Help Me Rhonda
by David James
Walking to class, Paula routinely fishes around in her purse to be sure the condom she thinks of as a close friend, even naming it Rhonda, is in there to help her avoid a pregnancy yet, even so, Paula admits that sometimes she daydreams in that boring economics class, wondering how exciting it would be to make wild, scary, shivering, unbridled, unprotected sex…then she pauses...and reaches down in her purse….
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More of the same single sentence stuff.
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perfect flash. **
Thanks for the earworms--He'p me, Rhonda, he'p he'p me, Rhonda...Hey, hey Paula... *
Fine fetish flash. *
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I loved this one.*
Discretion always being the better part of valor.
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Yeah. What Chris said.
What Steven said Chris said. And the first half of what Gary H said, but not the second half. And all of what Amanda said. And the second word of what Gary P said. And just the * part of what Matthew said, because I don't understand any of the rest of it so can't echo his sentiment though I do respect his observations and enthusiasm, I really do. And the first and the third part of what Tara said, because I don't want to steal her whole comment, I mean, people should retain the right to some originality in comments,and not just go around stealing their entire comments, because that would just be rude, but part of comment, I could justify stealing part of a comment, though here I have actually stolen whole comments, so I think in some cases it is justified, but you've got to have a doctor's note and permission from a consenting adult, both of which I have, so it's okay.
What Sally said.
DAVID! This is exactly what I was talking about. This wanton comment stealing has GOT to stop. You obviously do not have a medical clearance, nor a note from a consenting adult, so...
So stop it!
What David said.
Yes.
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I really do love this one - so much going on.,
*Modern high school life in 72 words. Great flash, David. Is Sally okay, do you think?
Prufrock *
Sally is Sally, Nonnie. And, I like her that way. I think we all do.
Thanks. I identify with this one on two levels. One is that I used to say that, "Help me,Rhonda," and then I wrote something about a character named Rhonda in need of help. That is one. Two is the purse condom. I identify with that. I never named my period or my 2nd, 3rd, and 4th cars or the purse condom. *
No. Because so many said yes. *
Yes! And now I'd like to see the same story from Rhonda's point of view ...
Thanks for reading this one, folks.