by Darryl Price
and say did you know it was written just for
you? But I will. No one will walk up to
you on the busy street one day and say did
you know he loved you this much? But I'm telling you
now. What good
would a pyramid be or a hanging
garden or a starry night without your delightful creases capturing
the ripening songs in their own wondrous folds? I want
to be where you are. Not to travel not to
stand
before a charming place nor to be present where
you are not but always exactly where you are. What
good would it do flying in a car or on
the back of a horse or sleeping under an arousal
of spread leaves if
there was not your arm to
touch your hair to sift next to mine your face
to press up against? I get it now. That song.
Nothing Compares.
How'd I ever come so close to this falling off the
edge of a clearly unfocused notion of just one heart beating? A little
bit more and I'll be buzzing
to flying pieces like
the moment already gone then I'll be becoming your poet from
a completely different angle and you'll still be living in
the same world as my love. Somebody please find her
and give her her poem. Do this for me. She
is the only true reason I still want to believe
in this dream of a world. Anyone can view our story for its sorry
truth. I was once with her and without her. There
was no other way I could function. I know she
deserves only best love. Crack open this heart then and
eat what's left together. But that's for later. Right now
I just want you to know that these feelings still
exist in our time. May I never utter a false
word again but always keep her name where I am going.
original version
No One Will Ever Give You This Poem
and say did you know it was written for
you? But I will. No one will walk up to
you on the street some day and say he loved
you so. But I'm telling you now. What good
would a pyramid be or a hanging
garden or a starry night without your
delightful creases capturing the songs
in their own wondrous folds? I want to be
where you are. Not to travel not to stand
before a charming place nor to be present
where you are not but always where you are.
What good would it do flying in a car
or on the back of a horse or sleeping
under an arousal of spread leaves if
there was not your arm to touch your hair to
sift next to me your face to press against?
I get it now. That song. Nothing Compares.
How'd I come up to this edge of notions?
A little bit more and I'll be buzzing
to pieces like a moment then I'll be
becoming from a completely different
angle and you'll be living still in
the same world as my love. Somebody please
find her and give her her poem. Do this
for me. She is the only reason I
believe in this world. Anyone can view
this story. I was once with her without
her. There was no other way. I know she
deserves real truth. Crack open this heart then
eat what's left together. But that's for later.
Right now I just want you to know that
these feelings exist in our time. May I
never utter a false dream again but
always keep your name where I am going.
(an original draft of many)
and say did you know it was written just forby Darryl Price
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There is a certain feeling that consumes everything else about you, the air,the minutes,the daylight. It demands recognition. Unfortunately words do not do it justice, but being a poet I have to give it a try anyway. Besides I want these words to be alive in the world. Printed somewhere, so that one soul maybe might say, ah, that is it, that is what I am looking for,that is what it feels like to try to say it out loud.
Original version up at Ramshackle Review thanks to Mark Reep.
love in the present moment - i don't really know anybody who does this better than you. ***
Marcus,thank you so much. I keep trying to write this poem. So far I've failed each time but I'm getting closer. It's something I want to give to the world. The words to say love is a real feeling that remains here with us always.
"May I / never utter a false dream again but / always keep your name where I am going"
Amazing statement eloquently phrased.
"Somebody please / find her and give her her poem."
Yes.
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Thanks, Bill!
Fave!
Enjoyed.
Love is a difficult thing to comprehend, much less define. This helps.
Your poetry, like love, is a real feeling that remains here with us always. I love it.
in the trance.
I know and understand. Nice poem.
Thanks, Phoebe. I'm glad you liked it.
"an arousal of spread leaves"
wow...that alone is worth a star, Darryl, and all of this is lovely...I want to be where you are is the simple fact of love. *
Beautiful. Very. Love this, your poet pal
Love how this opens up and up onto "an arousal of spread leaves" -- wonderful, yes. thanks for sharing it here -
The arousal is amazing! Love this! ****
I get it now. That song. Nothing Compares.
well, yes
2 u
that big open heart, man
invites us all in
poetry of love is almost always embarassing, like love letters, the most democratic form of writing,
makes fools of us all.
and what's wrong with that/
i'd like to know?
you know the rest of the story.... *
The big love that's always present in your poetry is front and center in this piece, Darryl.
The way you always tackle that theme of big love, bigger, the biggest love, is something to watch, man. Something to behold. To do so this well and so consistently and in so many different ways is something to stand back and just take in and truly appreciate on a craft level and on a human level.
This, like a lot of your other works, is a flower handed to us all, D. Thanks for that.
I love this - I'm with Sheldon - you tackle the big themes with such wonder.
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Thank you Marcus, Bill, Kari, Sam,James, J.Mykell,Meg, Phoebe,Kathy,Heather, Sara,Kim,Gary,Sheldon,and Marcelle. You fill my heart.
Holy enjambment Batman! I'm mesmerized.
Darryl, there are hearts and there are hearts. Yours is like a continent.
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a lovely poem. I'll take it anytime.