A day came when she bought yards and yards of rich red satin and covered the beige walls of her cubicle with it. Draped it, did not tuck it in, did not follow the straight rigid grooves between the panels. She let it flow, cascading to the floor, where the excess undulated, like ripples in a pool of blood.
Then she bought a plush, white shag rug, covered the floor of her cubicle with it. It was too big, and the edges flowed up the cubicle walls, like snow drifts.
Her chair wheels couldn't roll on the rug. She sat on the floor and scooched under the desk, which she converted into a tent. She bought a lamp that looked like a woman's leg in a fishnet stocking, you know the one, to provide warm, yellow light under her desk.
She quit doing her work entirely, choosing instead to write poetry with an ostrich quill. Between bites of crisp watercress sandwiches and sips of fruity Earl Grey tea, she composed love poems to the guy in the next cube over. She signed each with a kiss from her fire-engine red pursed lipsticked lips.
She cut a heart-shaped hole through the fabric and cardboard of the cubicle wall to deliver the poems to her dearest darling. She rolled and tied each with a red ribbon.
When she was physically hauled out from under her desk by two burly security guards, her Wedgewood cup fell from her hand to the rug. It landed, unbroken, but the weak tea inside stained the otherwise spotless white rug. The guy in the next cube over noticed the stain and missed her.
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Inspired by my new day job.
(Published in Rosebud)
this made me quite sad. for the guy in the next cube. love the colors though and the central image of the rug. it also brings back memories about things like "the straight rigid grooves between the panels". daily dose of fascist geometry.
This is lovely; it has me rooting for her but that ache that starts in the first sentences, the knowing that she can't get away with it, becomes a reality and still hurts.
Good one. The ending is brautiganesque. She wasted her time, though, writing poems to a guy who can only miss her, but that's the cubic world, after all, lacking some elemental ferocity. fave
This is wonderful.
Yes, wonderful is the word I was going to use, too. So I will. Wonderful! *
Chin resting on hand, body squinching up to read the screen more closely, mouth spreading in a happy grin. Nice work. This is brilliant.
Whew! This was wonderful, just brilliant writing. Some great lines in here and the images. Brilliant!
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Oh, super. Love this. The perfect oddness of it. Love "fire-engine red pursed lipsticked lips." *
Dear Marcus, Susan, James, Kait, Boudreau, JP, Gloria, and Kathy, I'm deeply touched by your kind words! Thank you, you have definitely made the beige walls I'm sitting inside much brighter. Not red, mind you.
Lovely, particularly the last line. Who hasn't wanted to live in a red satin tent? *
I sit in my own cubicle as I write this. My partner receives icy hot stares, not love notes. My shag carpet is lime green, not white, so I can only identify with 99.3% of the character.
El fav-o-rito!
I wonder why more office workers don't do this. How about another cubicle story, this time with a happy ending?
She is joined by her friend, and they live happily ever after in their cozy little corner?
Lush, lyrical piece, so deep with the red and white it seems to swallow me up reading this, I'm down there with her. The end line is stunning
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Lovely. Love the ending. Love, love the deep rich red satin undulating like ripples in a pool of blood, right down to the plush white rug. Gorgeous use of colour and texture.
Lush and lyrical is right, and wonderfully juxtaposed by the office, and more than that, the cubist setting. This is really inventive, and while a bit heartbreaking, I adore how she takes her beige world - the red velvet, snowdrift carpet, the tent, and transforms it... why or why is that considered an act of insanity?! *
This was fun to imagine. Enjoyed it!
oh yes, this is fantastic. Late to the party I am on this wonder! Wow, Lynn, just perfect.
You have received so any positive comments about this imaginative work. I agree with all of them.
The Lady of Shallot ca. 3rd millenium. Very nice!
Absolutely love this.