Upon reading your manuscript, we've decided to eviscerate you, couple our criticism with a searing personal attack. Your writing offended the editors greatly, and we would select certain word choices we disliked, but we truly hated every word, including mere articles, prepositions, and conjunctions. Thanks to your writing, we can no longer enjoy eating jambalaya, dancing the jitterbug, speaking Hungarian.
Your work, if work is what we should call it, was senseless (but not artistically “senseless,” like absurdist or nihilist), plotless if you even attempted plot, and pointless. It pains us to waste energy discussing it, though we feel the words drivel, garbage, and nonsense are appropriate.
We ask that you never submit another word to us, and, for the world's betterment, to any other existing or future medium. Do not self-publish—there are legal maneuvers we would pursue for humanity's good. We would suggest you burn your existing manuscripts but don't want to waste precious oxygen. Recycle but we fear someone handling your material before it's reduced to pulp will read one letter.
Our recommendation: place all of your work in a metal box. Sail the Pacific Ocean and drop it into the Mariana Trench. Let it sink to the world's deepest point. Pray no one ever recovers it.
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A rejection. Appearing previously at my blog. Also published at Feathertale:
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haha! gawd this was well-timed for me today. PERFECTION, CB.
Beyond funny. I fear your putting this out there may bring it one day to my mailbox.
Good piece, Christian. Enjoyed it. Great closing.
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"Thanks to your writing, we can no longer enjoy eating jambalaya, dancing the jitterbug, speaking Hungarian."
HAHAHAHA!!! This is therapy, writer's therapy, reading this. Thank you for going too far. I love the idea, it is like the Don Rickles rejection letter.
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"Thanks to your writing, we can no longer enjoy eating jambalaya, dancing the jitterbug, speaking Hungarian."
HAHAHAHA!!! This is therapy, writer's therapy, reading this. Thank you for going too far. I love the idea, it is like the Don Rickles rejection letter.
reminds me of "Dexter"...the way he dropped all the bodies to the ocean floor but they were still found
this is funny shit, especially the "don't self publish" part
Boy, we're really on a roll here with the stories of the writing life--we should post them all to a central group!
This is just great; I laughed as I mumbled it aloud since I figure the editor's voice in frustration sounds much like mine when on the receiving end of a rejection letter. Loved it!
Awesome. This one's even better than this one (from Billy Madison): "Mr. Madison, what you've just said is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever heard. At no point in your rambling, incoherent response were you even close to anything that could be considered a rational thought. Everyone in this room is now dumber for having listened to it. I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul."
FUNNY AS ALL HELL!!
Thanks, everyone, for reading and commenting! Glad you found it funny!
I really enjoyed this, Christian - very funny. Being from south Louisiana, I wondering how jambalaya would fit in here...
This sounds familiar. Are you sure you didn't steal one of my rejection letters? Not just a star, but All Star.
AHAHAHHAHA! I just read this again and I noticed the tags! HAHAAHAH!
This is so freakin' funny.
excellen sharp and final. great use of alliteration throughout. reminded me of dylan moran's comedic genius (http://bit.ly/asqBf8). i like how you make "autodafe" sound harmless. i also like how this rejection sings a higher praise of whatever was submitted that brought this on than any regular, boring acceptance ever could. personally, i would have gone for outer space. thanks to you, my favorite word for today is: whiplash.
Thanks, Foster, Jack, Jason (again! I'm thrilled you came back and read it again!), Ajay, and Finnegan!
Finnegan, thanks for the link to the video (funny stuff, by the way, and worth it for everyone else to check out). I pondered outer space for this work.
If I had a rejection like this, I'd frame it, YouTube it, and by billboard space! An obvious success-
hee hee! I like the part about wasting oxygen if the story was burned. Nice one!
oh and btw, do you mind if we place you on our mailing list? Ha - a classic CB.
Ah, Christian - What a great way to start my day. The story made me laugh and when I read your tags I nearly spit my coffee all over my keyboard. Hee Haw!
Thanks, Bonnie, Michael S. (the mailing list thing would've been an excellent P.S.), and Michael D.!
very funny story, I really enjoyed it. It rings true to today's writers!
Thank you, Anne!
Inspiration for us all!
Thanks, Thomas!
I read somewhere James Joyce wallpappered his entire bathroom walls with his reject letter.
This is a great fun read
Thanks, Estelle!