smoke rising. It's eight o'clock, the scrapyards will be open. I wonder what they're paying for copper. I'm late for work but I scrape his plate. I don't want to come home to these dirty dishes.
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Published in cur.ren.cy. My thanks to editors Dale Wisely, Howie Good, F. John Sharp.
Well done, Mark.*
I'm right there. . . *
Real nice, Roberto.
M-A-R-K...(that is)
;-)
Yes, well done, I'm right there, too.
Perfect piece to put in a time capsule... I'm awed, Mark.
Plenty to praise here, but want to say everything rises to "When he pulls away his sleeve catches the latch. I say wait wait and he stops and smiles the way he does now, so you can't see his teeth, and lets me free him" and is then released gracefully. Fave--
Thrift and accuracy and a bitter Becketty world. Home.
Star.
Another gritty tough one here Mark. A glimpse into a dystopian vignette that's all too real. Meticulous attention to small details in this tight little piece. It's like a painting. *
I can taste the grit, Mark. Well done. "Our needs are a far smoke rising", indeed.
Big thanks, guys; responses on your walls. Heard from Howie that they're looking at this piece in class today, and I'm honored. Again, thanks to all.
Powerful stuff that made me think. I love when that happens. Seems embedded in a MUCH larger story.
Mark, I read this at cur.ren.cy and marveled. Now it's here. Rings true in my little town and likely all over. Still. *