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Shameless pilfering from masters Stevens and Poe (italics a signpost – apart from musical shorthand.) Beth Orton, homage to you as well.
An indecipherable cause?
Birds were shipped to the the U.S. Geological Survey’s National Wildlife Health Center in Madison, Wisconsin – as well as studied locally by two agencies. All kinds of explanations flew – from fireworks to fracking. The rather prompt verdict was blunt force trauma. No tall buildings, and the birds fell all at the same instant. But – case closed. (I've checked in every few years, no revisions to the verdict.) https://www.smithsonianmag.com/smithsonian-institution/blackbird-deaths-explained-smithsonian-bird-curator-weighs-in-4882099/
Published first at 52/250 A Year in Flash: week 45: 'broken shells.' Many thanks to Michelle, John, and Walter.
excellent. i needed something a little more challenging & experimental this morning to wake up and this fit the bill just right. XII is my favorite, i think though i do love the ending. like the title, date and place help ground it.
Happy me: this from you, Marcus. My utmost appreciation in wee night hours of New York.
I read this three times, just because it is so beautiful and elegant.
Beebe ... think representational pudding.
Catherine this is whimsical, artistic, meta-something, quite lovely, sub-conscious/blatant, beyond clever, and generally fine.
fav (think standing ovation, 47 Texans in Stetsons, shouting "Brava!" "Encore!" "Author") Sorry, got carried away.
God, you know you are in something special when your mind runs across "Wingless and withered, by the blunt force of earth". Seriously, this is stunning, Catherine.
Frankie, so so lovely to hear - I am moved. I'm grateful for your reading,thank you for coming and commenting.
James, you writer's dream of a reading writer, I bow to you. (Short hand: gosh!) Please, by all means, get carried away!
Lou! I am thrilled you can to see me. Very happy-making. And talking about what you say... is just beyond me. My humble thanks. (But big thanks, to be sure.)
Catherine: How do I love this? Let me count the ways: every singular roman numeral made me rant, then rave. You are the High Priestess of the written word. The long and short of it. The beginning at the end. ********************
Yes, stunning work, love the images and the music.
Thank you, (all ways), Robert and David. I appreciate your generous comments very much.